Hi! At the basic level I think you have potential for a really great story, but I think you need more detail....maybe explain her surroundings more? Also, in England they use the Pound for currency, not the Euro, because they are not a part of the EU.

I really do think it is a good story though, I'll keep reading C:

I hope I don't sound mean, but I am only trying to help because I remember my first fic.

Author's Response: OH no you don't sound mean i think this info was really helpful but thax i have been writing me whole life i am actually going to be a singer so i always write my own songs n stuff but thx soo soo much :D