Date: 01/05/11 08:24 am Title: Bill Leaves a Note
Please write a new chapter this story has great potential
Author's Response:
Thank you! And the next chapter should be up very soon.
Date: 12/10/10 02:39 am Title: Bill Leaves a Note
This was very nicely written. I like your writing style; you give all the right information without overwhelming the reader. And best of all, the plot here is very true to life. I'll be looking forward to another chapter. Good Luck.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I'm glad you like the style. I was a bit worried because I have a tendency to give too much useless information in stories, but I'm trying to let go of that habit, so I'm glad it seems to be working. Well, I submitted the second chapter so it should be up soon. Thanks!
Date: 12/07/10 09:53 am Title: Bill Leaves a Note
An intreating start, I would really like to read more and see where you go with this.
BTW what manga is it? I'm looking for a new one to read if u have any suggestions??)
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I'll update asap! Well, the manga is a 1-shot actually: Hana no saku koro (when the flowers bloom)... I may have more suggestions, but I'll need to know what type of ones you like... :)
Date: 12/04/10 03:52 pm Title: Bill Leaves a Note
was that the end? because if it was, i am very unsatified. but it has great potential. i liked it
Author's Response:
Oh no no! It's not the end! Tom still has no idea the note even exists! Don't worry there's more to come!
Date: 12/01/10 08:32 pm Title: Bill Leaves a Note
great beginning, i can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Thank you dear!
Date: 12/01/10 07:27 pm Title: Bill Leaves a Note
Hi!
That's an interesting beginning. I was almost eating my nails when Tom appeared out of nowhere in the hallway. I thought Bill was going to get caught!
Anyway, I would love to read what is next. Bill's surely gonna get all anxious before the ceremony!
Thanks for sharing!
See ya.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Lol! It would've been fun for Bill to get caught, but most of the suspense would be dead then. Yup yup, Bill will definitely be jumpy before the ceremony!
Date: 12/01/10 05:51 pm Title: Bill Leaves a Note
I'm anxious to read Tom's reaction 2 de note.. Intresting so far :)
Author's Response:
I'll get to Tom's reaction.... eventually... XP Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 12/01/10 03:33 pm Title: Bill Leaves a Note
This could get interesting. I like it very much so for, I'll be looking forward to more :D
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like it! Thanks for the review!
Date: 12/01/10 10:56 am Title: Bill Leaves a Note
Can't wait to read the rest.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing! I'll update ASAP!
Date: 12/01/10 10:48 am Title: Bill Leaves a Note
Ahh! I'm excited to read what's going to happen next xD I hope to read more soon =) I love it!
Author's Response:
I'm glad this caught your attention! ^_^ I'll post the next chapter as soon as I possibly can! Btw, I like your username! :D
Date: 12/01/10 10:22 am Title: Bill Leaves a Note
This is a plot that has been written again and again and might be a bit used up, BUT it's still cute and I'll follow it and see where you take it :D
Author's Response:
Hahaha! Yes yes, the plot is very overused, but I still love this kind of fics so I wanted to write one of my own! :P Thanks for the review!
Date: 12/01/10 09:53 am Title: Bill Leaves a Note
omg I'm definitely interested in more and I really wanna know what will happen, so plz update soon!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! And I'm glad you're interested! I'll update as soon as possible, dear! :)
Date: 12/01/10 09:50 am Title: Bill Leaves a Note
OH LORDY~ This is gonna be a great story.
Author's Response: I'm so happy you think so! Thanks for the review!
Date: 12/01/10 08:53 am Title: Bill Leaves a Note
awwww! yay! i cant get enough of fics where bill is just so inlove with tom, and tom is very popular! i love them! ^^ I love this too, already!:D I wanna read tom's reaction to the note, soon. :D
Author's Response: I know! I love that kind of fics too! :3 Thanks for liking this! I'll get the next chapter out as soon as I can, and I hope you'll like Tom's reaction!
Date: 12/01/10 07:45 am Title: Bill Leaves a Note
well, at least he had the courage to tell him...and he's not even gonna see it right away...stupid locker...it's interesting though and i'll be patiently waiting for the next chapter...
Author's Response: Lol! Yeah, I gotta give it to Bill, I know I would never have done that... >_< Death to the locker! Hahah, I was actually gonna have Tom see the note in the first chapter but I decided to be mean and changed it at the last moment... :P I'm glad you like it, and I'll get the next chapter out as soon as I can.
Date: 12/01/10 06:09 am Title: Bill Leaves a Note
ugh.. Toooom -.-
Author's Response: :P Thank you....? XD
Date: 12/01/10 02:19 am Title: Bill Leaves a Note
NOOOOOOOOOOO HE DIDN'T LOOK IN THE LOCKER! Okay now that I've got that out. I'm going to start by saying I don't normally read WIP. This plot really caught my attention though and when I asked my sister if she'd read it she said yes and I left a review. That is high praise since she only reviews a story after giving it 5 or 6 chapters, then going back to the others. I really liked this first chapter. While the topic is one that I've seen before I think your characterizations are fresh and I want to know what spin you will put on it. I hope that you can find the time to work on it. I'm very excited to read more. Great start.
Author's Response: Lol! Yeah I was gonna have Tom see the note in this chapter but I wrote that last bit up right before I posted it and thought to be a little mean and keep the readers hanging! :PrnWell, I don't really like to post stories without having at least half of it done already since I don't want to keep readers waiting for so long for chapters, but I dunno... *shrug* just felt like posting this, which probably might not have been a good idea.... -_-'rnBut I'm so glad you decided to give this story a try and I'm glad it caught your attention. And wow, I'm glad your sister likes this story so much too! (and I wish I had a sister who likes yummy twinsex....) I'm also kinda like her; unless the first chapter really catches my attention I usually don't review until some more chapters are up since I don't particularly like to suddenly abandon a story after reviewing it (even though I have done that already for many fics, but that's mainly because I've been shirking on my duties as a reviewer and not because I don't like the story anymore. For example: your story, Photographs of an American Summer. I think I reviewed the first chapter and then stopped.... :S But not because it's not interesting, I've just been slacking off... :'( I'm sorry... I will get to reviewing soon though!)rnYup, the subject is pretty overused in practically every fandom that could incorporate high school into fics, but I still love them! I've read many fics like this and decided to do one of my own. And wow, I'm glad you like my characterisation... I actually don't think it's very original or fresh personally, but I'm glad you think so!rnAnd yes I hope I'll find the time to update soon! Thank you so much for your review!
Date: 12/01/10 01:36 am Title: Bill Leaves a Note
Ooooh this looks good. Poor Bill though, the abandoned note trapped in Tom's locker. Looking forward to more. *hugs*
Author's Response: Mmhmm, the note must be feeling lonely... :( Thanks for the review dear! *hugsback*
Date: 12/01/10 01:26 am Title: Bill Leaves a Note
xD I like it honey :)
Author's Response: Thank you! :*
Date: 12/01/10 01:25 am Title: Bill Leaves a Note
Ooh, I'm intrigued, and really interested in seeing where this goes. I do hope that you update soon! =)
I'll just beo ver here, sticking this on my track list. ;)
Author's Response: I'm glad this caught your attention! I'll try to update as soon as I possibly can! Thanks for tracking it too! ^_^