Date: 04/19/08 09:00 am Title: Crossing the line... or not?
whoa that was hot^^
Jeej Bill's opening up a bit, that's really great! And tom is so patience also very good:)
great chappie!!
Date: 04/18/08 11:31 am Title: Crossing the line... or not?
Awww that's a really sweet chapter!
I love this story.
Well writen!
=D
x
Date: 04/18/08 02:19 am Title: Crossing the line... or not?
did I like it?
once again
I love it ^^
I lov ethat Bill finally did it tihi
but I want Tom to touch him too
obviously ;)
Date: 04/17/08 09:49 pm Title: Crossing the line... or not?
aww!! the ending was just adorable!
and why should bill shave just cause tom does?! D=
but still, his self confidence IS getting better! ^^
and I'm loving it.
one of the best stories out there,
please, more soon! ♥
Date: 04/17/08 09:08 pm Title: Crossing the line... or not?
I loved it
Date: 04/17/08 07:51 pm Title: Crossing the line... or not?
I didn't catch any mistakes. The beginning of this chapter made me laugh so much. I love Giorg! He's so funny (especially when he's had too much to drink). Bill was so... bold? this chapter. Yay for Bill. And yay for tom too for being so understanding. I love this story. Update soon!
Date: 04/17/08 06:21 pm Title: Crossing the line... or not?
Awesome. I love this story, and this chapter was great.
Date: 04/17/08 05:54 pm Title: Crossing the line... or not?
youre such a romantic but why do you insist that tom is bigger than bill? they are twins right?
Date: 04/17/08 05:40 pm Title: Crossing the line... or not?
*0*
FUCKING AMAZING!
Date: 04/17/08 05:06 pm Title: Crossing the line... or not?
don't know what to say :/ i really think of fic is amazing :D can't wait for more
Date: 04/17/08 04:52 pm Title: Crossing the line... or not?
love it
seriously, can you be in love with a fanfic?
you should publish it or something, it's absolutely amazing!
xxx
Date: 04/17/08 04:41 pm Title: Tomorrow is the day of Love
Yeeey,
the site is working again and my favorite story is updated, couldn't be better ^^.
Waiting for the next chapter... :D.
XOXOXO
Haley88
Date: 04/17/08 04:20 pm Title: Crossing the line... or not?
You are great!!! I love it..definetively!!!!
Date: 04/17/08 03:49 pm Title: Crossing the line... or not?
This is a very hot chapter!!!!! I like that the boys`s relationship progressed, but also I like Bill shyness! It`s so sweet:-D
Date: 04/17/08 02:50 pm Title: Crossing the line... or not?
Legendary =]
Date: 04/17/08 02:06 pm Title: Crossing the line... or not?
awwwwwwwww!!
update soooon!!
xoxox
Date: 04/17/08 01:53 pm Title: Crossing the line... or not?
i got ready super fast this morning just so i could read this.
i was running late so i couldnt review.
hahahaa,
amazing(;
update soon?
thanksss(;
Date: 04/17/08 12:29 pm Title: Crossing the line... or not?
I LOVED it!
Omg! And I love how gerog is in this story. The fact that he's noe bothered by Tom being gay and hooking up with Bill and that he stands by Tom 100% when it comes to Bill.
And I like the way Tom is popular in this one.
Because he doesn't want it and he doesn't even care. That just proves how superficial people really is.
The girls like him 'cause of the way he looks and therfore the guys are trying to be friends with him in hope that some of his popularity will rub of on them.
And I LOVE the action between Bill and Tom!
I NEED to know what happen at school the next day. What people will say and think after the party!
Please continue this soon?
Date: 04/17/08 12:13 pm Title: Tomorrow is the day of Love
loved it. can't wait for next chapter!
Date: 04/17/08 11:28 am Title: Crossing the line... or not?
great!
i love it