Date: 12/03/10 12:19 am Title: Chapter 1
with a teacher like that... i would have a fuckmerapeme face all the time xDD
i love the way you write sex scenes. Do you know what would have been cool? that Bill got turned on by that :Q____
girl...! i´m waiting for Gordon in the mornin´ update :/ when?
love :D
Author's Response: Bill turned on by this all? Yes I suppose that could work but I've already written a few stories where Bill gets "raped" and really wanted to write an actual rape scene for this prompt. Like legitimate rape where it is unwanted and hurts like heck
Haha you'd want Mr. Trumper to take advantage of you? Your review made me laugh
Gordon in the Mornin' uhhhh god I've been trying to get in the light happy-super-bubbly-yay mood to write that but haven't really been able to. Maybe I'll try getting around to writing it today and then post on Monday? How does that sound? But I'm not making any promises
Date: 12/02/10 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
forced... i love that word
let me read it and i leave you a smarter review xD
Date: 12/02/10 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
TEEEHEEEE. I am Lubey.
Author's Response: Haha play-on words. Lubey= loopy I enjoy your sense of humor
Date: 12/02/10 11:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
YAAAAYYY RAPEY TIME.
I like Tom as a predator ;D
Really good job.
Author's Response: Oh my god child! Who are you because I absolutely love your review! I'm going to feature it next update because it is the funniest and cutest thing ever...YAAAAYYY RAPEY TIME classic
Date: 12/02/10 11:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
Also, there's two things I forgot to add...
One- When Bill said being penetrated reminded him of taking a shit, I thought that was the most hularious thing ever. Because it does ;D
Two- Was Bill a virgin when Tom raped him, or has he already worn down some of the tread (if you know what mean)? ;D
Author's Response: It totally does! I mean think about the whole process of it all 0_o
Bill was a virgin (guess I should have mentioned that oh well) he normally is in most of my fics as well as normally getting raped by Tom, Bushido, Georg, or anyone else I see fit. First time on the Gustav/Bill ship though
Date: 12/02/10 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
O_O I had AP English (Language and Composition) 3rd period when I was in 10th grade!!! *is freaked out by the coincidence* Also, I was in the French National Honours Society. I relate to Bill so much in this story already!!! (Academically, not the getting raped part...) ;D
The best part about that class was when the teacher would note that the foreignor outperformed them in all of the assignments. I WIN. :D
Gustav is such an asshole. He reminds me of one of my friends in high school who always tried to outdo me. Said friend also tried to file a complaint about said AP English Class teacher, and her grade ended up sucking worse than Bill's first sex with Mr. Trumper. :D Let's just say she never managed to beat me when it came to grades XD
Another ABSOLUTE WIN is Tom's character. Already I love him and want him to rape me mercilessly in a classroom.
Ugh. Scholarships. Worst application process of my life. Almost as worse as actually taking an AP class.
Did you take AP?
Author's Response: Haha of course! I was in AP European History, AP English, and AP Biology my senior year. I'm glad that you were able to relate, I triedto write it that way so people would have a coonection (even if Bill is a super brain)
Date: 12/02/10 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
I just really need to comment again!:D
I am going to be stalking you over the internet alright?:D Haha.
Seriously. And every time you update I'm going to jump up in the air and fist pump in the air like a jersey shore idiot:D Haha.
I love Tom's brutal side. I have a question though is he in love with Bill or just wanted a quick fuck??
Annddd when are you going to update again??
Author's Response: Nah I don't mind! I'm guilty of Internet-stalking too lol!.. Your a Jersey Shore fan *squeals* me too! GTL baby
Aww I'm not going to spoil all of the fun and tell you! Although you will be surprised by the ending. I don't know when the next update will be, maybe next Thursday? I'm working on it
Date: 12/02/10 08:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
Love it :D
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! :3
Date: 12/02/10 08:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
I think this is very powerful story and the characters are just so well-developed. I also like how you turned a fairly common plot into something unique and completely your own. I'm extremely excited for more!
Author's Response: Thank you! That means so much coming from you.
Date: 12/02/10 08:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
Dude you never disapoint me! God please I'm begging you to finish this story please!!!
Author's Response: Haha this one I will finish quickly as it's a promp fill
Date: 12/02/10 07:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
Evil Mr Trumper.
Author's Response: Ah yes but we love him
Date: 12/02/10 07:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
Horrific as always! (that's a good thing)
My darker self loves your writing ;)
He forgot his tie :O
Author's Response: Ha yes you noticed! Poor Bill is left on the floor still gagged but Tom never tied up his hands so he'll be able to pull it off.... why thank you! My dark side loves writing these fics for you all. I remember when I first joined the fandom end of early '08 there really weren't that many dark fics on here. Hhaha well it seems like we definitely have some more darker writers in the fandom now and that's great. Glad you enjoyed it
Date: 12/02/10 06:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was really good! Poor Bill. It would make my day if there was Gustav/Bill cuteness after. xD But even if that doesn't happen, this story will still be amazing.
Author's Response: I know sucks for Bill right? To have to be competitive with the boy your crushing on? You never know although I'm not making any promises about Gustav/Bill
Date: 12/02/10 06:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
Horrific. That is the worst thing I could imagine happening to any student. I'd never be able to go to school again.
Author's Response: Neither could I! :)
Date: 12/02/10 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm hoping Bill finds a way to get revenge on Tom.
Author's Response: Oh wow! So you want a little aggressive Bill huh? We'll see there's still two more chapters to go. Love your enthusiasm
Date: 12/02/10 06:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
WOW...
(it's a good wow XD)
Author's Response: Hey you I just commented on one of your stories. I can't believe you changed your user name!
Date: 12/02/10 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
*dances* Billraep!
I originally wanted Bill to be a mute, but this was great. :3 I liked the bit about Bill being secretly in love with his rival, awwwww. ^^
Tom is such a douche! :D I was surprised at his brutality, but I loved it. ^^ *applauds*
Author's Response: Thank you! God I was so nervous writing this trying to make it good for you.
P.S. you wanted Bill to be mute? Opps I forgot about that part my bad
Date: 12/02/10 06:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
woooow. interesting. :O
Author's Response: *sobs and hugs you tight* Thank you so much for reviewing. I have just been sitting here for the last ten minutes watching as the reads kept going up from 5 to 30 to freaking 60! And no one was reviewing, started thinking maybe you all hated it. Thanks for you review means a ton to me