Date: 09/29/11 10:31 pm Title: Easy to find what's wrong, harder to find what's right part 2
Loved it!
Date: 09/29/11 10:20 pm Title: I believe in you, I can show you that I can see right through all your empty lies.
Loved it! Poor Emily!
Date: 09/29/11 10:05 pm Title: Easy to Find What’s Wrong, Harder to Find What’s Right.
Loved it!
Date: 09/29/11 09:43 pm Title: Close Your Eyes, So Many Days Go By.
Loved it!
Date: 09/29/11 09:22 pm Title: Here I Stand, Helpless and Left for Dead
Loved it!
Date: 09/29/11 04:22 pm Title: Here I Stand, Helpless and Left for Dead
Loved it! Poor Emily!
Date: 07/09/11 04:48 pm Title: Here I Stand, Helpless and Left for Dead
His, I like your story.
An I was wonering if you're going to continue write?
Because it's very good.
And I really want to know how the story ends =)
Because I like it very, very much =)
Date: 07/01/11 11:11 am Title: Here I Stand, Helpless and Left for Dead
oops, i didn't comment on this one, it's weird reveiwing a story from end to start, but i'll do it.
this first chp, leaves you with a lot of questions, some of which are going to be answered in the next chapters, but it still has a certain secret in it, something that keeps you reading and wanting more. it's very different from other stories here, from what i have read it's a good kind of different; it has a sense of historical fiction, something you don't see a lot right now, especially here. i have now reviewed every chapter, i hope this makes you upload sooner? please??
myths & generations,
isa
Date: 07/01/11 11:03 am Title: Easy to find what's wrong, harder to find what's right part 2
like the third one, it's sweet, a lot of georg in it, and in a way in sad that he's there for certain reasons, but in the end, he has a chance in getting his sister away from gustav, which is good considering what he has done, and what he will do again. i love that the characters are defined, each one with a different personality, and with a different purpouse in their lives. i hope that soon when i see the list of tracked stories, i'll see that there are 6 chp, please keep this story, it's way too special to not readi it... i hope i wrote that right...
myths & generations,
isa
Date: 07/01/11 10:54 am Title: Easy to Find What’s Wrong, Harder to Find What’s Right.
i've just reviewed chp 4, and now chp 3, long time without reading, i've decided that i'm going to comment on every chp: this one is sweet and i think that emily is smart in having sex with tom first, because i just read the next chp, and well, i guess she'll know that whatever gustav does to her, she'll always be tom's. now, i shall comment on chp 5!! :D
Date: 07/01/11 10:49 am Title: I believe in you, I can show you that I can see right through all your empty lies.
i can't say that it's my favorite chp, the last one is, this is a bit brutal, and raw, but shows how he really is. so busy with everything, i haven't had time to read anything, your story still remains as one of my favorites here on THF, this is one of the few reviews i've done recently, i hope you can forgive me for not being able to read sooner! :D
Date: 06/22/11 11:27 am Title: Easy to find what's wrong, harder to find what's right part 2
This story is so sad but it's really good. I hope you update soon (:
Date: 01/16/11 08:05 pm Title: I believe in you, I can show you that I can see right through all your empty lies.
Oh my o: I love this story. More please (:
Date: 01/15/11 03:54 am Title: I believe in you, I can show you that I can see right through all your empty lies.
Gustav is so EVIL!!!
Date: 12/11/10 06:21 pm Title: Close Your Eyes, So Many Days Go By.
i adore the way you write, i hope that soon i'll see 3 chp i this story!