Whoo hooo, take it off baby....*cough* I mean great chapter!! I loved Vergil's incredulous expression on realizing that the twins really are mated. As for choosing sides, well they kind of already have by fighting against their father. How strong of a demon is Jorg? Can the twins take him on by themselves? If not, can they possibly gain the allegiance of other houses to topple Jorg from being head of House Kaulitz? Loved this and can't wait for more as usual. *smooshes*

Author's Response: Bill will strip for YOU baby. ;D Yeah, that was a shock to Vergil; no one can believe it! As for Jorg...whether the twins could take him, together, remains to be seen... Thanks for the lovely review and I'm looking forward to posting more!

He's... interesting... And really, I have no clue to if they'll submit XD

Author's Response: Yes indeed! And...the twins, together, are VERY bad at bowing to anyone else. :P

I hope this review in particular makes Bill take off his boxers, the important piece xD obviously they won't make it on time to band practice lol.I don't know why but I had the impression the sparda twins were mated, you never wrote it directly but I though in Nephilim world the rare twins that existed were and that's why they were dangerou. Is Danted matted? I feel it would be interesting if he wasn't *love possessive tom*. apart from that I think it's a little too obvious that Tom can't simply ignore the treat, sooner or later someone included his father will try to fight him and they can't take it alone, the sparda twins couldn't, why could they? *even being mated what makes them stronger*

and again I liked the outsider pov :)

Author's Response: Bill takes them off again, and again, and again! ;) I'm sorry if I gave that impression! The Sparda twins were close, but never mated. Vergil has his own mate and Dante is still looking, at this point. Tom gets very possessive of Bill when unmated Nephilim are involved! ;) This was a difficult struggle for them to go through, glad you enjoyed this chapter and I hope you liked the rest of the story!

Thankuvm >-< Now you gave me a picture of Bill strippnig. THANKYOU >-

Author's Response: Very pleased to give you that image! ;D And, I think I know why the site has been cutting off your reviews - the left-facing ">" is an html tag, and it will wipe out everything after that tag. :o

Ohhh man. Also, this is what I think of every time Bill thinks about the many things on his to-do list:

"Tyrone Vergil, you know how much I love watching you work, but I've got my country's 500th anniversary to plan scholarship to keep, my wedding to arrange band practices and gigs to attend, my wife to murder and Guilder to frame for it twins to sex up and Orion to avoid; I'm swamped."

Author's Response: Bill is absolutely swamped! ;D I like your revised list, it's quite spot on. And I must keep you all in suspense!

I'm no sure Bill wears enough clothes for the amount of reviews… he might have to strip again, and again, and again :) Excellent as always!

Author's Response: Welllll, sometimes I wonder about that. ;) He wears a lot of bling too! Thanks so much for the review, I'm happy you thought it was excellent!

Sorry for the late review but I just want to say how much I love this chapter. I loved it from the beginning to the end. From Bill realizing how non-human Tom is, to how possessive Tom was over who was the first to deflower Bill that he was making growly noises without even realizing, and how Bill immediately picked up on Tom's train of thought and tried to soothe him. Also, the talk of babies was hilarious and I love how Bill is automatically assumed to be the one to carry the baby even if it's an impossibility for them to actually have a baby. I can imagine that if they could have kids, the baby would be crying and needing attention, while Tom just wants to have sex with his Bill. I would so so love to be able to read about them being parents but I know you're not intending to write mpreg for this story. Is there a possibility of an mpreg plot in a future story perhaps? Little Bills and Toms would be just too adorable for words and you write them so good as parents for their dogs that it would be amazing if they actually have babies to take care of together.

Author's Response: Thank you for any review! ♥ So pleased you enjoyed the chapter! Bill has to re-realize every now and again, you know? And yes, Tom very much wishes he had his brother's first time. ;_;

Tom is very dominant, physically, in this story even though Bill has him completely whipped! But, in spite of how wrapped up they are in each other I think they'd make good daddies. As long as they were after the honeymoon stage when they must "have" each other constantly. ;) As for whether there will be mpreg I cannot say! Every time I say "no" to something and claim I'll never write it, I end up...writing it.

I hope that they'll find an ally in the other twin. someone to help them take over their father

Author's Response: We shall see how it goes for them~

At first I was all "aww, no Tom and Bill." And then they start to talk about mated Nephilim. *___* "There's a lot of posturing and bristling!" I WANT TO SEE THAT. It would be so much fun! Can Tom and Bill run into Professor Vaille on campus? Or River? (Who's a sex demon! Surely that would be interesting to watch. What does being a sex demon even mean?) Or Cal Pierce. The city is swarming with mated Nephilim; surely sooner or later we'll see Tom and Bill bristling and doing hilarious things to protect their territory... right? :D

I'm really interested in learning more about the Sparda twins! They're twins! "they can relate with them on the twin level." ♥ I wonder what Vergil will say about Tom and Bill being mated, though.

Do we know what's happening that makes Alicia think that New York will be nothing but ruins in a few months? I love that she still thinks Tom and Bill will be there and near the top of the heap of debris, hee!

I love this: "If Alicia weren't immune to the niceties of interpersonal relationships, she supposed she'd find it incredibly engaging." :D I really like this particular interpersonal relationship! Also, Alicia is hardcore. In addition to being immune. *g*

I love that the Kaulitz twins are hugely important to Orion! And everyone, I guess. This is so interesting!

Sexy loving twins in bed! ♥ That makes me so happy. I love that Bill starts to talk about tattoos suddenly. I wonder what kind of a tattoo he'll get! And omg, I love that Bill wriggles away and says decisively that he's going to school, and then he drapes himself over Tom and practically clings to him so that Tom has to carry him to the bathroom. He's so conflicted and obviously wants to spend as much time as close to Tom as he ever can! It's lovely. I'm in awe of Tom's restraint, too! How come didn't he just flip Bill on his back? I would ha- um, I mean. I admire him for that. :)

(Omg is Tom going to kill me)

Yikes, Jorg's people! And Jorg himself? D: That sounds scary. Your question about Bill roaming freely without a body guard makes me nervous! But I trust that nothing too bad will happen... so I'm eager to read more! Update soon -- with ONSCREEN everything? *hopeful*

Author's Response: Hee, there's still some good info! And Arashi isn't quite right - it depends on the individual pairs involved. And, if you go back to the first story, you'll see Bill DOES have a brief run-in with River - knows what he is INSTANTLY. And yes, I think Tom would bristle when confronted with Shemyahza!

Vergil definitely has opinions and he's surprised to see a mated twin pair. ;) As is everyone else! Tom and Bill are just the exception for everything. ;)

Alicia thinks the issue with the twins could result in New York becoming smoking ruins! Especially if they're working to bring the city down from the inside, as she suspected.

Alicia is so hardcore. She grew up outside the wall, so she's very much invested in making sure humanity prevails or at least holds the line. And the Kaulitz twins are hugely important indeed! They really think the twins are an important piece on the chess board for the region, especially with the territory outside the Wall still unoccupied by any other Nephilim.

Just a little moment with the two of them. :3 Bill's been thinking about it for a while, I think, ever since they were reunited - he wants a tattoo to symbolize their relationship. And of course Tom will think of it as "his" claim mark ;) As for Tom...I'm sure in the early days Tom WOULD have just flipped him on his back and gone for it and Bill might have protested (a bit) but still cooperated enthusiastically. (Even while saying no, no. Hence the beginning of their happy games.)

Tom's comin' for youuuuu~

Bill is really quite careless and arrogant if you think about it! Annnnnnd we'll see. :D

Oh uh! trouble ahead.:S

Author's Response: LOTS OF IT. :x Thanks for your review!