I'm so excited for the next !
i'm so happy for bill and in the same time i feel sad for tom and how he feel ! .. and i think that lisa is pregnant?;) oh my god
the story will be more interesting!
i love how tom support his brother and call his mother every
day .. good boy :D:D

don't be sad about the reviews it takes time for the members to read all the stories and notice yours
all of your stories are awesome don't be upset ..okey?
but i want to give little advice .. change the banner ..your story deserve a banner with well design go to the banner shop or anyone can help you with a great design ^^

sorry for my bad english i'm trying hard to show you my ideas and feelings with you story

by by
waiting for the next chapter

Author's Response: The banner is just something I quickly put together just to have something. In the meantime when I have more time I will get a good one. But thanks for your advice and kind words. I really appreciate it. :)

omg audi !!! i don't beleive that !! i just can't !!you are always in my brain at least the main idea of your stories ! .. my english is so broken .. so i can't explain my ideas and
write my stories that's so sad ..and that's mean i cannot show you what i want to say ( i know i look stupid now XD)..but i'm so happy that you are always in my head to write what i want to write
big hug !!

Author's Response: I think I know what you mean. :) Like, you and I have similar ideas and I seem to write stories that interest you? :)