This was good :D I was so happy to find a Billshido like this one here on THF. We definitely need more!
I have to say it was a bit hard to read it, it sounded like it was translated with Google Translator =/ I understand you’re Spanish, so of course I couldn’t expecting too much (I’m not English myself, I’m Italian, and I’m sure you’ll notice XD), but when I read you had a beta, I’d hoped for something more… accurate? o.o There were a lot of mistakes that didn’t let me enjoy the fic as much as I would have if it was written better =/
But still! Let’s put aside this matter and focus on the plot and the characters! I’ve loved this. Bushido was perfect, he was hot and passionate and cheeky and he ruled the game, somehow, but he never really forced Bill to do anything. That’s the way I like him =) And Bill was good, too, because he was a bit confused about what he really wanted and what he was going to do with Bushido, but he couldn’t resist him.
I liked the way Anis made him realize he really didn’t mind what he’d said about him on tv because Bill keeps smiling and talking to him anyway. And then I liked the way they kissed *o* And everything that’s happened between them, actually :) Really, I think this was well plotted and well written (in your language it must’ve been great!)
And I hope my review was understandable, after all I’m not so good at writing in English either X’D
Thanks for this fic, I hope I’ll read more from you! (more Billshido? =P)

[This review takes part in the “Recensioni d'Autunno 2 - La Vendemmia” challenge @maridichallenge]

Author's Response: That's because my beta is spanish too. I tried to find a beta on this site but mostly don't want to read anything with Bushido. And one of the few that do read billshido didn't answer me, so...rnrnThanks for your review :)

Hot!Really like it! :D Billshido FTW ;)