Date: 09/08/08 12:36 am Title: "Touch me"
Oh. My. God. I almost creamed myself. That. Was. HOT!
Date: 09/07/08 11:59 pm Title: Nice and smooth
haha that chapter was cute and sexy! love how georg was there too :P
Date: 09/07/08 03:33 am Title: New found confidence (and friends?)
AWww i'm so happy this wasn't the usual "everything sucks at the party" scene! Loved it... especially the end!
Date: 09/07/08 03:33 am Title: New found confidence (and friends?)
AWww i'm so happy this wasn't the usual "everything sucks at the party" scene! Loved it... especially the end!
Date: 09/06/08 12:30 am Title: Close
Such a sad ending to such a happy chatper. It was good though! I love it... obviously this is what my third or fourth comment tonight... hehe seriously though. it's amazing.
Date: 09/05/08 11:33 pm Title: "Oh Lord, he fell hard."
Haha that yeah bit was halerious!
Date: 09/05/08 11:24 pm Title: His person
Awww, i'm going to read more tonight but I just had to comment on this chatper. That was so effing cute!!!
Date: 09/05/08 11:20 pm Title: Close
You really underestimate yourself. Apart from the chapter with the first kiss, that was my favorite so far. Beautifully written and so adorable! I loved how Bill stood at Tom's bed, undecided which side to use and waited for Tom.
What can I say? Love, love, love your story!
Date: 09/04/08 07:37 pm Title: "Oh Lord, he fell hard."
oh my, I am sitting here with a big fluffy smile upon my face and having the sweetest time reading your story. It's so adorable. Thanks for it
Date: 09/04/08 06:14 pm Title: His person
I am completely in love with this chapter and with your style of writing ... that kiss was so ... unexpected and beautiful. Yes, Tom is definitely Bill's person.
Date: 09/04/08 06:05 pm Title: Someone cares
awww I loved the ending. Tom, the knight in shining armor :)
Date: 09/04/08 06:00 pm Title: Someone cares
omg Tom's reaction - adorable. I think this was the most beautiful lie I've ever heard :)
Date: 08/30/08 11:11 am Title: Thank you
Ohh! I have just finished this before I have to hop off to work, and Im so glad I did! Beautiful! Wonderful! Stunning! I really dont have the words to be terrible eloquent right now, but I cant wait to see the sequel!
Date: 08/29/08 06:41 pm Title: His person
Awww! 'Can I kiss you?'
That line totally took me by surprise, in the best kind of way. Just, snuggly warm feelings in the end of this chapter
Date: 08/24/08 12:07 pm Title: His person
I love :')
and i don't know what to say in fact; it is so... super
Date: 08/21/08 02:01 pm Title: The start of something new
i love this ff i really do!!
thxs
Date: 08/21/08 01:54 pm Title: Sorry
kill him!!! please do it!
Date: 08/21/08 01:07 pm Title: Confrontation
they have problems... fuck!
Date: 08/21/08 01:00 pm Title: The Fool
he touchs bill and i kill him!