Date: 03/05/11 09:31 pm Title: Sacred
*SOB* Oh lord, noooo Bill can't die! I am so behind and I'm kinda glad now cause I don't have to wait to know what happens. Great chapter darling *smooshes*
Author's Response: Good thing you didn't have a wait, yes! I think I upset a lot of people. ;) Thank you so much!
Date: 03/05/11 12:49 pm Title: Untouched
*_* i have tears in my eyes, that was such a beautiful chapter! Really love the l'astre paragraph, how they have a second chance and dont want to want to waste it! And omg. This was, hands down the most perfect, intense and beautiful reunion/ love making scene in the history of ever... So so so well done, youre the best! Thank you so much for this brilliant chaptr!
Author's Response: Ohh I'm so happy to hear that! Thank you. *_* They do have a second chance, and they're going to hold onto each other with everything they have. Thank you very much for reading! I really really appreciate your comments.
Date: 03/05/11 11:06 am Title: Untouched
I'm still reading. Finding the time to review has become much more difficult then it used to. I really love this story. I'm still very excited to see updates. The characters are amazing. The au plot is Very believeable. I cant predict what will happen next. It's all exactly what I want from a story. I really enjoy it.
Author's Response: I'm glad to hear it! Very pleased you're excited for updates and that you're into the characters and the story. And, I like to be a little unpredictable! ;) Hope you enjoy the rest as well.
Date: 03/05/11 09:14 am Title: Untouched
Tom's uneasy, I'm uneasy. :C
BUT....that amazingly long love-making scene helped soothe my fears the same way it did him.
I don't know what the future will bring or if that will be the last of HIM, but I know that they will not be caught unprepared the next time.
Tom already learned the hard way (twice now and the 2nd being the worst) what being unprepared was like.
You chose your allies, so now you plan and act accordingly.
I love these guys so much, Tay. I never give up on them. Ever.
They are truly a single unit and I couldn't love them any less than.
Or you.
*hugs*
Author's Response: Tom's got good instincts.
Glad you enjoyed their lovemaking! Yes, they definitely needed time to be together and reaffirm their bonds. Tom will NEVER be that unprepared again...he's going to become the plotter, the mastermind.
Thank you! I'm so happy you love these boys so much, it means a lot to me. *hugs*
Date: 03/05/11 09:00 am Title: Untouched
Hey i absolutely love this story; I think you handled both of their different personalities really well; is there going to be 4 total? Where they "finish what they started" :D?
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed that bit! Annnnnd, read the last chapter to find out. ;D Thanks for your review!
Date: 03/05/11 04:32 am Title: Untouched
Haha, you know I'm attached to the characters (ALL the characters) when I enjoy the party and seeing them all socialize more than the hot sex!
I've really, really enjoyed this installment of the Nephilim stories, and I can't wait to see how it wraps up in the next chapter!
Author's Response: Ooh, awesome! ♥ That tickles me. I wanted to make the party a bit longer but it would have felt a bit gratuitous if I had. ;)
I'm so pleased you've enjoyed it! Next one will be even plottier and more action-packed.
Date: 03/05/11 03:58 am Title: Untouched
A very satisfying chapter. Thanks for the update. I hope your next week is better.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm really happy you enjoyed it! Yeah, this week was much better. :)
Date: 03/05/11 03:53 am Title: Untouched
All that and they hadn't even seen his penis. well huh, I had a nice review planned, then that came along, cracked me up, and took center stage as my favorite line from the chapter.
but that aside, I loved that they made love, it's been a while since we got to see them take care and take their time while enjoying one another. :)
it makes me sad that this is going to end soon, this pair is one of my absolute favorite versions of the twins...you've done a beautiful job, as you always do, and I'm so sorry that your week has been anything less than you deserve :(
have strength and believe in yourself, you're worth it.
Author's Response: *snickers* Tom always thinks very highly of his penis, don't you know!
They definitely made love, and took their time pleasuring one another. I'm sad the story came to a close at last, as well! I'm happy you enjoyed the story.
It was health concerns, really - some personally scary stuff - and it's clearing up now but ugh, I felt so bad.
Date: 03/05/11 02:56 am Title: Untouched
:fans self:
Those Nephilim are a strange bunch, insulting people like that. I'm sure he'll regret it soon enough. And oh, to be at that party to watch Kory try to hit on Sabina and the like. ;)
Author's Response: Hee! Glad you enjoyed that bit. ;)
Ohh I'm not sure Tom was quite "on" with that assessment, but it's certainly an interesting theory! And oh my yes. Kory would hit on anything that isn't nailed down and maybe even a few that are. The real question is: WOULD HE TRY TO HIT ON SIMONE? And, what would Tom do about it?
Date: 03/01/11 12:20 pm Title: The Beginning is the End is the Beginning
Oh....oh, Tay...
I can't...I can't EVEN...*goess in the corner to cry, snuggling with the twins from afar*
But..but...WHAT DID JORG MEAN BY THAT?? I CAN'T TRUST HIM!!!
As long as Tom doesn't, I can't either!
But OH GOD BILL!!!! *flails and cries happy tears*
So much to love, so so so much. Oh honey, you've made me super happy, and I think Tom is beyond overjoyed right now to do TWIN/MATE things with his Bill!!
LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE!
Thank you, thank you, thank you!!!
Author's Response: Aw, Rose. *holds you*
Of course I couldn't make it permanent. The twins need to stay with each other here in this life! ;)
As for Jorg...absolutely no trusting him! But Bill is safe with his Tom now. And yes, Tom has much plans to renew their twintimate bond. ♥ You are so, so welcome. Thank you for loving these boys as much as you do. ♥
Date: 02/27/11 02:33 pm Title: i burn
Ok, You have my trust b29;
Author's Response: Thank you, always good to know. ♥
Date: 02/27/11 02:32 pm Title: i burn
OHHOHHH!!!! Thankuuu :D Damn, ur just too smart, tyy!! :DDDD
Author's Response: Whoops, it looks like I replied to that twice or something? Haha, sorry!
Date: 02/26/11 01:07 am Title: The Beginning is the End is the Beginning
*squeals with joy*
:DD
Author's Response: Hee heeee. Wait until you read the next chapter. ;) Glad to make you squeal with joy!
Date: 02/25/11 06:20 pm Title: The Beginning is the End is the Beginning
Oh wow. That was breathtaking. The way you describe Tom's pain made me feel it, my heart totally broke along Tom's and then was mended back with this amazing sleeping beauty kiss. Love the fact that Tom was the one to bring Bill back to life and that he didn't have to think a second about his decision. Beautiful, that was all so powerful, intense and perfect! Really like how Tom will always have a one track mind and think about the nearest bed =P
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so happy you were so swept away by the story! :) Yes, Tom absolutely had to bring Bill back - there wasn't even a decision! I'm really honored you think so highly about the chapter. And, hehe, Tom definitely needs to, ahem, reaffirm their bond. ;) Thanks so much for your lovely comment!
Date: 02/25/11 04:26 pm Title: The Beginning is the End is the Beginning
I was so afraid that Bill was dead "for real"... I'm glad Tom could save him but I wonder why their father didn't kill them both yet...
I guess we'll see that later
Author's Response: I just couldn't leave him that way of course! As for their father, yes. ._. All will be revealed...in time.
Date: 02/25/11 02:37 pm Title: The Beginning is the End is the Beginning
oh oh oh, i am SOO SOOOOOOO HAPPY that bill is back...GOD that was like two days of bad feeling. lol.
yes i know the plot is amazing and there are important things to come, but all i can think about is how i hope their frequent, loud sex life bothers some ppl at orion...like Kellan for example...by living together, how together did she mean they are living? ;) id like them to embarrass everyone at least once xD just like old times at Bill's old flat...
Author's Response: I'm happy you're happy and come on! You knew I couldn't just leave it there! ;)
Hehe...yes, I think their sex life probably bothered everyone for a few weeks. JUST like old times. :D
Date: 02/25/11 08:39 am Title: i burn
OMG >_> THAT THE HELL IS HAPPENING TO MY REVIEWS?!?! They always get cut off ! >___
Author's Response: It's the < that does it - when you just type it in that way, it acts as an HTML tag. :o Sorry you're having trouble with it! I don't like it when your reviews get cut off. ;_;
Date: 02/25/11 05:59 am Title: The Beginning is the End is the Beginning
Only two chapters? D: and then it is the end? O.O Damn, not looking forward to that.
I think Jorg will come back for them, but they have Vergil and Dante(??) on their side, and they succeed. And Orion, comes when the battle is done, so they can get a slap in the face : ))) I dont like them, too desperate for their own good ._.
ehhe!
Nice story. you are my only favorite Author. Hmf:3
Author's Response: Two chapters and then the end! :D But we shall see what happens next... thank you! Thank is an amazing compliment, I really appreciate it. ♥ Thanks so much and I hope you enjoy the next chapter too!
Date: 02/25/11 05:35 am Title: The Beginning is the End is the Beginning
Thank god for life-giving kisses. =)
Author's Response: So very pleased you enjoyed it. ♥
Date: 02/25/11 03:48 am Title: The Beginning is the End is the Beginning
Zomg! o/
I'm glad I didn't read the previous chapter when it first came up, cause I would have died waiting for this one. Brilliantly executed, I didn't see Bill actually dying coming at all. I love how Tom was able to save him though, even if it is fluffy. :P I love how Bill was all like omg school! Shows! You just DIED. /facepalm
How did Jorg get into the city in the first place then?? I thought he blasted in, took Bill and blasted out so fast that the defense didn't have any time to react. I have no clue who was helping him though, since he obviously had help, or how he recruited people within the Wall... Because if he'd sent his own men their intentions would have shown while trying to get into the city, right? My only guess is someone is corrupt enough in Orion to have made a deal with Jorg, maybe in a vain attempt to make a coup and take the city between them... But that doesn't explain why Jorg let them live! I don't think he's the type to take pity. Perhaps that was the original plan, but after seeing the twins' relationship and the power between them he's decided that they can both be heirs, rule the house together and take the city/more land. HMMMMM.
Lol sorry for the essay. tl;dr AWESOME, MORE PLS!!
PS, their first priority has to be, ahem, each other. :D
Author's Response: ESSAYS ARE FINE, CARRY ON.
You timed it just right! ;) Now for the next chapter, the sexytiems runion. But I'm so glad it was suspenseful for you! And you know me...I just can't leave Bill gone without Tom.
Jorg has his methods. Secret methods. That would be telling. He didn't blast in, though - he blasted OUT. And it's not so much pity as...plans? He's definitely got plans. Good pondering, though.
First priority is ALWAYS each other. It's a weakness but also their greatest strength. :3