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Reviewer: TokioParade Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/17/08 06:05 am Title: "Do you want to know the sex?"

AAHHHH!!! BABIES!!! awwww!
update sooon!!!
xoxox

Reviewer: NaughtyKittyKat Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/14/08 11:18 am Title: "Do you want to know the sex?"

Awwww...poor Billy. *whispers*Iwantedhimtohavealittlegirltoo*whispers* >_>
Loved the chapter! And the twist with the different conception times was really cool and...unexpected.^^

Reviewer: Cornflakes Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/10/08 03:22 pm Title: "Do you want to know the sex?"

Aww.. That was so sweet..

- I guess the voting is over but I would like the names to be Sara and Alexander.. I don't know.. Anyways, I loved this chapter.. I can totally imagine Bill being a all weepy and saying the : I WANTED A GIRL! OMG.. I laughed so hard.. Thanks for this wonderfull story!

Author's Response: Voting is still open, but you do have to be an LJ member and logged in to vote. I'll keep your suggestions in mind though. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: szasz Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/10/08 02:01 pm Title: "Do you want to know the sex?"

i loved Bill's reaction!! how he said that he wanted a girl.. ))))
your desicion on the kids' sex is the best!!! )))

Reviewer: EmmaKafrum Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/10/08 09:38 am Title: "Do you want to know the sex?"

aaawwwww!!! EMMA OF COURSE!!!! lol
this is soooooo good!!! xD

Reviewer: cadixa Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/10/08 08:51 am Title: "Do you want to know the sex?"

poor bill!! he wanted to a have a little girl to spoil... and tom is having a girl!! i knew it! it's gonna be funny see those two...

Reviewer: BrokenMirror Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/10/08 06:50 am Title: "Do you want to know the sex?"

*bawls like Bill* aaaaw!

Lol, they both want the opposite sex xD poor babies haha.

Ooh, baby name poll?? Where?! *runs to LJ*

Reviewer: vampgurl22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/09/08 10:20 pm Title: "Do you want to know the sex?"

Loved it I thought it was really good.

Reviewer: Sexylittlefeet22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/09/08 10:18 pm Title: "Do you want to know the sex?"

YAY! You picked a girl and a boy. And Toms having the girl! Thats want I was hoping!

Reviewer: Heiligx Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/09/08 10:02 pm Title: "Do you want to know the sex?"

Great chapter!

Reviewer: Majestrix Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/09/08 09:59 pm Title: "Do you want to know the sex?"

Awww, a boy and a girl each. I wanted that to happen! It cracked me up that Tom was having the girl. Good job on this chapter, it was marvelous.

Author's Response: Thanks. I had such a hard time deciding. It took me a long time to figure out what to have the babies be, and then it took even longer to figure out which of them was having the girl and which was having the boy. The idea of Tom being pregnant with a girl makes me giggle.

Reviewer: Zina Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/09/08 02:29 pm Title: "What the hell?"

I prefer boys, by boys could burn boys:-))

Reviewer: Cornflakes Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/09/08 09:28 am Title: "What the hell?"

I think one of each. Bill being the 'mother' of the boy.. I think Tom would be an adorable father/mother of a girl.. :P Hahah.. Anyways, I really like this chapter. The end is my favourite part.. :D Thanks for posting !

Reviewer: twinprincess Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/09/08 04:53 am Title: "What the hell?"

Great story, I adore it !!
And I'd love for Bill to have a girl and Tom a boy ^^

Reviewer: Heiligx Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/08/08 10:31 pm Title: "What the hell?"

I think one of each would be cool. Or make it two girls, since Bill and Tom are both guys.

Reviewer: Rancixxx Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/08/08 04:53 pm Title: "What the hell?"

Great story. Tom should have a boy and bill should have a girl.

Reviewer: NaughtyKittyKat Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/08/08 03:59 pm Title: "What the hell?"

Hmmm...that a difficult decision...
I think I like the thought of one of each the most...Y'know Tom's being the boy and Bill's being the girl.

Reviewer: blissfulstupor Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/08/08 02:21 pm Title: "What the hell?"

So, I finally read all of this, and I must tell you that this is a first for me. I avoid mpreg like the plague. I don't know why, but maybe because some write it poorly so I just started to avoid it completely.
But, yours is really good. I love the details and how much more realistic it is opposed to others. So yeah, thanks. Your story will probably still be the only I read though. xP
Nevertheless, I can't wait for the next update, dear.
If you don't mind me mentioning...you italized the whole chapter instead of only that section. Thought I'd let you know :]


xo Allie

Author's Response: Ack! I probably messed up the closing tag on the HTML. Thanks for letting me know. Thank you for all the complements. If you do ever decided to read another mpreg "...Makes Three" by Majestrix is an excellent mpreg fic if you're interested in another story that tries to be realistic. M3 is the story that inspired me to try mpreg in the first place.

Reviewer: cadixa Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/08/08 12:35 pm Title: "What the hell?"

i think tom's baby should be a girl!!i guess it sounds funny and cute!! it's a great story! I want more!! ***

Reviewer: abc Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/08/08 11:43 am Title: "What the hell?"

why dont you make the twins have twins each?

great story
propper love it loads

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