Date: 02/25/11 03:44 am Title: The Beginning is the End is the Beginning
Oh, that was lovely. I absolutely adored Jorg's confusion when faced with Tom's love for Bill. Silly man (or demon, I suppose), underestimating the power of twin love.
Author's Response: It was completely baffling to him! His biggest downfall all along was underestimating the power of their twin love. :3 But there is more in store for them...it's not over yet, alas.
Date: 02/25/11 02:51 am Title: The Beginning is the End is the Beginning
I don't think that it's fair that Tom signed the twins up with Orion when they really didn't do much to help Tom rescued or bring Bill back to life. And now they have to be under Orion's clutches and carry out their demands? Also, I'm very curious about Jorg saying he "perceived no evil"...is he testing the twins in some way? Is there a potential for a happy ending with their father since Jorg could have taken them out but chose not to? He obviously needs Tom and now he knows how important Bill is to Tom, so I don't think he would try to kill Bill again...The bit about Bill getting the "bitch seat" cracked me up and Tom wanting to carry Bill all the way back like some caveman claiming his woman is hilarious to me. :D Awesome job as always and can't wait for more! Sad that there will only be 2 more chapters. :( Are you done with this 'verse or can we expect more?
Author's Response: Yeah...hindsight is pretty clear! We'll see how that plays out for them soon...
Very good! Absolutely Jorg was testing the twins. Annnd...the result? I cannot say! But JOrg definitely has his own motives. And Bill definitely hates being in the "bitch" seat. ;) Thank you so much! I'm happy you're looking forward to more - check out the next chapter, hope it fulfills your expectations. ;) Annnnd I'd intended this to be the last but we'll see about that. :)
Date: 02/25/11 12:57 am Title: The Beginning is the End is the Beginning
See I knew you couldn't kill our wonderful Bill. This was an amazingly wonderful chapter and I look forward to the conclusion of this story...and hope there will be another after this one cuz I don't think you can satisfactorily answer all those question on 2 more chapters, even with as long as your chapters are.
well, in reverse order,
most immediate priority would be sleep, then sex. Nothing like I died and you brought me back to life; we need to reaffirm our bond sex, at least I would imagine.
A very steep one methinks.
Maybe an uprising from those who were formerly Bushido's men? I wouldn't be surprised if we found out that they deliberately sent Tom to the other side of town that day out of some sort of deal with Jorg...but I may be a bit paranoid.
Yes, I believe Vergil is right.
Author's Response: Well! Technically I did! :[ But no, you're right, I couldn't leave him there. ♥ Very happy you enjoyed this chapter and augh, I was honestly hoping this would be the last installment but...we shall see, soon!
Hee. Very good points, all of those. ;) Sleep then sex...it's like you got a sneak peek at the next chapter!
Weeeeell...that's an interesting theory! A bit paranoid, we'll see how things play out though...
Vergil is pretty smart.
Date: 02/24/11 11:39 pm Title: The Beginning is the End is the Beginning
:)
What could he mean?? Also, Tom made a good choice with the whole choosing life over death thing. Now Orion had better not make Bill fail any worse than he already is or Simone will not be pleased.
Author's Response: It's an important question... And, yes, Tom got his priorities right. Annnnd we'll see what Orion has in store for them in the last chapter. :D
Date: 02/24/11 11:05 pm Title: The Beginning is the End is the Beginning
:-)
Author's Response: ♥
Date: 02/24/11 09:52 pm Title: The Beginning is the End is the Beginning
Yay! Ok like no more killings of the twins lolz I don't think my poor wittle heart can take it haha. But good chapter.
Author's Response: It was really difficult! ;~; Thank you, glad you enjoyed the chapter - hope you like the next one too! ;)
Date: 02/23/11 07:25 am Title: Sacred
O_o but but but ! Argggggg! I'm not even going to try and leave a cohérent review, i just want more please!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and wanting more! ♥ ♥ ♥
Date: 02/23/11 07:10 am Title: Sacred
I am gutted, broken inside out. Can't give more words because this hurts too much right now. I'm sorry.
Author's Response: I'm so sorry .__. I just hope the next update makes it worth the pain.
Date: 02/23/11 05:59 am Title: Sacred
You are just being mean to BIll D: Hmf, anyways I
Author's Response: I what? I what??? ...I must know!
Date: 02/23/11 05:13 am Title: Sacred
oh geez, what am evil cliffhanger!!!
Author's Response: I CAN'T HELP IT IT'S MY JOB
Date: 02/23/11 04:07 am Title: Sacred
Aaaaaahhhhhhhhh YOU EVIL WOMAN! That's one hell of a cliffhanger! My poor poor Bill! Please say Tom can revive him somehow and they live happily ever after! Soooooo goooood...it's gonna be agonizing to wait until the next chapter!
Author's Response: I'M SORRY FOR BEING EVIL BUT IT'S MY JOB. ;_; Very pleased you thought it was good and I hope you found the next chapter to be just as satisfying if not more!
Date: 02/23/11 02:42 am Title: Sacred
EVIL. You are evil.
Not a cliffhanger, indeed.
I loved the way Tom felt Bill during his chase, even at that moment he felt the spark go out. Devastating, but so beautifully done.
Author's Response: I, um. Hehe. Sorry?
I'm glad you enjoyed it and extremely proud that you thought it was devastating and well done.
Date: 02/23/11 02:32 am Title: Sacred
not okay! *sob, hic, roommate tries to console* nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ;_; how can i go on??? its just not righttttttt oh godddd T-T she says to just read another story where he's alive, but she doesnt get it!! it wont be the same billlllllllll waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh im just gonna go back to the fetal position ive been in for the past ten minutes and try to get over this...
Author's Response: *consoles* Well, I hope the next chapter made it better? ;_; I felt really bad about it too... *hugs* Thank you for the review and I'm proud that it affected you so strongly. ;_;
Date: 02/23/11 01:26 am Title: Sacred
"Bill was out there, and Tom was going to find him. Or avenge him." hhmmm, that warmed my lil tainted heart. oh and by the way... i mean this is the most sweetest way impossible... you know i love your writing and i wouldnt stop even if my life depended on it... but seriously.... i hate.... stupid cliffhangers! i know you warned us... but i didnt think it was going to be like THAT!
Author's Response: I'm glad it warmed your heart and...I'm sorry about the cliffhangers! It's for the suspense of it all. ._. Thank you for sticking with me and for your review!
Date: 02/23/11 12:58 am Title: i burn
Oh and I forgot to mention in my first review... OH MEIN GOTT YOU KILLED BILL!!!
Author's Response: ACK I'M SO SORRY! But I did put the warning on, right from the beginning! ;)
Date: 02/23/11 12:52 am Title: Sacred
I didnt even know you updated 4 more chapters! *bad gurl, slaps own wrist* BUT I guess thats a good thing since I didnt have to wait for updates, well I have to now since I'm all caught up! But Oh mein Gott I squeeled when Virgil appeared! Although I love Dante more *I am a HUGE fan of Devil May Cry* and are we gonna see him in the future?
Author's Response: Lots for you to read and it's almost over! I hope you continue to enjoy the rest. :D No Dante in this particular story but he has appeared in some others in this universe. :) Thanks so much for the review!
Date: 02/23/11 12:06 am Title: Sacred
No!!!! Bill!!! Where is Tom?! So sad ;(
Author's Response: .____. Sorry to make you sad! I hope the next update helps...
Date: 02/22/11 11:28 pm Title: Sacred
What?!?!? What the hell just happened...he can't be dead :(
Author's Response: I'm sorry...but the next chapter is up, keep reading and find out!
Date: 02/22/11 10:55 pm Title: Sacred
....What?! Nooooooooo! :O
Author's Response: ._. I'm sorry but yes! It happened!
Date: 02/22/11 10:52 pm Title: Sacred
*is shocked* wha uhhn buh *snaps out of it* NOOOOOOOOOOOoooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!! You are an evil EVIL person!
*goes in to denial* He didn't die. He couldn't. I refuse to believe he died. *nods emphatically* You wouldn'r do that to us, to Tom.
This was a heart pounding rush of an installment. I am anxiously waiting at the edge of my seat for more.
Author's Response: I'm sorry for being an evil person. ._. Thank you for your support and I'm so glad it made such an impact, I feel like I got it right, based on your reaction!