Reviews For A Twins' Valentine
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Reviewer: LazyCakes Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/24/08 09:41 am Title: Chapter 1

Awwwwwwwww :P This is such a cute story. I came across your page from reading My Hero, the story you beta-ed. It's awesome. I love what the fans did. Of course if it were me I'd've been worse. I would have made sure Bill didn't get away. *snickers evily* Great Job. I'm off to read your other story =D

Author's Response: lol, I know right ^^ It would take a crowbar plus fifty Saki's to get me off Bill ^,^

Reviewer: th4moi Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/12/08 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 1

OMG Reem that turned out even better than when you explained it to me. I loved the way Saki came and saved the day. lol. It ended sooooo cute!

Author's Response: Why Thank you cousin Najiba dearest ^-^ I'm so glad that you liked it. Right now I am battling with Hamarooshi's project *rolls eyes* Thank you for the comment and I promise I will try and get the next chapter up for My Top One

Reviewer: LollyMuffin Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/27/08 10:57 pm Title: Chapter 1

omg, I don't even know where to start.
I loved it.
So sweet.
So believable.
I love Tom being so frank, and how innocent Bill reacts to it all.

*glomps*
adorable. :)

Author's Response: Danke Missa baby ^-^rnrnI'm really oh-so-very happy that you read it. and even more, liked it. You thinking about posting any work on here soon? I never really thought to ask if you're a writer.rnrnI got home early today. I mean, I finished my work and everything, but I supposed to have stopped and met up with Mariam (psychotic anorexic girl), but I started to feel really drowsy and umm... I couldn't muster the energy to walk. And omg, guess what? I was just leaving the cafe right? You know that guy that I told you about that Mariam took notes for but she quit because he kept touching on her? Well I couldn't take the job b/c he dropped the course. But anyways, as I was leaving out I heard him ask my girl, Andrea, what my name was. I was spooked that he might try and follow me. I walked out as fast as I could, but not too fast b/c I didn't have the energy. not even fifteen minutes later and I find myself lying in the middle of my bedroom floor. I am so exhausted and sickness has finally succumbed me. *yawns* so...so drowsy. *yawns again*rnrnI'll try calling you tonightrnrnlater ^,^rnrn~Reem n.n

Reviewer: jinxchan Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/26/08 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 1

Here I am again...
lol...
I cant get over, how much I liked this story!
I hope you realize, even if you say you dont, how great you are!
I crave and need more from you =P
You could totally write a longer story, with more chapters!
No doubt you could pull that off!
Character deaths and angst I have some probs with actually, but if you really want to write that, I will read it anyway! it would be worth it ^^

Author's Response: Again, I don't think that I have mentioned that I really REALLY like you ^-^ You make me want to go to my room and throw something really quick together. But unfortunately I don't just throw things together. I do have a story that will be posted soon though. Thanks to Hanzy. She's very supportive of my first chapter (I sent her the first chapter of my new story). And you seem like another supporter only after reading this. It really makes me wanna just glomp the hell out of you ^,~ I will post it here soon hopefully. I will notify you when I do I promise ^,^rnrnThe story that I DO plan on posting will be longer. I am highly flattered that you believe I could pull it off. You say that Character deaths and angst gives you problems? *extends a hand to yours and shakes it* Same here, babe. Same here. It's worse, I think, when the author makes you love the character right before killing them. But I am warning you right now...... be brave okay. And you have to promise that you will stick with my story. ^-^ I know that if you stick with it from beginning to end then you will feel blissfully happy.rnrnLater Jinx love <3rnrnrn~Ria ^,~

Reviewer: missMURDER Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/17/08 12:50 am Title: Chapter 1

ahaha, i love this.
dangggg, you're an amazing writer. :)

Author's Response: oooh, nice to see you so soon little missMurder ^-^ I'm glad you liked the story. It's always nice to come across comments ^w^rnrnja nernrnrn~Ria ^.~

Reviewer: jinxchan Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/15/08 08:57 pm Title: Chapter 1

And btw..
NEED more from you!!!

Author's Response: Did I mention that I love you ^-^ Okay I am dying to write another story. I write often but am never satisfied enough with my work to post anything. But this one I promised I'd post. I think mainly because it was valentines and the last fanfic I read on here was a depressing Fanfic of Tom getting killed. Such a tragedy. You see, I love angst, but I most certainly cannot do tragedies. I can, but I'd be balling my eyes out.rnrnHope to be able to please you again. Have a Nice night and thank you so much for your comment <3rnrnrn~Ria ^w^

Reviewer: jinxchan Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/15/08 08:56 pm Title: Chapter 1

Totally in character!!
Love it

Author's Response: Eeeeeeep. *blushes mad* Danke. I was really trying to put them in character. Doing that on such little sleep though AND trying to make it cute was a challenge.rnrn~Ria <3

Reviewer: LullusHuo Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/15/08 03:11 pm Title: Chapter 1

“You know he wouldn’t be able to fight them off. Just look at him?” Bill frowned again, giving his brother a severe look. “He can’t fight off a kitten.”

Lol. I loved this whole thing. Then entire one-shot was adorable. Humor AND fluff. What more could you ask for!?
.::Luffles It::.
X3

Author's Response: Awww, thank you so much Lullus. These comments make me want to upload something else. I'm flattered that I've had so many readers. I did try and make it short and fluffy. It tickles me pink that you found it adorable. rnrnTake Carernrnrn~Ria ^-^

Reviewer: SacredMonsoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/15/08 01:42 pm Title: Chapter 1

Cute!!

Author's Response: That's what I was pretty much TRYING to aim for. I didn't want it to be over the top, so I decided upon making Tom a little on the perverted side. Hope it worked ^w^rnrnrn~Ria <3

Reviewer: Majestrix Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/15/08 11:22 am Title: Chapter 1

Awww. Adorable.

OMG THE FANS ARE NUTS. I was really scared for the boys during this thing. Especially when they were about to pound down the door! I was screaming at the screen going, "Get out of there! Hurry up before they get yooooooooooouuuuuuuuuuu!" lol For real.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. It doesn't surprise me that I made such a spelling error, especially since Stavi is my nickname for Gustav. I corrected it. I appreciate that you caught that mistake for me. Like I said, I was highly sleep deprived when I typed it. But even so, AS a beta it would be most embarrasing to have made such a mistake. rnrnThe fans are nuts.rnrnDon't you agree that you'd be just as crazy though? *wink wink*rnrn~Ria ^-^

Reviewer: Blue Penguin Dude Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/15/08 10:50 am Title: Chapter 1

wow those fangirls...
i would say i wouldnt do that in that situation but i'd be lying lol...
loved it!

Author's Response: Thank you for the comment ^^ I was trying to make it realistic and you know what? My friend and I just a couple of hours ago were watching the Zimmer 483 concert DVD on my laptop. This girl is an asexual, I swear to you. My former psychology teacher is writing a paper over her. Poor girl has already been to three therapy sessions. Anyways, she has absolutely NO kind of a response to the male race, EXCEPT for Bill and the guys. She told me that she'd rape him in a heartbeat. I swear Bill is the only guy she likes.rnrnI know that if EVERYONE was attacking Tokio Hotel then I'd do the same ^,^rnrn~Ria <3

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