Date: 12/15/10 12:22 am Title: Chapter Four
for some odd reason i get the feeling tom is a virgin too/or that he downright doesn't want to bed bill from so barely knowing him
Author's Response: Hehe, you'll see what he was intending in the next chap
Date: 12/15/10 12:09 am Title: Chapter Four
Are they going to do it? What'll happen afterwards? dundundun!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: :O
Date: 12/14/10 11:53 pm Title: Chapter Four
"He knew that people sweated while having sex, and he didn’t want Tom dehydrated." :D
virgin!Bill is hysterical in all of his virginal thoughts. I bet he'll laugh the first time Tom fingers him, which I hope will happen even though you said this isn't lemon. :D
I'm staying hopeful about this!!
Author's Response: Lmao, yeah ppl seem not to notice the PG-13 rating, which was never meant to change. But I think I will perhaps add something... ;) Thank for the reading and reviews!
Date: 12/14/10 11:46 pm Title: Chapter Three
I find Tom's character to be really cute already. He seem's like he's as desperate for a boyfriend as Bill is to get layed!
Author's Response: Hehe, you're almost right on the dot!
Date: 12/14/10 11:39 pm Title: Chapter Two
I love your endnote!!! :D
I love how Bill reacts when that guy calls him. Its priceless!
Author's Response: Haha, thank you! Yup, I just had to add some humor. Funny thing is, I bet that could happen in real life, too.
Date: 12/14/10 11:35 pm Title: Chapter One
It's Gustav! Haha, just kidding. I have a feeling it's Bill...
For some reason the lines, "He couldn’t stand the barren dust land that was his sex life. Or maybe it was more like untilled soil – fertile, but going nowhere," seems like it could be my slogan right about now. ;D
Author's Response: Hahaha! That'd be funny. And oh yeah? Seems there's a bunch of ppl who feel this way.
Date: 12/14/10 10:22 pm Title: Chapter Four
are they going to sleep together in the next chapter, can't wait 4 ur update
Author's Response: Lol, I can't say. It looks that way, doesn't it. And thanks!
Date: 12/14/10 09:51 pm Title: Chapter One
guess who? oh wow, i just assumed it was bill in all his fustrated virgin glory xD.
Author's Response: Haha! XD
Date: 12/14/10 09:48 pm Title: Chapter Four
oh goodness, they're both awkward. how's this gonna be good? i think they might both want more...and why shouldnt they? lol, bill...so jealous!
Author's Response: Lmfao, awkward to the max. Now we just need some explanations, cuz Tom has some 'splainin to do.
Date: 12/14/10 09:37 pm Title: Chapter Four
oh god, down to the wire, are we? i'm expecting full-on smut in the next one ;)
Author's Response: We are indeed. And lol, I can't say anything about that XD
Date: 12/14/10 09:29 pm Title: Chapter Four
hummm ....sex??
Author's Response: Lol, we'll see
Date: 12/14/10 08:35 pm Title: Chapter Four
LOL, well, not going to kill you because then we won't find out what's going to happen next, would we? ;) Loved that Tom was the one delaying the inevitable, making questions to know Bill better and all, when Bill wanted nothing else but do it asap and now that they're on the verge, he's understandably nervous. I think Tom likes Bill more than he lets on, I'll be looking forward to finding out if I'm right or wrong. ;)
Author's Response: Lmao, he definitely likes him. The reader just doesn't see it very well because this is entirely from Bill's point of view, and silly Bill believes that Tom doesn't like him that way. Next chap should be up real soon :)
Date: 12/14/10 08:18 pm Title: Chapter Four
At first I thought that maybe Tom was doing the dirty work for someone else. U know, like scoping Bill out for a friend & then deciding he actually liked him but not just for sex. Haha, I dunno. But i'm anxious to read where u take it next. I'm curious to know if Bill chickens out or if suddenly "something comes up" for Tom to get out of doing it.
Author's Response: Hm, yeah that could have happened. I can honestly say that something changed in Tom's plan along the way.
Date: 12/14/10 07:56 pm Title: Chapter Four
So is it Tom who had a crush on Bill in HS - the one his friends told him about at the end of the schoolyear?:D Heeeeeeee... Or maybe not. No? How would Tom know if it was Bill's number on the toilet, anyway...D: Uhm... Maybe he knew Bill's number all along since HS?? LOOOOOOOOOOOL I'm speculating the weirdness sorry I iz talking to myself..XD
ANYWAAAAAAAAAAAYS... I kind of disliked Tom too but maaaaaaaaaaaybe he just wanted something from Bill other than sex, ja??XDD Like.. *cough* Love. Or something. LOOOOOOOOOL *scolds self* Shut up, me!! Hahahaha..
I can't wait for the next oooooooooone!! Eeeeeeeek.. Exciting!!XD
Author's Response: Lmfao, maybe he does want loooove. In fact I might do a companion piece from Tom's POV, so ppl can understand him better, though Tom is going to give an explanation in the last chapter.
Date: 12/14/10 07:42 pm Title: Chapter Four
I actually didn't get manipulation vibes from Tom. In fact, I thought he was subtly sweet the whole chapter. And Bill! It's so cute he offered Tom a drink for that reason! I so can't wait for what's next!
Author's Response: Phew, thanks :) Heehee, I'm glad you liked that little line. More is coming!
Date: 12/14/10 07:26 pm Title: Chapter Four
I honestly get a feeling that Tom is virgin too :/ Or he is scared the same way that Bill seems to be getting.
This whole situation is messed up. If I saw a note saying 'free sex' I won't call the number or I may prank call them lol XD
Author's Response: Ooh, that's an interesting theory. Tom isn't a virgin, but he has a reason for being hesitant. Lmfao, you meanie
Date: 12/14/10 06:34 pm Title: Chapter Three
:O
Moreeeeeeee!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: heh, just put up next chapter
Date: 12/13/10 04:02 pm Title: Chapter Three
Oh God, if he is pulling a prank on Bill, I'll... I'll leave a very mad review.
Okay, I won't, I promise. Gosh, I love how I let out a tiny squee when this story gets updated.
I loved it :D
Author's Response: Eep! Hehe, don't worry, this is a fluffy story. I can say that Tom's mostly innocent, but that won't stop Bill's crazy mind from...being crazy XD This next chapter's kinda hard to write, but I hope to get it up soon.
Date: 12/13/10 01:24 pm Title: Chapter Three
omggg!! thats so...haha i dont know, but definitly goood :D...i only want mooree!!
Author's Response: Working on it moooore! :)
Date: 12/13/10 09:40 am Title: Chapter Three
I can so imagine Bill's face when Tom said he wanted another meeting XD
This is still brilliant *_*
Author's Response: Haha, yeah funny, isn't it? XD Thank you