Date: 01/29/11 10:05 am Title: Hot and Cold
*makes some noise*
Author's Response: Thank you! *____*
Date: 01/29/11 03:30 am Title: Hot and Cold
Oi I'm here! :DD I'm not much of a reviewer, but now I have to make exception 'cause I don't want you to stop updating!
This story has been and still are incredibly sexy and original! At least that's what I think! :))
Please, please don't stop this story coming! I don't even mind any long waitings when this just doesn't stop 'till the end! :)))
and btw. can't wait next ch!! ;DD
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you're still with me! :) I am so happy you still think it's sexy and original. And I'll do my best to push onward and finish! Thanks and hope you enjoy the next chapter.
Date: 01/28/11 11:13 pm Title: Hot and Cold
Of course I'm still with you and enjoying this more than ever!
Haha Georg is so asking for it, he should know better ! Love love love this fic, can't wait to read more as usual. Your updates are always the highlights of my day! =)
Author's Response: Hooray, and thank you! ...yes, poor Georg is just the brunt of their antics, always. ;) Sexy and otherwise. Thank you, I'm really happy you're still enjoying it so much!
Date: 01/28/11 04:53 pm Title: Hot and Cold
Mentors for the twins um? Win not...they can always TRY to do that lol
Hot sex was hot and poor Georg, always exposed to the twins sexiness, must be hard for him.
I'm looking forward to the K's meeting Bill & Tom
Author's Response: Haha, exactly, they can TRY. Glad you enjoyed their hot sex and yes! Georg's life is HARD. Thank you, hope you enjoy/enjoyed it! :D
Date: 01/28/11 11:47 am Title: Hot and Cold
I frown at Loire's way to show how confident he is that Alicia can do this! A little positive feedback never hurt anyone. I hope she gets paid huge amounts of money.
I love this glimpse of how others perceive the twins. Tom seems so potentially dangerous from their point of view! It's great. *g* It's also interesting that Alicia wonders if Tom has now turned to fulfilling his Nephilim drives when from my point of view it looks like their current situation is purely accidental. (Well, of course they didn't have to take over Bushido's enterprises but still, it wasn't something they were pursuing.)
Kory seems like an interesting person. I look forward to seeing more of him -- especially how he gets along with Tom and Bill! Kyle's not unkind "We'll bill you for it" makes me smile, hee.
I love reading about how beautiful Tom and Bill are! And reading about Tom's arrival feels surprisingly poignant, him telling that he's looking for his twin brother. Poor Tom! I'm so glad he found Bill. ♥
"Of course, he'd betrayed nothing" -- Bill is elite. :D
Omg I love this description: "Tom's hand was on his arm, locking in at his elbow joint, a thumb pressing into the tender skin at the hinge." It's so sexy and fun because I recognise it! And also fun (and sexy) because I knew right away what Tom wanted and how Bill would react to it. *g* I love that Gustav tells them to get a room. Hee! He's so brave, too. I think Tom's growl would upset most people.
I love Bill's stumbling -- and adjusting his jeans, hee. They're wonderfully desperate! And you write it so well. The dialogue is so urgent. "'Do it,' Bill moaned, pushing his hips up. 'Do it, stop talking about it.'" Why is it that while I sympathise with Bill at moments like this I also kind of want Tom to tease him a little? *g* I know you already said it isn't really possible for them but it's fun to think about it.
Hee, poor Georg! He really should know better, but I guess he's deeply convinced that he has a right to use the common areas without worrying about band mates having sex. I love how completely uncaring Tom and Bill are. Bill is more concerned about the dresser table than Georg. *g* It seems that Gustav understands them much better in this story. I really like how you write both Georg and Gustav here.
I love that Bill is still so private about sex. Their bond is such a joy to see. I love that when Bill tenses, seeing something suspicious, Tom is immediately aware that something is wrong.
"To be clear, he added, 'Let me do most of the talking.'" :D A necessary addition, I'd imagine! I really like how they talk about what to do -- Bill reminding Tom that this isn't their territory and stressing that they should be civilised.
I'm so interesting in seeing what happens! Whose pov will it be? I'd love to get Tom's, and it would be fascinating to get the Wynnes'. Nevertheless I think it's going to be really interesting to see the twins interact with other people who are not fully human. Will Tom finally get his wish and someone will recognise that they're mated right away? Kory seems like the kind of person who wouldn't respect that anyway, though... I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter. :)
Author's Response: Loire is so confident though! He doesn't even question her ability to accomplish it!
I'm glad to provide the outside POV! TOm is definitely dangerous to them. And Alicia assumes it is deliberate! It's her job.
Tom and Bill are always gorgeous. ;) And yes! It's interesting to think of what that search was like for Tom. Knowing about Bill, looking for him, wondering what he's going to be like in person...So intriguing!
Bill is pretty good. ;)
Yes, I love that moment! I had to repurpose it. Gustav is just very calm and laid-back and unbothered by much of anything. ;) Even Tom in growly mode.
I loooooove writing urgent twins, so much! They sex constantly in my head. :D I'd love to see Tom tease him a bit! But no, he just can't quite make him beg for it. :P
Georg SHOULD know better, but yet, he hasn't learned. ;P after repeated exposure. And Tom and Bill are just really concerned about their sex! Of course.
Bill is careless about others overhearing and whatnot...but that's because he's so into what he and Tom are doing! Everything else is just between the two of them.
Well, Tom thinks he's in charge! So Bill has to specify. ;) And Tom totally forgot it wasn't his territory.
Outsider POV! :D I am so glad you are enjoying it. ♥ Thank you for the lovely review!
Date: 01/28/11 09:26 am Title: Hot and Cold
Just wanted to leave a quick review to let you know that I'm still reading!! I don't get a chance to read as much since I've had my baby, but I'm still reading Nephilim twins and my beloved kits!!
Author's Response: I'm happy you're still with me! Congrats with your baby! :) Thank you for checking in. ♥
Date: 01/28/11 06:06 am Title: Hot and Cold
I am very much enjoying this series. keep up the great work. the amount of good plot you churn out on a daily basis is amazing.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Just what I need to hear. I really appreciate it, and hope you continue to enjoy~
Date: 01/28/11 05:42 am Title: i burn
I will never leave you! ;) You're my favorite author! And I DO want to see how this story ends =)
Author's Response: Thank you! I really hope you enjoy how the story ends. I'm so glad to hear I'm your favorite author, thanks so much. ♥
Date: 01/28/11 05:36 am Title: Hot and Cold
AYE. I am still with uu
Author's Response: Thank you for sticking with me! ♥
Date: 01/28/11 05:18 am Title: Hot and Cold
aw no, don't feel bad, it's still amazing, and maybe...some people from the previous installments just didnt notice it because it had been a while? or maybe they are the type to want to leave awesome alone and are afraid that they might not like where it ends up if they continue to read...:( I still really like it, I'm gonna be sad when it's over. all of my old faves have fallen into hiatus or abandonment except this one, and I'm so grateful. it's really rather sad to look at my tracked list and see that the oldest several pages remain populated by the same stories month after month, year after year.
I know it's rough when a story gets so long, as my only multi-chapter story thus far is now 40 chapters and running, over 120 thousand words (which has now taken me a little over a year to write thanks to business school), and I find myself often unable to get excited about where it's going and critical of where it's been. thats the problem with things people spend time over, when you look at it later, a lot of the time it seems to have lost something and isn't quite as good as you thought originally, but that isnt true, of course. it's a creator's changing perspective, but the product is still just as interesting to a first time viewer as ever :)
I hope that made some sense, it's late and I'm tired xP i'm definitely going to finish my next story before i post it, and keep it a reasonable 15-30 chapters max, depending on the length of each...
I really enjoyed their desperation and Gustav telling them to take it elsewhere...:) then Georg...haha. can't wait for more
Author's Response: Thank you! I dunno...I think I may have scared a lot of people away somehow! But yes, I am still plugging away even though it's been...dang...almost two years since I started this series!
That's a big big story! Good for you for sticking iwth it, I know it's hard to keep up momentum over such a long period of time. And very true with the creator's changing perspective...that definitely happens!
Thank you so much for your encouragement! Very much appreciate it. It's so hard to finish before you post though!
Glad you enjoyed them and yes, poor Georg! Thank you and I hope you continue to enjoy!
Date: 01/28/11 05:05 am Title: Hot and Cold
Hee...poor, poor Georg. Although, he should probably feel lucky to get a glimpse of that!
I like the Wynne brothers already, from what you've shown us of them. Maybe they'll end up being allies, instead of enemies?
I'm definitely sticking with this story. I love that we're getting somewhere in the whole Nephilim plot, and I want to see Tom eventually take on his father. I think this story might be my favorite of this universe, so don't feel discouraged!
Author's Response: Poor Georg indeed, but...in a way, he brings it on himself, you know!?
The Wynne brothers are so much fun for me to write. ...We'll see how it goes!
Thank you for sticking with me! We'll get there... *fits fingertips together*
Date: 01/28/11 03:44 am Title: Hot and Cold
I think it's interesting to see how others who haven't been seeing the whole story as we have can try to piece together the twins' motivations. Her reasoning make sense!
Poor Georg!
I wish Bill would listen to Tom about the training. Damnit, Bill, don't let that bite you in the ass later!
Loving this! And I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: I love doing outsider POVs! And yes, poor Georg. He just wants to go places without being assaulted by the vehement ~twinsex.~ Bill really...really...really should listen. :/ Thank you! I love that you're loving this!
Date: 01/28/11 02:43 am Title: Hot and Cold
I'M DEFINITELY WITH YOU! I adore all your fics, and to be completely honest, you're the only author that I read on this site anymore. I don't know what I'm gonna do when the time comes and you move on from this fandom (like many great authors have done) :""( That will truly be a sad day indeed. I always read all your chapters, but just completely HORRIBLE about reviewing. I vow to change that from now on. Anyway, I TOTALLY don't see the amount of sex as a negative at all. There is no wrong when it comes to twin smut imho. I swear, no one writes hotter smut than you. It's a nice balance because we get sexiness in this story and then the cute cuddly stuff with the kits. Everything is perfect, so don't think about it too much, and never question yourself and your writing! It's amazing! Keep up the great work! Regarding the whole WIP being too long, you update pretty frequently (there was a time when it seemed like everyday!) and so following the storyline isn't a problem. I really hope you won't give up on the Nephilim twins! I so love this series and Tom is so so so sexy in this universe.
Author's Response: Hurrah for that! :) Aw, that's quite a huge compliment, thank you! ...I want to stay with TH for a long time. ._. The twins keep giving me new ideas! Thank you for reviewing for me now? ♥ I can always use the encouragement, lol.
I hope everyone enjoyed it...it's the last one for a while! :P And thank you, and I'll be updating this a bit more frequently through the end! Thanks so much. :)
Date: 01/28/11 01:25 am Title: Hot and Cold
I love this.. I swear... People who just stop reading for no real reason arent true readers :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really happy you're still with me. :)
Date: 01/28/11 01:22 am Title: Hot and Cold
oh oh!! *waves hand excitedly* I'm still with you! Don't give up now!I am still desperate to see where this fic is gonna go.
I can't wait to see the convo with the Wynne brothers...thats gonna be interesting. I can feel it.
I don't understand why you would have lost readers. You write really well so i don't think it could be you,
the story is really unique and is updated pretty frequently...the only thing I can see being a problem is all them sex...but how is that a problem?
Anyway, don't give up. I still think this series is awesome, and am anxiously waiting for more. Keep up the great work.
Author's Response: Hurrah! Thank you for sticking with me. :)
The Wynne brothers are for the win. ;D I enjoy writing them, so much.
Thank you! ...and yes, there are people who have problems with too much sex at the expense of the plot. ._.
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoy it so much, and I really appreciate your opinion! Thanks so much for your review.
Date: 01/28/11 01:17 am Title: Hot and Cold
I never seem to review on these stories of yours for some reason. :/ I don't know what it is. But I'm doin' it now! (Forgiven?)
Don't give up on the story! I am still totally with you. I've read all the other ones, and as with everything you write, it of course has become a favorite. I'm always excited for a new post and to see what the boys get up to. Its where I get my twin action!
...In more ways than one :P
Author's Response: Absolutely! And thank you. ♥
I will do my best! I have about a chapter and a half left. :) I'm so glad you're reading this and excited to be with me on this installment! Thank you for sticking with me and there's more action coming up for sure! ...we'll see about more ways than one though. :B
Date: 01/28/11 12:54 am Title: Hot and Cold
I'M WITH YOU!!! I can't believe that people would abandon this fic! *mind boggle* Very curious to see what happens with Kyle and Kory. I love Georg's reaction to Bill and Tom's sex in the dressing room. 'boysex' *giggles* Love it honey, can't wait for more *smooshes*
Author's Response: Hooray, I'm so glad you're with me! And it's been happening with both my poor babies. :( But I'm glad you're still with me! Glad you enjoyed the chapter and poor Georg's distress. ;) Thanks so much for your review!
Date: 01/28/11 12:25 am Title: Hot and Cold
Before I move on to the twinthings (dfgj;df *_*) I've got to say, the Orion people are always so interesting. And their bits make me feel like I'm reading a novel instead of a fanfic! ...I might've told you that before. But seriously, it's neat how you can write that more professional world and then plunge into the twin bond.
ANYWAY. ON TO THE TWINS. Ngghh, I love how urgent they are right after the show. Holy shit, it's my favorite thing ever. I love that Tom doesn't stop reaming Bill even when Georg walks in, and I love also that it leads to this line: “Ahh, god! It reeks of boysex in here!” I cracked up the first time I read this, and I'm cracking up even more now. IT REEKS OF BOYSEX, just the way that's phrased is so... so... it's a thing of beauty, okay.
Ooh, I love how territorial Tom is, too. The way he forgot they were technically on someone else's turf? This is a Nephilim twin ready to expand the empire, hmmmm. I just get that feeling. :O
Author's Response: TWINTHINGS, YES. I HOPE YOU ENJOYED THE SEX, IT IS THE LAST WE WILL SEE FOR QUITE SOME TIME.
Sooooo, yes! Orion is definitely the shadowy corporation behind the scenes! I'm glad you enjoy the professional aspects. :3
Yes! Twins after the show! Enjoying one another the way they MUST. I love it too. :D And Georg really lets himself in for it. :P Good times. And yes! Every territory is Tom's territory, he wants to, um. Mark it. Or something. *cough* ...Thank you for your review, darling!
Date: 01/27/11 11:41 pm Title: Hot and Cold
I love this story so much but I gotta say sometimes theres just to much sex going on and then alittle of something else happening >.> But thats just me! Keep up the good work :D
Author's Response: I know...it's what they do. :o I hope you enjoy the next chapter! Thank you for your review. :)
Date: 01/24/11 01:44 pm Title: Release
Omg I love that Tom is able to find Bill always. ♥ I love the description of him heading home and just being drawn to somewhere else (because Bill is there).
Hugging when they meet again is love! And it's especially wonderful because I know they missed each other.
Hee, Tom saying "Not here" when Bill says he wants to have sex. He's talking to himself more than to Bill, I'd say. *g*
"If you're capable of driving while I am blowing you, then I'm not doing it right." Hee! I like that Bill is so scandalised by the suggestion. Their dynamic is really interesting: Bill not wanting to answer Tom's questions and yet wanting sex for real, too... but why doesn't he want to tell Tom where he's been? Is it some kind of a game for him, not to do everything Tom asks him to do (right away) or something like that?
Bill licking his lips and touching himself while poor Tom is driving is EVIL. I like it. *g*
Hee, I like that Bill says the audience wouldn't want to see him naked -- I like the parallel to RL Bill who's said that at least a couple of times. And they're both kind of wrong... imho.
You write distracted Tom so well and hilariously! I love that he doesn't remember Ms. Claiborn's name or who she is or why Bill went to see her.
I love frenzied twins. *____* I love that Bill teases Tom like that when he's driving and can't do anything about it, and I love how Tom reacts: growling when Bill touches himself because Tom wants to be touching Bill... lovely! Tom's need to touch Bill is tangible. I love it.
Hee, Bill's coy smile! It's so utterly pretend, and I love it. And I love Bill fleeing and telling Tom to catch him. ♥ I also love that Bill probably meant it to be a bit of fun while Tom takes it so seriously, tricking Bill into giving his location and preparing for the shower to be a diversion. As if Bill didn't WANT Tom to find him. :D
I approve of Tom not caring that his pants get soaking wet, or his dreads, just going in for Bill! And I was worried that they'd have to interrupt for getting lube -- I should have remembered that Tom is always prepared. *g*
This is so hot. *________* I love how they move together, like Bill arching (and driving Tom crazy -- which is good!), and Bill chanting Tom's name "as though incapable of any other word." Guh.
"'There?' he inquired, deliberately falling short." TEASING. *fans self* I love the description of their connection throughout the sex scene, too. Tom is so helpless -- even when he tries to stop "to give them a breather" he can't. I love that. It's a part of how they've missed each other their whole lives and also so, so sexy.
I love that there are funny moments, too, like Bill's "impression of sternness spoiled somewhat by the way his face was squashed full-press against the tiled wall." :D And their interaction is just lovely otherwise, too: Tom trying to present him not taking his pants off in a favourable light when Bill seems to disapprove; Tom being distracted by Bill licking his lips *____* and the decision that the bed is too far. And isn't it, all the way in the next room? They'd be mad to try and get there. *g*
Omg, I love that Bill looks mischievous like he's going to run away again, and Tom reacts to it immediately. It's so hot. I love that Bill giggles and Tom is maybe a bit rough with him -- and he seems to like it. *_____* The description of their climax is absolutely amazing. I love Bill being out of control, and Tom sensing Bill's orgasm so thoroughly (it's consistent characterisation and really intriguing!). And then they laugh and kiss! ♥ And say that they love each other. It's so lovely and unexpected -- I thought they might not say it because they already know. But clearly they know that sometimes it's good to say it anyway! And sometimes they touch and kiss for ages! Tenderness and sweetness in these twins is absolutely wonderful, it feels so unexpected and all the more heart-warming because of it.
I look forward to finding out what happens next! Although I do worry a bit... but they're half Nephilim, nothing too bad could happen to them, right?
Author's Response: Tom can never, ever lose Bill! ♥ Not so long as they live. :) And yes, he just turns his wheel automatically!
They're so tactile and cuddly, even when they want sex! And yes, Tom was definitely telling himself "not here."
Tom might have hurt Bill's feelings there! Implying he might still have the *concentration* to drive while Bill is orally pleasuring him! And it's less a game for Bill and more knowing that Tom will be extremely pissed off. :o Time for sex as distraction!
That was a deliberate parallel, Bill saying the audience wouldn't want to see him naked. ;) And YES, they're so wrong! I think he's being a bit self-deprecating and really knows, as Tom says, that the audience would like it TOO MUCH.
Tom wants to Do Him. That is the only thing that registers for him! And yeah, Tom's even possessive of Bill's hand on Bill. :D
Bill likes to PLAY at being coy. He knows it gets Tom all possessively riled up! And that leads them to lovely things! Mwahaha. And arching and teasing and running and chasing and sex in showers. :3
Hehe, I can't help but include the funny moments, you know? That's just all part and parcel! And yes, the bed is way way too far. ;)
It was so much fun, far too much fun to write the whole scene. :D Well, when Tom spends that much time away from his twin, he's more open about expressing that. And as for the two of them...yes! They touch and kiss for ages. :D They're not always rough.
Heh...um...well...SURE~! :D