Date: 03/16/08 07:01 pm Title: Chapter 10
awwww that was so beautiful!!!i loved lol and i cried a little too haha
Author's Response: Naaahaaaw! How cute! Thank you :D
Date: 03/16/08 07:00 pm Title: Chapter 10
orr wow it was propper amaizing!
and I so dont want it to end
but the ending to perfect for anything to follow
I spent ages with my mouth hanging open after Tom was shot
It was fucking brilliant
x
Author's Response: Ihihihi! Thank you so much! :D
Date: 03/16/08 04:02 pm Title: Chapter 9
*0*
I want MORE of this please!! more more!!!
Author's Response: Soon. Soon :)
Date: 03/16/08 02:54 pm Title: Chapter 9
Until one day.....[whaaaaaaaat?]
GOOOOSH
I LAUGHED SO HARD IN THE PART OF THE 'MIND' CONVERSATIONS
I'm waiting for more *-*
kiss
Author's Response: Hihi, glad you did ;D Thanks and loba
Date: 03/16/08 01:23 pm Title: Chapter 9
Until one day...
WHAT???
thanks for the update! ^^
Author's Response: Hihihihi! ;D Thanks to YOU!
Date: 03/16/08 12:17 pm Title: Chapter 9
OH MY GOD NOOO NOT A CLIFFHANGER!
Ah man. They should both swallow their pride and just jump eachother :)
Author's Response: This makes me want to add another cliffhanger... Hihihi ;D
Date: 03/16/08 08:56 am Title: Chapter 9
Until one day....Tom pounced on Bill and made him scream his... okay ill stop now =P
update soooon!!
xoxox
Author's Response: hehe! lobaloba
Date: 03/16/08 08:04 am Title: Chapter 9
OMG, GUYS!!! Kiss now or I'll castrate you BOTH!!! AND FEED IT TO YOU!!!!!
Jeez, boys! *rolls eyes*
Go on!!!!
Author's Response: Tsss! Haha, sweet. Thanksises
Date: 03/16/08 07:39 am Title: Chapter 9
haha... lool... but what happens next? :o.. i really wanna know!
please update soon!
Author's Response: Ya will find out, ye! ;D
Date: 03/16/08 06:55 am Title: Chapter 9
YES! until one day... really great...
Author's Response: Thanks xD
Date: 03/16/08 06:50 am Title: Chapter 9
woot? no! Don't end it there!! *cries*
I want mooore! Like... NOW!!! *pouts*
Author's Response: Soon. Soon <3
Date: 03/16/08 06:35 am Title: Chapter 9
one day what?!
you can't stop it there love...
i'm going to be thinknig about it all day now!! :P
love it!!
Author's Response: *giggles* I will hurry extra on this one :) Thanks ;D
Date: 03/16/08 06:19 am Title: Chapter 9
You stopped in a pretty cruel last sentence! Well, at least I have something to look forward to now, don't I?
update as soon as you can! :)
Author's Response: Sometime in the next 24 hours, I've decided. Thanks for reading and reviewing! ;D
Date: 03/16/08 06:15 am Title: Chapter 9
Argh... What a mean ending!! I was reading the second part of this and rolling my eyes, silly men and their pride... And then that last sentence just, wow... Now I really want to know what happens! Update soon please, I really want this to have a happy ending!
Author's Response: I guess it will be finished sometime today :) (within the next 24 hours) ;D Thank you!
Date: 03/16/08 06:07 am Title: Chapter 9
Lovely!
Author's Response: Tack ;D
Date: 03/15/08 01:12 pm Title: Chapter 8
JOST/SAAAAAAAAKI =OOOOOO
mein gott, it's Surprising....
HAVE YOU NOTICED THAT I'M ADDICTED TO YOUR STORIES ? X.X 'cause if you haven't... i must tell...
I'M ADDICTED TO YOUR STORIES *-*
update as soon as you can...
*offer a basket with brownies*
Author's Response: Ah! Seriously! That is so sweet! Thank you! *munches on brownies* Loba that ^^
Date: 03/14/08 11:33 pm Title: Chapter 8
GAAH!!!!!!!WRITE FREAKIN MORE!!!!!OH AND THAT TAMARA CHICK, GOTTA GO HONEY IM SORRY BUT SHE IS JUST A *INSERT LONG BLEEP HERE* BUT SOMEHOW SHE MAKES THE STORY BETTER!!!^_^ GREAT STORY!!!
Author's Response: Hahaha! She's made for that, trust me. I think of evil things while writing her ;D Thank you :D;D
Date: 03/13/08 02:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
very strong story
fucking amazing.
keep going girl
give us more....
Author's Response: Aw, than you :) More will come "just around the river bend" ;D
Date: 03/13/08 01:05 pm Title: Chapter 8
Go on! Awesome story =)
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 03/13/08 09:58 am Title: Chapter 8
Oooer! Saki and David? haha. wayyyy cute! LOL. but in a weird way... ;D
and if i have a say in this, i NEED Tom to accept!!! xD
AHHHHHH. LOVE IT! can't wait for moreeee! :D
Author's Response: Hehhee, thank you! :D