Date: 02/23/08 05:32 pm Title: "This is insane!"
option C! ;D
Date: 02/23/08 04:11 pm Title: "This is insane!"
Loved the chapter! Even if it was short. Hmm.. about the directions of the story.. *ponder* I like the last one.. XD I'd love the drama that would come out of it xD and david would probably have a fit.. which is always funny.
The first one would be kind of boring... :/ But then again I dunno what else you've planned, so it would probably work too.
Date: 02/23/08 12:25 pm Title: "This is insane!"
I would prefer the C plan... it looks more feasible... ))
Date: 02/23/08 07:30 am Title: "This is insane!"
plzplz C!!!C!!!C!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
xXx
Date: 02/23/08 07:21 am Title: "This is insane!"
C) Having the whole thing accidentally come out to the label, the band, and their parents but stay hidden from the public.
I loved it...like usual :D
Date: 02/23/08 06:28 am Title: "You're sick too?"
Well. I like C too. I think it would be more of a brain challenge to come up with a way to figure out how to explain it all to thier closest, then to just thier parents. I have faith in you. You'll do it just the way it supposed to be. keep up the great work.
Date: 02/23/08 05:04 am Title: "This is insane!"
I think that b and c are more realistic ;)
Can't wait to read what you come up with
Date: 02/23/08 04:34 am Title: "This is insane!"
ahah C wins! xD
Date: 02/23/08 04:16 am Title: "This is insane!"
Some malfunction just killed my review. >_<
So in short:
Good but short chapter. Still love the story. I have a craving for onion flavoured chips now and I want C.
Can't wait for the next part!
Date: 02/23/08 03:45 am Title: "This is insane!"
okay. thats it. C I guess ^^
I dont wanna them to die in a concert lol
Date: 02/23/08 03:43 am Title: "This is insane!"
hide their pregnancies through the end....I think thats kind of impossible ...=_=
shit.
now you got me stuck too.. i really dont know. this decision is kinda hard *bites my lip* ... I feel your pain. lol
and If they keep having concerts like this they'll end dieing in the middle of one...
gaaaaaaahhhh I dont know!
*dies*
Date: 02/23/08 03:18 am Title: "What are we going to tell everyone?"
It is enjoyable.
Can I suggest a spell check? There's this one word which I found to be constantly misspelt in this and a few of the previous chapters.
'Dieing' should be spelt 'dying'.
There are a few typos as well, but I'm sure a spellcheck could catch them.
Author's Response: If I didn't use spellcheck, it would be way worse. Thanks for point out the dieing/dying mistake. That's the sort of thing that spellcheck does not catch. *sigh* I really do need to find a beta. I can't catch all my own mistakes.
Date: 02/23/08 01:53 am Title: "This is insane!"
C! Oh please make it C!
There is so much potential for humor, and angst, and all that good stuff...
Oh, I dunno, I guess I just want to read David's reaction.
Author's Response: Great... So far I have one vote for A, one for B, and one for C. All three options have so much potential! It's frustrating.
Date: 02/21/08 04:55 pm Title: "I missed you so much."
Mm...That was hot. I love shower sex. I do hope Tom can come to accept his situation soon, though. And all this talk of groupies, why can't he just be true to Bill. -pouts-
Date: 02/21/08 12:00 pm Title: "I missed you so much."
Once again, great!
Date: 02/20/08 09:06 am Title: "I missed you so much."
Yessss, they got some action! Excellent chapter, Froggy!
Date: 02/20/08 08:54 am Title: "I missed you so much."
yay - the twins are back together! ^^ and that shower scene... WHOA. XD
love this so much! can't wait to see what's next! :DDD
Date: 02/20/08 08:31 am Title: "I missed you so much."
gaaaaaaaaahhhhh!!!! so FAN-FREAKING-TASTIC! LOVE IT!!!
Date: 02/20/08 04:19 am Title: "I missed you so much."
hee an octopus. That's funni. LOL.
OH GAWD THIS IS HAWT!!! I gotta STOP reading thus before school. I don't have time for a cold shower and if I dont have one, I won't make it through the day. Mmm gawd this is driving me crazy. Gawd!
Author's Response: lol. Glad you liked it.