Date: 02/26/08 11:35 am Title: "Keeping secrets isn't good for you."
Oh no!!!! It's louis??? He found out somehow....can't wait to see what happens!
Date: 02/26/08 11:15 am Title: "Keeping secrets isn't good for you."
Omg please update!! Don't leave it there, I'm actually teetering on the edge of my seat!
Date: 02/26/08 09:26 am Title: "Keeping secrets isn't good for you."
loooooooove it!
Date: 02/26/08 03:31 am Title: "Keeping secrets isn't good for you."
ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Naughty. ;)
Date: 02/25/08 10:13 pm Title: "Keeping secrets isn't good for you."
HOLY SHIT. It was that bitch/nurse, wasn't it?! *is steamed*
Bill's vanity was trumped only by his love of his twin, but considering they shared the same face that really wasn't saying much.
Absolutely hilarious. And probably true.
Date: 02/25/08 07:26 pm Title: "Did that say libido?"
Hmm...My shcrei senses are tingling, and they have nothing to do with the Tom/Bill-ness...Well maybe a little , but no matter...
My schrei senses tell me that Louis is no pregnant guy! Bill shall be exposed! Tom shall be exposed! Twincest shall be exposed! Yay!
Date: 02/25/08 11:20 am Title: "Did that say libido?"
Ooh who is this guy?? So intrigued!Please carry on soon!!
Date: 02/25/08 07:54 am Title: "Did that say libido?"
[After all, Bill was a common name and he was using a fake e-mail address. There couldn't possibly be any harm in telling this guy his name.]
Ohoh...I smell trouble...please tell me I'm wrong.
Date: 02/25/08 07:48 am Title: "Did that say libido?"
holy god IS HE STUPID???? TELLING HIS NAME LIKE THAT??????!!!!!!!!
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I smell problems =_=
Date: 02/25/08 01:47 am Title: "Did that say libido?"
I am DIGGING this story so bad xD Oooh, the forum thing is very interesting *nods* I just hope the guy doesn't find out who he is! .... or... maybe i do... bring on the drama! XD
Anyway, weird what u said about Bill being a common name :P I know a german girl who says she's never heard of anyone else with that name... but that might be just her.. i don't know xD
Anyhow... Update soon and keep me sane ^^
Author's Response: Well, I know Wilhelm is a fairly common German name. I don't know how many people shorten it to Bill in Germany. Let's just pretend that Bill knows it's common internationally. I will update soon.
Date: 02/25/08 12:39 am Title: "Did that say libido?"
hm... there are more cases than the doctor said... I'm smelling epidemic!
Date: 02/24/08 11:53 pm Title: "Did that say libido?"
I love this story! I was a bit thrown off when I found out it was BOTH the twins pregnant, but you've managed to write it in such a way that I know you'll be able to pull it off!
You're writing is great, and the twins relationship is perfect. I like how realistic this is, even though it's about MALE pregnancy. I like it when a story is very believeable! and yours is.
I'm on the edge of my seat here, because so much could happen! What with them eventually going to show, and having all these plans; then with this other man that's pregnant that Bill is talking to...
The end part of this chapter made me laugh. xD Bill just needs to know people think he's hot to feel better!
Author's Response: Thank you. Honestly, I was nervous about making both twins pregnant. I wanted to do mpreg, but it had to be different since Makes Three is pretty much the perfect pregnant Bill story already. Making believable mpreg is damned hard. I don't even expect it to be believable, but I try to get as close as possible. I at least want to be the characters to be believable, even if the situation really isn't.
Date: 02/24/08 10:13 pm Title: "Did that say libido?"
veryyy nice! i dunno why, but i have a teensy weensy bad feeling about this louis guy. :/
great job, anyways. more soon, please! :D
Date: 02/24/08 09:51 pm Title: "This is insane!"
great chappie... i vote C! :D it'd definitely be more interesting if the band and label found out! ^^
Date: 02/24/08 09:18 pm Title: "Did that say libido?"
I liked it I thought it was really good I hope you update it soon.
Date: 02/24/08 08:15 pm Title: "This can't be happening."
NOOO I HATE MAN PRENGNESY!!
Author's Response: You should have read the tags then. Mpreg is in the warnings.
Date: 02/24/08 08:09 pm Title: "This can't be happening."
' “Because if I'm having an ass baby, so are you,” he snapped.
Tom's laughter faded and the smile instantly left his face. “You're right, it's not funny,” he said dryly. '
That's great right there! I was laughing more than I should have at this chapter. great job! :D
Author's Response: All the joking about "ass babies" in the Schrei box inspired me to include that.
Date: 02/24/08 08:01 pm Title: "I am so tired of being sick."
*sqeek*OMG! WAS NOT PREPARED! OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG! I LVOE IT!!
Date: 02/24/08 07:47 pm Title: "You're sick too?"
omg, i love it! I'm IN lvoe with it!
Date: 02/24/08 06:38 pm Title: "Did that say libido?"
Ego boost hahahh. The boys definitely need everything that makes them happy now! Poor stressful pregnancy.