Date: 12/12/10 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 4-Peeping Tom
Oooo so now Tom knows that Bill likes him, and maybe Tom returns the feelings?? I'm really curious to see what will happen between them now. Yay for updates *squishes*
Author's Response: yes, Tom knows that Bill likes him and he is attracted to him for sure. But that is gonna cause a lot of inner conflict for Tom. :(
Date: 12/12/10 09:12 pm Title: Chapter 4-Peeping Tom
I'm glad Bill wasn't actually caught, that would have been slightly awkward haha. It's nice to know tho that Tom jerked off to Bill xD Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: oh, if Bill was calling my name, I'd have to go and take care of things too. XDDDDDD Thank you for reading!
Date: 12/07/10 12:58 am Title: Chapter 3-WhatReally Is The Difference Between Right & Wrong?
I'm liking this story so far, and I am looking forward to reading more :)
Author's Response: Thank you and I hope to have more for you to read very soon!
Date: 12/07/10 12:55 am Title: Chapter 3-WhatReally Is The Difference Between Right & Wrong?
I like it.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Date: 12/07/10 12:36 am Title: Chapter 3-WhatReally Is The Difference Between Right & Wrong?
don't worry, I wouldn't let a fanfic offend me. that just seems silly doesnt it?...I thought reform camps and christian camps were different though....I dunno I could be wrong...I never had need to look into it. I'm glad Georg is on Bill's side...Though I kinda do gree with Lance...its kinda hard to twist "you shall not lie with a man as you do a woman" into anything but anti-gay...i don't agree with Lance's views, what you do in your bedroom is between you, your partner, and the god you believe in. Great chapter. I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Christian camps are different in my experience. The one used in this story is a real one, and they instill acceptance from the staff and volunteers. Unfortunately, it's the kids that were taught differently that tend to bring the most conflict. It's expected when you have 150 kids from different backgrounds bound only by their religious affiliation. Georg will prove to be an ally for Bill as time goes on. Thank you for reading and I hope you continue to read as I move further!
Date: 12/06/10 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 3-WhatReally Is The Difference Between Right & Wrong?
this is really good, im really enjoying your story.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading!
Date: 12/06/10 02:40 pm Title: Chapter 3-WhatReally Is The Difference Between Right & Wrong?
Awwww, poor Bill, having to go through that must be awful. :( I'm glad Georg is on his side, though. Hopefully that'll lessen whatever Lance throws his way. I'll be looking forward to more.
Author's Response: oh yes, Georg will be on his side, in more ways than one ;o) Just wait and see!
Date: 12/06/10 01:31 pm Title: Chapter 3-WhatReally Is The Difference Between Right & Wrong?
Fantastic chapter! I loved watching Tom talk too hehe. I could picture the whole thing xD Lance needs to be put in his place. I seriously have issues with ppl like him. They annoy me so much.
Author's Response: I have had more than my fair share of run-ins with people like Lance. ESPECIALLY where I'm from too. :( Thanks for reading!
Date: 12/06/10 01:30 pm Title: Chapter 3-WhatReally Is The Difference Between Right & Wrong?
Awww poor Bill. Peoples bigotry and the way they hide their views behind religion disgust me. It's not going to be an easy time if Bill has to put up with that sort of narrow-minded crap. Great chapter honey, I'm looking forward to more *smooshes*
Author's Response: yeah, it doesn't help when people use religious texts as a wall to hide their sins behind, but it's more often than most realize. hoping to have more soon this week. *HUGS*
Date: 12/03/10 01:41 am Title: Chapter 2-Introductions and Realizations
ooh, great start, thanks so much!
Author's Response: and thank you for reading! next chapter should be up sometime tomorrow!
Date: 12/02/10 11:41 pm Title: Chapter 2-Introductions and Realizations
"staff members were forbidden to mingle with the campers outside of their required activities." Lets see how long that last!
Author's Response: *giggle* oh, rules are made to be broken, that's what i always say :o)
Date: 12/02/10 09:51 pm Title: Chapter 2-Introductions and Realizations
ooohhhhooohhh...i think a little mingleing should happen anyway...poor lttle repressed(or is it reformed? I dunno) homosexual Tom...I'm sure Bill will fix you (or break you as hey rest of the camp may think)...this looks good so far keep up the great work!
Author's Response: hmmm, i think Tom is a little of both and it's yet to be determined who gets to fix who though ;o) Thank you for reading!
Date: 12/02/10 09:41 pm Title: Chapter 2-Introductions and Realizations
Oooooh I still get all hot and bothered by Tom coming out of the showers. Love Bill falling into the pool, soo silly, but Tom was there to pull him out! *bounces* Loved it darling, can't wait for the next chapter *squishes*
Author's Response: thank you dear!!!! the plot bunnies have been bouncing like mad, so i'm still working out all the details. hoping to have another chapter tomorrow! *SMOOCHES*
Date: 12/02/10 09:34 pm Title: Chapter 1-Introduction to Mystery
WHEEEE you finally posted!!! Oh honey you have no idea how excited I am to see this. Smooshes *runs to next chapter*
Author's Response: I know! I'm sorry it took so long. I just haven't been feeling well enough to write. I hope to have another one in the next couple of days if I'm feeling a little better.
Date: 12/02/10 06:49 pm Title: Chapter 2-Introductions and Realizations
This is awesome already & i'm so excited to find out what's going to happen next.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and I will have a new chapter soon!
Date: 12/02/10 06:40 pm Title: Chapter 1-Introduction to Mystery
My kind of church camp hehe xD
Author's Response: it's the kind of camp that you need to go to church to repent for everything you did there. XDDDD
Date: 12/02/10 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 2-Introductions and Realizations
I love it!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 12/02/10 04:56 pm Title: Chapter 2-Introductions and Realizations
it's a scandal this has only one review yet! Well, two now ;)
I'm curious and wondering what's gonna happen :D
Author's Response: yes, i agree. scaaaandahlous. XDDD thank you for reading and i hope to have a new chapter up soon!
Date: 12/02/10 04:36 pm Title: Chapter 2-Introductions and Realizations
Oooh, I'm intrigued over what happened to Tom two years ago. I'm really enjoying this very much. I'll be looking forward to more. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, something happened to Tom that will affect the way he relates to people. Here's a hint....it's not what you think :)