Date: 05/16/11 08:51 am Title: Chapter Five
that was beautiful! Tom is very good person, I like him a lot! but.. this story is too good to be so short >.< are you planning a sequel maybe? please!!
Author's Response: Aww, unfortunately it was always intended to be a short story. Just a ficlet that I thought of while in class. I am pondering out a short epilogue, though :)
Date: 05/16/11 07:18 am Title: Chapter Five
This was so sweet! I got the feeling early on that Tom really liked Bill, but I had no idea that Tom had actually called to talk him out of it. Awesome! =)
Author's Response: Heh, I'm glad I could surprise you. Thank you! =)
Date: 05/16/11 07:07 am Title: Chapter Five
I had to reread it, cause I have completely forgotten what was in the previous chapters ^^" I like the way it has ended and sequel or epilogue would be nice :D
Author's Response: Heh, that's okay. It was updated, what, almost six months ago? I'm hoping the gap didn't affect the characterization. Well, I'm not going to do a sequel, but I'll think about a short epilogue.
Date: 05/16/11 07:00 am Title: Chapter Five
Awwwwws :') Thank you and don't worry it took some time ^^ Writers have other things in life too, neh? *nodnod* And I'd wanna read an epiloque, to know how it worked out for those two :3
Author's Response: Sure do. Thank you! And yes, I'll probably write a short epilogue :)
Date: 01/29/11 12:06 am Title: Chapter One
It's Bill isn't it..?.. :)
Author's Response: Hehe, maybe so. But I'm pretty sure you've already read the rest by now XD
Date: 12/24/10 11:24 pm Title: Chapter One
It's bill .. Obviousely.. Lol right ? ... :)
Author's Response: Hehe, it says in the next chapterrrr
Date: 12/18/10 01:46 pm Title: Chapter Four
Oh Emily, you're too fast with your updates!
Anyway, here we are. I understand Bill, but it bothers me that he just... can't even give it a chance. Obviously Tom is a nice guy (or is it only me thinking like that?) and yet this is still so awkward. Relax, boy! :D
Waiting for the final chapter...
Author's Response: Lol, oh geez, I'm waiting for the final chapter too. My damn perfectionism is kicking in. Yay! Thanks for reading and reviewing
Date: 12/17/10 03:21 am Title: Chapter Four
really? only one more? how sad. i hope you change your mind, this story seems like it has to potential to be a fair bit longer than that. i look forward to however much more you give us though. =)
Author's Response: Aw, yeah. It's just I'm no good with endurance in writing. I'd hate to start a long story and be unable to finish it. Thank you!
Date: 12/16/10 06:03 pm Title: Chapter Four
Oh wow! Brilliant!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 12/15/10 03:05 pm Title: Chapter Four
Where is the next button!? I really can't wait for the next chapter! I don't think that Tom was coming off as being manipulative... I saw it like he wanted more, not only a one night stand and I found it adorable! But we'll see what's gonna happen =P
Author's Response: It's not theeeere! Hehe, I'm glad you found it adorable. Yeah everyone's just gonna have to see what happens. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 12/15/10 03:02 pm Title: Chapter One
I want to say I like it but that would be such an understatement. I really love this story, the idea is original and Tom seems like he is quite an odd person here.
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Date: 12/15/10 02:56 pm Title: Chapter Three
I really liked reading about their first meeting! I really can't wait to see where you're gonna take this =)
Author's Response: It was fun writing their first meeting :D I guess hence why I wrote it so oddly fast
Date: 12/15/10 02:51 pm Title: Chapter Two
Awww! I love this Bill, he's so adorable! I'm glad I'm a little behind on reading this fic so I don't have to wait for the next chapter, especially after how you ended this one =P No cliffhanger for meeee =D
Author's Response: Haha, no cliffie. Except the one at the end XD Thank for reading!
Date: 12/15/10 01:37 pm Title: Chapter One
We still wear the blue vests, though the uniform has changed to black pants and either a black or white shirt. And dammit I want an 10-4 shift! All I've heard anyone getting (other than cashiers maybe) is 10-6. Yeah...I work there... lol
Author's Response: Heehee, that's awesome! (that you work there) Uhh, let's pretend that Bill's living in an obscure area with blue shirts instead XD I would fix those details in the story, but it would kinda of mess up the time and some events.
Date: 12/15/10 09:48 am Title: Chapter Four
only 1 more?!?! whyyyyyy?? ToT
Author's Response: Aww *pets* Yeah it was only meant to have 5 chaps from the start. It's because I don't do well in writing long stories. But I hope to fix that ;)
Date: 12/15/10 07:59 am Title: Chapter Four
only one more chapter? :o ooooh. well, i want more sooniez. :D
Author's Response: Hehe, I'm about to start writing in a few minutes ;) Thanks!
Date: 12/15/10 04:13 am Title: Chapter Four
Only one chapter left? =( not cool.
But I have to ask... where are you from that Walmart has blue shirts n slacks as a uniform? And a 10-4 shift? o.O or was that off the top of your head? lol
Author's Response: Oh no, you got me >.< Yeah, I tried researching the Walmart uniforms, and it seems they all wore a blue vest prior to 2007, but then supposedly they changed it to a blue shirt and tan or black pants, and I never found anything that contradicted that. Plus, on the official website it shows some ppl wearing blue shirts. The 10-4 is just off the top of my head XD
Date: 12/15/10 02:37 am Title: Chapter Four
I must say I don't think Tom is manipulative, I just think he's friendly and just as nervous as Bill is :3
Can't wait to read the last chapter of this! *___*
It's really really REALLY good!
Author's Response: Lol, okay good :) Thank you! :D
Date: 12/15/10 02:28 am Title: Chapter Four
best part's coming xD
Author's Response: Lol, yes it is. Or at least I think so XD
Date: 12/15/10 02:04 am Title: Chapter Four
Cliffhanger!!
Can't wait to find out if they have sex or decide to wait and start dating.
Author's Response: Heh, well like I said, this isn't exactly a lemon. But I might do something ;)