Date: 09/29/24 11:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
I am a Chinese fan who came a bit late. Discovering this website is the happiest thing for me in recent years. I used to use bookmarking as commenting. I must say that I have read and bookmarked this story. Reading this story is undoubtedly a pleasure! Today I plan to leave a comment. Thank you for your story. You are an amazing writer.
Date: 03/22/20 11:38 am Title: Chapter 3
this was a really good story!
you should do a sequel to this
Date: 09/02/18 05:49 pm Title: Chapter 3
this was a good story!
u should do a sequel to this
Date: 09/20/12 03:36 pm Title: Chapter 3
Usually I'm not really a fan of overly things, but this fic is just 'AMG! *grabby hands*' rofl
I loved it darlin :D specially Tom's thoughts when Bill went to get him cause he wanted to go shopping xD
Date: 03/02/09 05:49 pm Title: Chapter 3
*I think it's hot, Tom trying his best not to come too soon.
*Oh God, Bill is playing with himself, in front of Tom.
I think I just died and went to heaven.
This is so fucking HOTT !!
And so well-written!
Nice work !!
Date: 03/02/09 05:42 pm Title: Chapter 2
One big : AWWWWWWWWWWWWW !!! *melts*
Date: 03/02/09 05:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
I absolutely love how realization hits Tom step by step. :)
Date: 02/24/09 04:05 pm Title: Chapter 3
Sooooooo steamy. Christfuck! That was really good. Yay for twin lovin'.
Date: 02/24/09 03:43 pm Title: Chapter 3
AMAZING I've been waiting for this forever seriously thank you for finishing it
Hearts
Date: 02/24/09 05:16 am Title: Chapter 3
SOOOOOO FUCKINNNNG HAWWWWT!!!!
Date: 01/03/09 12:54 pm Title: Chapter 2
oh oh oh
do more do more!!!
i mean after the sex and all that
this is cute
:D
Date: 12/10/08 07:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
plaese update soon. i will die with out this story
Date: 11/17/08 08:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
this stroy is so good please update soon
Date: 02/17/08 02:48 pm Title: Chapter 2
Love it. It's good that it's sappy XD
I hope you consider writting at least a couple more chapters.
I'll be waiting for them ^______^
Date: 02/16/08 06:08 am Title: Chapter 2
Oooh I loved it! Yes it was mushy but it was lovely!! Looking forward to the next chapter! ;)
As for if you should continue or not. It's been a lovely story even if you do stop it after the next chapter, but if you feel like you have more story to tell then you should continue! I for one will read it!
Date: 02/16/08 04:29 am Title: Chapter 2
agrrr don't stooooop! not now...i need more of this! please ^_^' o_O
Date: 02/16/08 04:21 am Title: Chapter 2
you're not evil. you're CRUEL!!! T.T
I WANTED TO READ THE SEEEEEEEEEEX PART!!!! (cries in a corner) im a perv and perv people needs perv things to pervert about!
Date: 02/15/08 02:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
No pleasssssssssss. Write more. At least about Bill's reaction when he sees the room. I really like it. And who cares if it's too romantic. It's good as it is XD
Author's Response: Bill's reaction is in the next update. And it is...sappy. -sighs- Why, oh, why must the chapter turn out quite this sweetly. I swear it's writing itself.
Date: 02/15/08 12:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
that was so sweet, i loved it ^_^
Author's Response: Thank you.