Date: 12/13/10 05:52 am Title: Chapter Three
Oh, I just love this story. Its so original. What is Tom planning...humm...maybe a relationship ;) Great chapter.
Can't waiting for the next, and the next, and the next after that. I just love it!
Author's Response: Hehe, you might be right. And sadly there's only going to be two other chapters in this story, but I'll make them good!
Date: 12/13/10 05:02 am Title: Chapter Three
Yay they met and it was all cute and awkward.
Have to wonder if Tom knew it was Bill that wrote the message and he called 'cause he's crushing on him.
Really enjoying this! Looking forward to more! :D
Author's Response: Ooh, that's an interesting theory. And thanks!
Date: 12/13/10 12:20 am Title: Chapter Three
I don't know what it is about this, but I'm really intrigued. Very nice build up so far!
Author's Response: Lol, I'm not that sure either. I'm glad it interests you! :)
Date: 12/12/10 11:53 pm Title: Chapter Three
I love this! I really want to see what happens next :d
Author's Response: Hehe, yeah, I'm still fine-tuning events in the middle XD Thanks, hun!
Date: 12/12/10 11:14 pm Title: Chapter Three
evil Tom? ;)
Author's Response: hehe, maybe?
Date: 12/12/10 10:02 pm Title: Chapter Three
I love this story! I hope that you find time to update!
Author's Response: Heh, I hope so too. Thank you!
Date: 12/12/10 09:33 pm Title: Chapter Three
honestly, i was expecting a bit of smut...but i wonder what Tom is trying to corner Bill into??
Author's Response: Hehe, you were, were you? I'm trying to think about that. And yeah, Bill's lucky I'm controlling the story and it's slightly geared towards fluff cuz otherwise he could get into a horrid situation :/
Date: 12/12/10 09:05 pm Title: Chapter Three
The encounter was great! You wrote it so realistically but still in a way that was very entertaining. I'm really curious about Tom as well. There seems a bit more to him then he's letting on... It's all so intriguing!!
Author's Response: Aw thank you! Hehe, yes, Tom's mysterious.
Date: 12/12/10 08:46 pm Title: Chapter Three
Hmmm...i'm seriously curious about what's going to happen. Thanx for the quick update, can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Heh, yeah I guess I was excited about that first encounter that I typed fast. Thanks!
Date: 12/12/10 08:00 pm Title: Chapter Three
Yes, Tom behaved quite strangely. I wonder what he's up to. I liked their encounter, it was awkward, but that's how it had to be, I guess. Love how flustered Bill was, not knowing the appropriate etiquette to dealing with something like this. It's endearing, heehee. I'll be looking forward to more. :D
Author's Response: Lol, it's amusing to write awkward situations. I threw that etiquette thing in at the last minute, since it would make sense for Bill to wonder that. Thank you :D
Date: 12/12/10 07:44 pm Title: Chapter Three
I think hes planning on becoming the love of Bill's life...or at least actually dating him for a bit not just wham bam thank you ma'am...very nice chapter. can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Hehe, "wham bam thank you ma'am". Thank you!
Date: 12/12/10 07:17 pm Title: Chapter Three
YAY they meet finally. Poor Bill, he just wants it over with and Tom's being difficult. Can't wait to see what going to happen. I was so excited to see your update sweetie. *hugs*
Author's Response: Yeah, finally! True that. Bill doesn't want anything messy, but it'd be a gamble if he turned Tom down. Thanks! *hug*
Date: 12/12/10 07:00 pm Title: Chapter Three
lolol. Tom likes Bill. ;)
You deserve all these comments. You've got an interesting storyline and it's the kind that everyone here likes. The story is written well and interesting without having too much or too little detail. So don't you worry about it. :)
Author's Response: I think you're right on that ;) Thank you, dear! I'm so happy to know it comes off as good. *huggles*
Date: 12/12/10 06:48 pm Title: Chapter Three
oh gosh!! i wanna know xD oh, my. the italics tags are A BITCH, right?? i feel like you and I would get along, LOL. it also takes me FOREVER to write a chapter and html it up...tho my chapters are usually between 2 and 4 thousand words. but i take a long ass time as well. lovely. i wonder if bill's gonna go home and think lovely thoughts about how positively gorgeous tom happens to be? tee hee. i would
Author's Response: Yes, yes they are. Even with only copying and pasting the tag. And yeah, if I had my way all my chapters would be 2k words long too. But I'm still training my endurance. Already I haven't finished a story since I was in grade school. But there's more motivation here [/rambling] Thanks again!
Date: 12/12/10 06:22 pm Title: Chapter Two
omg you're amazing. i totally and completely identify with this, and im guessing you do too xD god, so sad for us :( hahaha funny stuff so far, i like it.
Author's Response: Aw, thank you! I didn't think ppl would identify with this actually. *hides* Eep! Yes I'm an anxious virgin too. I thought this up while in the college bathroom actually XDD Let's say I would've done this if I had weaker conscience
Date: 12/12/10 06:13 pm Title: Chapter One
i think it's bill. lol. but omg, i totally identify with this. i wish i was confident enough to post something like that...LOL. i feel the same way--desperate and unfortunately blocked by some sort of force-field! though i am a JUNIOR in college. i have to work on some body image issues tho...my problem is, i'm not ready to let anyone see me naked. (photos of pornstars are quite intimidating) well, it's my newyears resolution tho, to get rid of those issues so i can get laid! :3
Author's Response: Haha! That's a good resolution. Oh, psh, I don't look at porn stars for body models. I'm happy if my waist goes in. Doesn't matter *how* thin. Thank you for reading!
Date: 12/12/10 05:43 pm Title: Chapter Three
I think Tom's gonna try and get Bill to slow down a little bit, hmm? ;)
Author's Response: Ooh, maaaaybe.. ;)
Date: 12/12/10 05:07 pm Title: Chapter One
I love the plot! This first chapter is really interesting and I can't wait to read more =D
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 12/12/10 04:52 pm Title: Chapter Three
Yeah, what is Tom planning on? :) I'm excited to find out.
Author's Response: Let's hope it's nothing scary and despicable =O Heehee, thank you!
Date: 12/12/10 04:48 pm Title: Chapter Three
Love the plot!
Author's Response: Thanks!