Date: 02/22/08 01:41 am Title: “Who said I accepted your crazy request?”
*A Boy is the deepest love a leader of the Lumina can find. And it is so rare that one do. But when one do, they know it's for real. They just know in their hearts. Still, a man's heart tend to be overruled by the seductive powers a common boy can have on them. More than they want to know and too many times has a leader been stabbed in the back and left bleeding until they removed the knife and stabbed themselves again.*
missed the point. again.
*Omg, I'm going home in a basket now :(*
what does that mean?
otherwise, it was good. very good. finally some more action from Bill...
Author's Response: It means that a boy, it's like the deepest love you can find. Love for a lifetime, ya? But some of the Boys were influenced or whatever by other "forces" that made them into traitors, ya? And the basket part means he'll be going home, chopped up in limbs. Thanks.
Date: 02/22/08 12:32 am Title: “Who said I accepted your crazy request?”
Oh my! This is GREAT! update soon please!
Author's Response: Thanks! :D
Date: 02/21/08 08:35 pm Title: “Who said I accepted your crazy request?”
yay *Happy Dances*
Author's Response: *dances along*
Date: 02/18/08 09:36 pm Title: "Georg is right, this is a fool's arguement"
this fic is weird, but a good weird :D
I like the whole idea of it.
Tom is such a badd ass but also so sweet. Bill is just adorable and dumb. i love them both.
sorry i haven't reviwed before. i'll try to in the future :D
can't wait for more :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Kat ;D
Date: 02/18/08 07:43 pm Title: "Georg is right, this is a fool's arguement"
the sexual tension!! teehee
Author's Response: Gotta love that, eh?
Date: 02/18/08 05:13 pm Title: "Georg is right, this is a fool's arguement"
you underestimate yourself, honey! seriously, i thought it wasn't a bad chapter! i liked it. especially the bath part. ;)
Bill being so straightforward is something else i really like; it's hot when he talks back to the authority. ^^ *giggles insanely*
oh, but one question, if you don't mind:
This was The Boy. The one all in the Lumina waited their entire life for. The one that would be his mate for life.
does this mean that only Tom wants 'the Boy' or the Lumina do too? and what for?
lol. i'm a bit confused by that. :/ but i really can't wait for what's in store for both of them! continue, pretty-pleaseeee! :DDD
Author's Response: It's going to be explained in the next chapter :) Thank you so much! Aw, you made my... night :P
Date: 02/18/08 03:31 pm Title: "Georg is right, this is a fool's arguement"
“What do you want me to do?” Bill asked, knowing it was a bad idea.
“You know what I want you to do. The question is what I need you to do”
OOOOOMG *-* *DIES*
Tom groaned as he heard the door close behind him and let himself sink down in the water, letting it get over his head. He knew now that this wasn't a regular boy. This was The Boy. The one all in the Lumina waited their entire life for. The one that would be his mate for life. He knew it so well.
As his head rose from the water again, he was determined get him, no matter what. Even if it meant he would have to break every single rule to get him.
okay know I'm desperate for more LOL.... that chapter almost killed me...
I'm serious...
the soap thing was the best xD
keep the awesome job ;)
Author's Response: Aw, you are too sweet! :) I was this close to ending this fic, but I think this kept me going! Thank you! ;D
Date: 02/18/08 02:40 pm Title: "Georg is right, this is a fool's arguement"
The two other boys stared at the third one with their mouths open. Tom was merely there for the public speaking and the looks of the boys, neither of them thought he had an opinion and less so a strong opinion
missed your point on that one
Author's Response: Oh. Andreas and Georg were staring at Tom. He's like the one who doesn't have a saying on the "political" matter, he is just there for "kissing babies and shaking hands" right? And the look upon him as a pretty-boy, ya?
Date: 02/18/08 06:55 am Title: Introductio to the Lumina
what's happening to my reviews, they all come out half shorter than they were when i typed them?!
that WAS a compliment when it comes from me.
*also good that Tom can see how special Bill is. now if Bill could just see how special Tom is, that would be perfect.
bad, though, that Andreas is one of the bad guys here... i love Andreas
Author's Response: I love him too, but someone had to be it ;) And I am still not letting it sink in :O A COMPLIMENT! :P
Date: 02/18/08 06:47 am Title: “I beat you hard, so the other's won't beat you harder."
it's really baahaad!
just kidding, that's what i think about the other story.
it's good that Bill thinks good enough of himself not to let himself become a whore
Author's Response: What other story! xD And... Was that a compliment? STOP THE PRESSES!
Date: 02/17/08 08:55 pm Title: “I beat you hard, so the other's won't beat you harder."
WHOOOOOOOOOOOOO...! personal servant! :D *squeals*
it's so exciting!^^ but i'm glad that Bill's still preserving his pride and dignity in not being Tom's fuck-toy. *is very proud of him* :)
great job, hon! more soon, pretty-pleaseee! :DDD
Author's Response: Thank you! Oh, you make me all squealy here :P
Date: 02/17/08 08:17 pm Title: “Sir, I'd rather not...”
oh wow. Georg, the strong-silent type likes raphael. hehe. (i was actually quite pleased with that; raphael's one of my favourite painters!^^)
and Tom already made his move on Bill. wow. i dunno what else i expected. XD
Author's Response: He was awesome indeed. T/B - that's what to expect ;) Thanks for your review ;D
Date: 02/17/08 07:14 pm Title: “I beat you hard, so the other's won't beat you harder."
Holy scheiße!!!! This is good. I'm looking forward to when Bill gives in a decides to take Tom up on his offer. LOL. Who knows. He could get Tom to fall in love with him instead.
Yummi this is a good chapter!!
Author's Response: Who says that's gonna happen! :P Hehe, thank you :)
Date: 02/17/08 06:56 pm Title: “I beat you hard, so the other's won't beat you harder."
OKAAAAAAAY
*scream loudly as she can*
I am loving it *-*
it's so different, and OMG...
I want more :B
Author's Response: Schrei so laut du kannst, jaaaa! :P Thank you :)
Date: 02/17/08 06:20 pm Title: “I beat you hard, so the other's won't beat you harder."
lovely!
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Date: 02/16/08 07:50 pm Title: “Sir, I'd rather not...”
Do I get to read more of this one?!!!
It's good, I can already imagine what Bill looks like!
Author's Response: Yes! This is actually the biggest "project" I got now. Thanks for liking it!
Date: 02/16/08 03:03 pm Title: “Sir, I'd rather not...”
“I think I'm going to keep you. Not as a servant, but as mine.”
i was hoping he'd say that.
“Ng.... Yes” Bill said, hands shaking like crazy.
but i was hoping bill would NOT say that
Author's Response: Hoho. Just keep reading, and you'll be all set.
Date: 02/16/08 02:32 pm Title: Introductio to the Lumina
keeping all this on mind is gonna be quite difficult! there's a lot said here...
-with the risk of sounding like a broken record or a scratched CD but- where is Bill in all this? and why is Andreas the mean one? i adore Andreas!
-oh, wait, i've been bitchy long enough, it's time to focus on the good and bright things!- it's quite original and sounds interesting so far. i like how you made it that they're not all at the same level.
just find two things not completely clear:
1. where and when is all this?
2. are there any women there now?
Author's Response: These are two chapters, so Bill hasn't had his time to "shine" yet. But he is one of the two mains here. Andreas? It was either him or Georg and Georg seems more stoic. 1. It's supposed to be unknown, but I'm guessing in the fifties? 2. No. No women.
Date: 02/16/08 06:05 am Title: “Sir, I'd rather not...”
ooohhhhh yummi. So tom likes him already. Hee. LOL. Yes, I'm sure the looks of a god such as Bill can do that to people. ^^
Author's Response: Hehehe, so true :)
Date: 02/16/08 05:23 am Title: “Sir, I'd rather not...”
You're doing this to tease, neptunsie! You're converting me into a straight twincest-shipper! xD That kiss was just hawt!
Author's Response: Come over to the Twincest side, Nadi. We got everything you want, except het ;P Thank youu!