Date: 04/12/11 07:00 am Title: Chapter 21
Bill have a white heart ^^ ..
Audi in this sentence .. you meant Bill not Tom I guess ^^:"Tom looked down at his hands"
and there's a similar mistake in the last chapter about the names too XD
waiting for the next !!!
Author's Response: Oh! Thank you for pointing them out. When you're writing both of their names almost 100 times in one chapter, it get's quite confusing sometimes. =P
Date: 04/12/11 12:29 am Title: Chapter 21
'"Why me…?" He whispered to himself, feeling very confused as to why this was happening. Why him? What did he ever do to anybody to suffer so much?'
This line right here made tears come to my eyes... Great chapter! I'm ready for more! :)
Author's Response: More will be soon. ;)
Date: 04/11/11 05:26 am Title: Chapter 1
is not just like it... i love it... seriously... i can't figure out what happens next.... hmmmmmmm can't stop thinking for the next drama.... Liza should run away from the twins... so that bill and tom will be worried and getting the chance to be in good terms again... wahahha silly idea, i just can't stop thinking what happens next....
Author's Response: I think it's a good sign when the reader can't predict the next sequence. ;)
Date: 04/10/11 05:39 pm Title: Chapter 20
AWWWW This is so sad! :( My heart is breaking for Bill! This story just keeps getting better and more amazing! Cannot wait to read more! =D
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Date: 04/10/11 03:17 pm Title: Chapter 20
omg :'( ...
please upload so soon
I have no idea about the next :'(
poor Bill ..
Author's Response: Haha soon!
Date: 04/10/11 09:38 am Title: Chapter 20
Love it! I think Bill's gonna break though, and forgive Tom, but the relationship won't be the same. As for the baby, I think Lisa might have the baby in secret and try to hide the problem.
Author's Response: The question is, "should" he forgive Tom though? ;)
Date: 04/10/11 03:53 am Title: Chapter 20
upload upload uplooooooad :D haha, love it !
Author's Response: Soon!
Date: 04/10/11 12:58 am Title: Chapter 20
Oooohhh myyyy! I love it -- Can't wait for the next chapter...
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 04/09/11 05:43 pm Title: Chapter 20
Tom you idiot. ~sigh~ seriously tom don't try and put any of the blame on Bill for "leaving" you in the house with his girlfriend. Also, it is STILL your fault that no one will know the paternity of the baby because if you just kept your dick in your pants than we'd know it was Bill's! Ahhhh!
....lol sorry for my rant, your story really gets me going, I get so mad when I read fics like this. x)
Author's Response: Haha I think that's a good thing though. ;)
Date: 04/09/11 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 20
It just keeps getting better and better and better the more I read. I feel Bill's pain.
Author's Response: Aww :)
Date: 04/08/11 12:24 pm Title: Chapter 19
Oh my goodness. I spent two days trying to finish reading all previous chapters. The story is incredible. I actually found myself smiling and gasping while reading this especially when Tom finally told Bill the truth about what happened between him and Lisa. I can't wait for the next chapter! Thank you so much for writing this. I love it to bits.
Author's Response: Aww thank you so much! I'm glad you like it. :)
Date: 04/08/11 09:04 am Title: Chapter 19
I liike, very much. Lisa is really...jeesh..what's up with the lying? That's like horrible. I know Bill and Tom will sort this out, someway. Twins work like that, they never hate each other, they can't...I hope
Author's Response: Thank you! Lisa is a little strange, but I agree that the twins should be able to work things out; however, this situation is a little rough!
Date: 04/07/11 10:23 am Title: Chapter 19
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!
Author's Response: :)
Date: 04/07/11 09:54 am Title: Chapter 19
I'm really happy that you have updated so soon .. and please the next 's more important so please don't be late .. Tomorrow? yesss it's good timinig XD .. I always like the conversation between the twins in your story so please don't be late ^^
"Haha, believe it or not, I actually did think of that idea. But then I thought of a different idea and I'm almost 99% sure that I'll use it. ;)"
I believe cz we often have common ideas ^^
and I'm almost 100% sure that your way is better and I'm waiting patientley !
Author's Response: Haha, I wouldn't be so sure. With some of my previous stories, some people have hated the ending while others have loved it. ;)
Date: 04/06/11 08:21 pm Title: Chapter 19
Loved it! Can't wait to see what will happen next!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 04/06/11 04:08 pm Title: Chapter 19
wooow, please upload soooooon ;D love it!! you are such a good writer! (:
Author's Response: Thank you. Will update soon!
Date: 04/06/11 09:48 am Title: Chapter 18
I really don't know how you will find the true father or maybe you will not ..
But I defeniltley have a way .. make some of them know that he can't bring children .. so.. the baby will be the son of the other .. I know you're laughing at me and you're clapping XD
Author's Response: Haha, believe it or not, I actually did think of that idea. But then I thought of a different idea and I'm almost 99% sure that I'll use it. ;)
Date: 04/05/11 03:08 pm Title: Chapter 18
"on each person's own perspective"
for you ? it's sad or happy?
Author's Response: Well, for me it's a little of both. Mostly happy, but also a bit sad for another reason. ;)
Date: 04/05/11 07:47 am Title: Chapter 18
oh god!!!! can't wait for the next chapter! love your story!!! (:
Author's Response: Aww thank you. :)
Date: 04/05/11 07:19 am Title: Chapter 18
Jealous? omg !! that's not the good moment .. but yeah she feels that Bill might listen to Tom and not her ..
But I don't like this from Tom:
"No…maybe you and him are over, but in time, Bill will speak to me again. We're twins…we'll always have something special."
he looks like he forgets that he made the fault with liza.. so he responsible too .. if Bill will never talk to liza so that's Tom's fault too .. and that's not fair that Bill to talk to Tom and not liza just because they're twins ..
I think this time twins things will not help at least at first
i'm so excited i want to know bill's reacton when he see tom ^^
hust qs .. you know I'm always a reader for your stories so you should answer me lol
how many chapters 's left : plz say over 10 chaptersXD
and about the ending : happy or sad? plzzzzzzzz XD
Author's Response: Hmm, it's hard to answer those questions because I don't have the whole story completed. I can tell you though, that I don't have any intention of ending the story any time soon. I also have an idea in my head of how I would like it to end. If I continue with this idea, then the ending could either be happy or sad, depending on each person's own perspective. :) That's all I'll say for now. ;)