Date: 08/24/15 12:42 am Title: Chapter 7
I can't believe it says it's completed when it NOT. You need to fix that, like now.
I feel like i wanna kill you 'couse i only read finished stories and you lied to me :'(
Ok, once said that, i frikin' love this story, please please please give me an end, i beg you!!
Date: 02/28/12 06:29 am Title: Chapter 7
You can't end it like that :-( More please! :-)
Date: 01/07/12 10:21 pm Title: Chapter 7
Dude, if you don't finish this I will be devastated. Not only that, but I will freak out from not knowing what happened to Bill and Tom and Andi and all the rest!!!! But if you don't mind having that on your conscience...XD Kidding...sorta. But seriously, FINISH THE SEQUEL!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: I don't know when I'll be able to finish it, unfortunately. Most of my attention is focused on 'Amid the Flames' and it's eventual sequel. But I'll certainly keep it in mind. ^,^ Thanks for your wonderful reviews!
Date: 01/07/12 10:12 pm Title: Chapter 6
Astraea...that's the perfect irony. Also, Beiber looks more like twelve...XD I also LOVE that the cook is Dionysus XD It's just so fitting XD Well done so far, and I can't wait to read the rest (which is why I'm not going to XD)
Author's Response: I put a lot of thought into their code names, I'm super glad you appreciate them. :D
Date: 11/30/11 05:43 pm Title: Chapter 7
omg this is awsome you gotta finish it you gotta
Date: 05/04/11 01:57 pm Title: Chapter 7
oh you evil EVIL person! Leaving it there!!! You better post a sequel! I might have to come at you with a can of silly string if you dont! This is a really great fic and I am so very worried about Bill, 'cause there is no way they wont notice that tattoo slamming him face first to the ground like that...I hope the guys got away, and Bill was so very brave. I prsy he doesn't get processed. Please post the sequel soon. I really look forward to it!
Date: 05/04/11 02:13 am Title: Chapter 7
*FLAILS* OMG nooooo Bill can't hand himself in!! Damnn him for being all noble and brave. *sobs*
Oh honey you have to write the sequel, I neeeeeed it badly. I have to know what happens, did Tom and Andi get away? What happens to Bill? I can't bare the thought of him being processed!! And what about the G's? *breathe Alli*
Please write the sequel, I will gift you with shiny and yummy things *bats eyelashes*
Date: 05/01/11 02:23 am Title: Chapter 7
amazing! whats the name of the sequel? o:
Date: 04/29/11 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 7
DUDE!!!!!!!! i'm not surprised but MAN BILL HAD BETTER BE OK!!!!!!!!!!! nice chap though.... :P
Author's Response: Not surprised!? I must not be working hard enough. Alas, the story is all laid out and it's too late to change it now. I am glad you liked it, though. You'll find out what happens to Bill in the sequel :)
Date: 04/29/11 09:00 pm Title: Chapter 7
wow. just read from the start. when is the sequel coming. I'm anxious.
Author's Response: Soon, I hope. I wouldn't want to keep fans of the story waiting too long :) Thank you for taking the time to review.
Date: 04/29/11 07:30 pm Title: Chapter 7
Holy mother of all music! you have got to keep on writing! if you dont, its gonna make me crazy! this story is so amazing, i read all the chapters at once now and i cant believe that i havent read it before!! But please please put us out of our missery and post the sequel! :D
Author's Response: It's absolutely good to know that you enjoyed it. I'm working on the sequel and lovely reviews like this one make me want to keep going ^.^
Date: 02/24/11 03:05 am Title: Chapter 6
lol, i like the idea of the kid being justin bieber. I can see him being jaded, esp after the CSI episodes he was in. Thanks for the great update!
Author's Response: You're welcome ^.^ And thank you!
Date: 02/23/11 04:04 am Title: Chapter 6
Oh goodness! Thank you sweetie, I'm so pleased I could inspire you. This was an awesome chapter, it's great to see that Bill is settling into working for the Creep.
I'd so love to see Bill giving Harpy her makeover, so cute. I love how you worked in the TH symbol that was very cool though I agree with Tom, having it tattooed on his neck could be dangerous. Is it wise for Tom to flaunt his feelings for Bill? Even in front of Gaia? I hope that no one will use that against them.
Seems like Bill has been very busy, I hope the liberating of the harp goes well. Can't wait for more hon *smooshes*
Author's Response: Over the course of the year, Bill is starting to feel very comfortable and very secure. This is probably not a good thing, given how tenuous the underground's position in the world is. They are both young and in love, it's hard to keep that kind of thing to yourself especially in front of close friends. At that point they know Gaia well enough to know she won't react badly. Notice that they showed no excess affection at their next mission together and that's because they don't know the others (like Dion) as well. About the tattoo, in Bill's defense, the symbol is still young and not very well known at the time he gets the tattoo, perhaps he didn't think about it until it was too late. More will come soon! Hopefully tonight!
Date: 02/23/11 03:17 am Title: Chapter 5
AHHHHH *flail* they kissed!!!! And more than that they're being sneaky and scheming and I love it!! I adore this Bill, he's so confident and passionate. It's a sad world they live in without music and not being allowed to show their love *sigh* Can't wait to read the next chapter *hugs*
Date: 02/22/11 11:42 pm Title: Chapter 6
eeeeeeeeeeeew, you HAD to drag the beaver kid into this....... i would like him a bit more if he wrote his own music and went to where he's at on his own, not because some big shot found him..... anyway, great chapter, can't wait to see where you take this!!!!!
Author's Response: Ever since the Bieber Takeover of the site, the damn kid's worked his way into all of my TH fanfiction. One of these days I'm going to work a redemption in there for him and you're going to have to like, even if it's only grudgingly. Glad you like it. I think you'll be surprised where the next chapter ends up.
Date: 02/22/11 04:17 am Title: Chapter 5
ooh, this is exciting, i can't wait for more!!
Date: 02/19/11 05:44 am Title: Chapter 4
Omg you have no idea how much I squeed when I saw this updated!! Heee Bill almost kissing Tom and then Tom's admission that he's almost done it twice!! I can't wait to see how Tom makes it up to Bill *wink* Love Apollo taking Hermes to headquarters, very interested in what he's going to be doing for The Creep. Loving this and definitely wanting more *huggles*
Author's Response: I hope the next few chapters live up to your expectations ^.^
Date: 02/19/11 03:51 am Title: Chapter 4
Excellent chapter. I have no complaints if this ends up longer than you had planned. Keep up the great work. =)
Author's Response: That's great! I'm so glad.
Date: 02/19/11 12:28 am Title: Chapter 4
huh..... well, THE PLOT THICKENS!!!!!!! great job here, can't wait to see what happens next, and i hope the next installment comes a wee bit sooner lol
Author's Response: Hopefully right away! Thank you for reviewing ^.^
Date: 12/03/10 05:03 pm Title: Chapter 3
YES!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: YAY!!!