Date: 12/13/10 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
You already knom my opinion about it!just keep on writting!!!
Date: 12/09/10 08:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
Not bad. I think the whole time I was thinking "please please please let this be a dream" cuz Bill coming into Tom's shower was so sudden (which would have been really unrealistic if it was for real). So that's kind of what saved this story... the fact that it really was just Tom daydreaming in the shower. Poor Tomi.
You made Bill such a little seductress btw, that was hot. hehe.
Keep writing, things will get better! :) Well done on your first twincest fic!! :)
Date: 12/09/10 06:36 am Title: Chapter 1
wow. i was not at all expecting that ending, but i totally loved the twist. i'd be curious to see how toms feelings change as he gets older. great job.
Date: 12/08/10 08:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
So hot! Loved the ending and naughty Tom, so good!
Date: 12/08/10 12:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh come on! *facedesk* that was really good but seriously? that makes me wanna go pout and sulk in a corner now
Date: 12/08/10 11:37 am Title: Chapter 1
HNNNNNGGGGG this is amazing. you must keep writing! :3
Author's Response: did you like the dedication there kimbo? haha <3
Date: 12/08/10 10:52 am Title: Chapter 1
You should definitely write more. I love your description in here. And the last paragraph: Oh! Wonderful! Seriously you got talent, and I can't believe this is your first try at writtin twc. It honestly doesn't seem like it. This was awesome!! ^^v
Author's Response: aww thanks so much (:
Date: 12/08/10 09:52 am Title: Chapter 1
wow this is amazing!! at first i thought that "oh my god another 'tom-wants-bill-tom-gets-bill' fic" but i'm happy that it didn't end like that.. :) and what the hell?? your first twincest story?? fuck you're good. and yes you will write more. ;DD
Author's Response: that's what i was going for :3 thank you so much! <33
Date: 12/08/10 09:23 am Title: Chapter 1
Very nice XD I don't know if you named this story after the Muse song, but I thought it was kind of funny because I was actually listening to that song on my IPod when I opened the Tokio Hotel page, and saw that this was the first story on the list. Ummm...but yeah, anyway, this is great!
Author's Response: no, i didn't haha. the title just fit the story :p thank you.
Date: 12/08/10 09:14 am Title: Chapter 1
this is your first twc fic? you're awesome at it!!
-Mollz xXx
Author's Response: thank you <3
Date: 12/08/10 09:03 am Title: Chapter 1
I thought it was good, and hot. But.. they didn't.. have sex? It was only in tom's imagination? Well, damn. Tom's got a pretty good imagination then. :D