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Reviewer: Todo se fuga Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/30/09 10:59 pm Title: Thank you

Hi!
I just finished reading and I can't wait to go ahead with the sequeal. I loved the whole thing.
It was really really fun.
Thanks for sharing!

Reviewer: isabelporpino Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/23/09 09:23 pm Title: "He'll get used to it"

“Awesome!” Georg exclaimed, “I’m Peach!”

Tom stopped what he was doing and stared at the brunette.

“What? Her kart’s fucking fast! Just wait and see,” Georg rubbed his hands.

Tom laughed, wondering how somebody who was completely straight could act this gay.


HSHSHDJKG I AM LAUGHING MY ASS OFF WITH GEO XD really dude, he's the best n_n

Reviewer: Kaulitz_Love Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/20/09 03:57 am Title: He never expected it

Those people are crazzzy! Bill is awesome! lol

Reviewer: Kaulitz_Love Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/20/09 03:51 am Title: Tomorrow is the day of Love

HaHa I would luvv to get a rose from Tom.

Reviewer: bubbles Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/08/09 12:29 am Title: Thank you

I loved this story so much :D it was great. Please let me know what the name of the sequel is so I can read it!

Reviewer: bubbles Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/07/09 10:54 pm Title: Crossing the line... or not?

aww :D I think it's so sweet how they fall asleep in each other's arms...they make a really cute couple in this story. I hope Gustav will be mentioned later, I was beginning to wonder when he was going to show up ;)

Reviewer: ilovetomkaulitz411 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/09 03:29 am Title: Thank you

I fucking love this story! (:

Reviewer: situations Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/18/09 06:16 am Title: The start of something new

I think this story was really cute, even though I'm not a big fan of some of the overdone genres, like hurt and comfort. You wrote it rather well, though, and deserve the place you have in the top tens.

There's just so many generic issues and scenes thrown in that I've read many variatons of before, even things like the ending. But that's what happens when you write a high school sort of story typically.

Despite all of that, though, it was really enjoyable and I thought you did a good job on the story.

Reviewer: twincestkindom Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/22/09 12:46 pm Title: The start of something new

awwwwww!! thanks!! sequel!!!

Reviewer: Allie535 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/15/09 04:35 am Title: The dreaded talk

haha hun u sound like bill apologizing so much! the story is amazing so far, i had to stop to comment and im not even finished reading! i

Reviewer: Princess2000204 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/29/09 02:49 pm Title: Thank you

Loved this story, I really liked how you kept the boys personalities consistent. I would have liked to seem more of the cause for Bill's issues with people, except the given with people ignoring and avoiding him.

 

Certainly going to look for the sequel now!!!!

Reviewer: looo0ceans Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/15/09 04:56 am Title: His person

*sob* NOOOOOOOOO.... I wanna be Bill's person!!!! *sobs again and runs under a rock in deppression and envy*

Reviewer: stoicgenius Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/13/09 05:18 pm Title: Tomorrow is the day of Love

This story is so awesome! I enjoyed every bit of it!

Reviewer: jebakaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/07/09 10:49 pm Title: The dreaded talk

no it wasnt tooo cheesey!!! the last line was perfect, poet really!!!

Reviewer: jebakaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/07/09 09:22 pm Title: Martini & Sex Stuff

“I’ll show you whatever you want, whenever you want,”
holy shit
holy shit.
that is like the hottest thing i have ever heard. :O:O:O:O
my god.

Reviewer: jebakaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/07/09 09:14 pm Title: Georg meets the black-haired beauty

BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA GEORG!!! hahahhaha "that was- FUCK!!!"
hahaha LOLOLOL omg that was good.

Reviewer: bill_tomkaulitzlove Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/04/09 05:04 pm Title: The start of something new

*claps.* LOVED IT. its an amazing story. i cant wait to read the sequel!

Reviewer: BlackAngelWalking Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/09 08:09 am Title: Tomorrow is the day of Love

Oh. My. God O.o
I've just read the whole story in one fucking day and I only have one comment: AMAZING!
You write them so real and truthful - I cheered for Bill all the way! :'D I really love the way you write, a bit rushed sometimes but it's nothing. So well written and a exellent plot! ^^,

Reviewer: vaasa121 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/09 09:06 pm Title: Thank you

ARE YOU FUCKING SERIOUS??

first fan fic in ENGLISH?

wtf?!?! I can't write fiction as well as you do and that's my forte! and my first language.

all i can honestly say is bravo. it was a great read.

well done. i was written well and tom and bill were so different to all the other toms and bills on this site.

Reviewer: Burntsienna Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/24/09 01:50 am Title: Thank you

I loved this story! Thank you for writing it. :)

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