Date: 11/26/10 03:00 am Title: I scream into the night for you!
Normally I don't like this kind of story, but this really got to me. I like (well, of course I don't like, but you know what I mean :)) how Bill doesn't jump, but "accidentally" slips... Well done, thank you! *accepts cookie*
Author's Response: :D Your very welcome! I am so glad that you liked it. :) I tried my very hardest to make it sound well, not realistic but something like that. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing :D
Date: 11/26/10 12:32 am Title: I scream into the night for you!
Er, I'm afraid to say this is the everyday story about Bill getting hurt by Tom which drives him to suicide with Tom realizing what he'd done at the end. I'd love to read something new once in a while.
Author's Response: Well, I'm sorry to have disappointed you. I haven't ever written a story like this one so I thought that I might give it a try. So I am very sorry. thank you for reading it anyways.
Date: 11/25/10 11:04 am Title: I scream into the night for you!
It's kinda messed up, but I liked the ending. I dunno, I guess I just think it's more realistic. All these stories on this site where the suicidal one gets saved last minute and they all live happily ever after. But serious, that rarely happens. Don't get me wrong, it's sad he died, but I just think it makes the story mean more cause he did.
Good job, really
:)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review. I know it's messed up, and yet, it just works out. I don't understand why I would ever let myself want to kill Bill, but I was just in one of those moods. thanks for reading and reviewing :D