Date: 12/17/10 09:13 pm Title: my sweet prince
Still there even if my mind is quite off of this hour (3:20am)
Author's Response: Hee, thank you! ♥ I'm glad you're still with me.
Date: 12/17/10 08:03 am Title: my sweet prince
I love how Tom gets so possessive with Bill XD
Author's Response: Mmm, me too. ;) Thanks for your review!
Date: 12/16/10 11:45 pm Title: my sweet prince
LOL the counselor was so shocked, it was hilarious :D can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: They're just not prepared to deal with blunt Bill. ;) Thanks so much! Next chapter is up, hope you enjoy it! ♥
Date: 12/16/10 10:31 pm Title: my sweet prince
YAYYY for regulate updates for sure !! =D I love love love these twins! So possessive and in tune with each other...
The meeting was hilarious! Especially when she asked him how was is home environment... sexyyyy! Lol
Can’t wait to read more about Tom and his approach to criminal business operations! That's going to be interesting for sure =D
Author's Response: Yes, back to regular updates! :3 I'm far enough along that I can promise it. I'm so glad you enjoy these twins! Glad you enjoyed the meeting. ;D Hehe, his home environment is very sexy and not conducive to studying much at all. ;)
And Tom's perspective is a go! What a badass. Thank you for your review!
Date: 12/16/10 10:17 pm Title: my sweet prince
This story plays out like a movie because it is so well written and I can just picture everything unfolding so easily
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I definitely want it to be vivid for you, like watching a movie. ♥
Date: 12/16/10 10:06 pm Title: i burn
I'm so happy to see this series back! I love that Tom has absolutely no social skills and just blurts out whatever is on his mind :) And the idea of them throwing a housewarming party and not scaring everyone off by attacking each other is hilarious XD
Author's Response: I'm happy to bring it back after far too long of a wait! This Tom is so fun for me, so completely uninhibited, as much as he has no filter now, it's 100x worse with Nephilim Tom. ;) Omg I don't think they'd get through the whole housewarming. :o
Date: 12/16/10 09:55 pm Title: my sweet prince
"You and Tom are somewhat less overtly amorous?"
If I had been in Bill's place, I would have responded, "More or less... mostly less."
Mother always told me to tell the truth...or a variation of some sort. Simone should be happy that the twins are at least trying to make an effort to include her, despite being newly-mated!
Author's Response: Too right. ;D They are not much less amorous than the beginning. It might be a bit worse, even! Yes indeed, as close to truth as possible! And indeed, the twins - or Bill at least - are doing their best to make a connection with them. ♥ Thanks for your review!
Date: 12/15/10 08:56 pm Title: i burn
Omgyaaaaay more Nephilim!Twins! I love this universe, sew smexy *_* Can't wait what is next! :D
Author's Response: So glad you're excited to see them! ♥ We will bring the smexy and the plot. Thank you!
Date: 12/12/10 08:09 am Title: i burn
Hhaha!! Yay!! i realllllyy can't wait to read more1! :D
Author's Response: Hurrah, glad to get your interest! Thank you so much. :)
Date: 12/12/10 12:35 am Title: i burn
Nephilim twins are back, YAY!!!
A great introduction to their new adventures! ^^
Author's Response: After far too long of a hiatus! :) Thanks so much for your lovely review.
Date: 12/11/10 06:36 pm Title: i burn
ahhh I didn't publish the rest of my review but this is amazing i didn't want to read it at first beacause of the warning of MCD but then i read it and it was everything your amazing writing and the sex of course ;)! can't wait for moreeeee Xd
Author's Response: Oh, hehe! Thanks for coming back to give the rest! And you are the FIRST PERSON to notice that warning, lol! I'm really glad you're enjoying it so far, and lots more to come! :)
Date: 12/11/10 06:18 pm Title: i burn
I.Love.This
Author's Response: So glad! Thanks. :)
Date: 12/11/10 03:01 pm Title: i burn
THIS WHOLE CHAPTER SO MUCH! ♥!!!
THIS is what Nephilin twins is all about. Properly damage is just their trademark and it doesn't really matter what they do to try and avoid it.
They're just that awesome!
VERY intriguing and I can't wait for the next part to see how soon things will go to hell again and Tom has to get angry to get everyone to stop touching his Bill. XD
Author's Response: Awesome! ♥
Yep, I'm keeping it real. ;) They're just that into each other and heedless of their surroundings!
Thank you, I'm glad you're enjoying it so far! I really appreciate your review as always, love. ♥
Date: 12/11/10 02:20 am Title: i burn
OH, well if that's the case, i MUST review! ;) no but really, i like...freaked when i saw this was up. out loud. to the girl whose room i was in (she was on the phone) i was like, OH MY GOD! *squee* i am SO happy right nowwwww!!!!! lol. THANK YOU!! but don't finish it too fast or ill be sad, yah? i cant let go of this bill and tom ;_; theyre too amazing, and horny, and amazingly horny. i cant wait till the neighbors end up disgusted for some reason xD i hope it's really bad
Author's Response: Of course. ;) Thank you, wow, I'm honored to get such a squee! No worries, I won't finish it TOO quickly. And I can't promise future anything at this point, but one never knows where little side stories will fit into the timeline. ...Yes, they are amazingly horny and it's one of the things I enjoy about them. :3 Thanks so much for your review!
Date: 12/10/10 06:37 pm Title: i burn
Yay, the Nephilim twins are back. ♥ I've missed them.
Author's Response: I'm pleased to hear it! Hope you continue to enjoy. :D
Date: 12/10/10 01:45 pm Title: i burn
Nephilim twins! *flutterclaps* I've missed them. :) And this chapter doesn't disappoint! I love that they're so close and mated and in lust with each other, and yet Bill is also annoyed by Tom's different background and practical approach (vs. romantic). Poor Tom must be so confused: first Bill says they're married. When Tom asks "We are?" he sulks. And then he says they can't be. All the while Tom doesn't get why they should be, in the first place... hee! I like the conflict, I understand them both so well. I love that Tom notices when Bill is upset and wants to make it better. ♥ And when he asks Bill if he needs to do something, he already did make it better for Bill!
Tom muttering that he wants to have sex! :D He's adorable. (I realise that it's not the first word to spring to mind about a freakishly tall half-demon, but still! Reading about him at home with Bill, pouting because they're not having sex even though Bill kissed him, 'adorable' is the only word that fits, in my opinion. *g*) He should tease Bill sometimes. Maybe extensive rimming when Bill is telling him to fuck him? ...are they even able to tease each other in bed like that? I suspect it might take more self-control than they have. ô_ô
I love that they have a home that's exactly like they want because their wishes were taken into account during construction! ♥
Hee, Tom getting so agitated when they talk about Bushido. Who is dead. I really like their discussion and how you illustrate their differences -- Tom's territorial thinking and lack of empathy -- and also their similarities. Bill not having realised that accepting gifts might not be a good idea makes him more like Tom! Although the whole idea that accepting gifts means you need to "follow through" is such a twisted way to view human interaction. :/ The way you describe Tom, especially, is fascinating! I love how he's "responsive to Bill's cues." I'll be interested in reading Tom's pov -- does he see Bill the same way?
Bill and Tom are perfect for each other! ♥ I love the part where Bill thinks about that and gets all breathless and says "Do me." They're more about love and compatibility than I remembered, and it's awesome! And they're very much about the sex which I did remember. *g* I wonder if Tom saw Bill melting or getting hearts in his eyes or if he could sense (or read Bill's mind) Bill's train of thought. Or if he was having a serious discussion with Bill that Bill suddenly interrupted with that, and Tom had absolutely no problem with it. :D
"the offer of Tom's tongue in his mouth, slick and demanding." *____* This is so hot. I love how incredible urgent they both feel. All "Ooh, new house" in one moment and "Omg we haven't had sex in FOREVER" the next. :D I mean, it's funny but it's also so hot. *fans self* I love that Bill feels apprehensive when Tom tells him to turn around -- thinking he isn't that easy, hee! Isn't he? I'd say he is, for Tom. *g* And then Tom touches him and he forgets about his misgivings. Do they have some kind of telepathy, is it Tom who visions having Bill over the deck chair? Or does Bill's imagination respond to Tom's touch? I'm willing to believe either explanation.
I've always been a little distressed by the furniture wrecking, to be honest (I'm weird like that), but now... the chair giving out, them tumbling down, and still they keep going... I think I've seen the light. "that meant he knew he was about to bring Bill off," guh. I love that Tom knows and that it's his goal to make Bill come!
Bill in Tom's lap and kissing sounds so sweet! (Well, you know. As sweet as it would be during the frantic second round of sex. *g*) I love that Bill is already thinking about continuing.
Hee, Tom not caring that someone is on the door while Bill is excited about their very first guest! They're quite a pair. *g* Sabina seems very interesting! I love that she only brings a gift basket to them, something so mundane and small talk filled and boring, and yet the scene is full of interesting details. Such as Tom's inappropriateness, Sabina annoying Tom with comments like calling them babies, and her flirty smile that makes Bill narrow his eyes. I love the last one. :D And is Tom personally offended by Sabina hoping their union lasts? I love that Bill is all about the manners, at first, but when Sabina lingers, he has to fight the urge to tell her that they're going to have more sex now, kthx.
Tom sweeping Bill off his feet! ♥ I know Bill wouldn't have liked it in other circumstances but I LOVE it. Married sex! This is wonderful!
Author's Response: I missed them too, I'm so pleased you all have been waiting for more of these boys! ♥ They are definitely still very much in lust and mated and yet still in that getting used to one another stage, you know? And Bill occasionally gives somewhat conflicting signals. ;)
Sex is very high on Tom's priority list. And he definitely pouts. He wouldn't call it that, but he does. But teasing...yeeeees, they should get to that point, with Tom teasing Bill for quite a while before giving him what he wants. :D I LIKE IT. But I too am not sure if they have the self-control at this point.
It's everyone's great dream! Lucky boys. ...Enterprising boys.
Tom is STILL all riled up over Bushido. And they get a bit of post-facto insight into the situation but ultimately it doesn't change anything, you know? And this is one where I switch POVs and you still want more! ;)
They are so very perfect for each other. They don't call it love, most of the time, but it really is. They're so completely devoted to each other. Love is putting someone else ahead of your own needs and desires, and they do it in so many ways. ...Tom has absolutely no problem doing Bill whenever Bill seems to need it. ;D
Hey hey, it's been ALL DAY. They needed to BONE, you know? I think they're close enough in their desires that it's very similar to telepathy. They can definitely picture having each other in the same way, you know.
The whole thing with the furniture-wrecking, for me, is the two of them being SO into what they're doing, and so "incidentally" powerful, that they destroy things around them and they're so hot for each other they barely notice. :D
Once is just not enough. They need to go and do it again RIGHT AWAY.
I totally know someone like Sabina. >_> She doesn't mean to be offensive. She just is! Annnnd they're off to have another round of married sex. My favorite kind!
Date: 12/10/10 01:32 pm Title: i burn
Lovely to be back in the nephilim world. The neighbours will be in a shock living near newlymated twins though.
Author's Response: Thank you! It's great to be sharing them once more. And oohhh yes, I think the neighbors will be looking into reinforcing their soundproofing. ;D
Date: 12/10/10 01:13 pm Title: i burn
ANOTHER STORY FROM THIS SERIES!!! Gahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! Gahhhhhhhhhh! Gahhhhhhhh! And once more Gahhhhhhhh!
Author's Response: It took me long enough, right?? ;) Thank you! Very pleased there are so many "gahhhhh's" :D
Date: 12/10/10 12:53 pm Title: i burn
ok I will be really surpirsed if no one has meantioned this in any previouus reviews for this series, but as I didnt think about it before maybe no one else did either, these boys need to look into adamantium-enforced furniture and building materials...did that comment prove how droky I am?...I dunno...great start though. I don't like her... throwing out confusing signals...what a slut. eyeing them both up seperately, when shes already married. Its going to be interesting seeing how they handle entertaining...I'm not sure either of them could handle it well. can't wait for more!
Author's Response: They've definitely been trying to get reinforced furniture! I think adamantium has definitely snuck into the story, so you're not too dorky at all. ;) As for her I think she is just naturally flirtatious and thinks nothing of it! Thanks for your comment and I hope you enjoy more!
Date: 12/10/10 12:23 pm Title: i burn
LMAO I'm not sure that knowing that if I review they'll break something is a good thing.
OMG I totally squeed when I saw this, I've been hanging out for this. I love the thought of the twins having dinner parties with the neighbours *giggles*
Awesome as usual, I can't ever get enough of your Nephilim twins. *squishes*
Author's Response: They're going to break something anyhow. ;) Shh.
I'm really excited that you're so happy for more! And glad you're into my Nephilim twins. *hugs*
