Date: 12/03/10 08:13 am Title: Down, down, to the underground.
are you going to write a sequel..?? i hope so :D
Author's Response: Sorry, no =)
Date: 12/03/10 08:12 am Title: Down, down, to the underground.
are you going to write a sequel..?? i hope so :D
Author's Response: No sequel to this one, but I'll do other Greek God fics featuring Bill/Tom.
Date: 12/03/10 08:09 am Title: And six months long he stayed
poor Tom he's so alone :/. Yesterday i watched a documental about greek mythology and the were explaining why Hades is not the king of the gods. He borned first but Zeus did a trick with Poseidon and Hades, like a game, and Hades lost it.
I've allways felt sorry for him, He's so alone and he has a job that nobody wants.
I have to congrat you because you're doing a great job; you're describing very well Tom's lonelyless.
love :D
Author's Response: Thanks! I have to admit that I don't really know much more than the basics of Greek mythology. Wikipedia will serve me well in this series. I did know that Hades was Zeus' brother, but I neglected to mention that because that would technically make him Bill's uncle. Skeevy much? Nope, wasn't gonna do it. rnrnGlad you felt for Tom and how he was all alone. I tried to put a little of that in there. Thanks for the nice review!
Date: 12/03/10 08:03 am Title: And six months long he stayed
Perfect ending to this story! I love the characters even more than I did in the first part, as well as the interaction between Bill and Tom. It just seemed very real, especially in the way it progressed. And the sex scene...so hot!
Author's Response: Thanks. I really wanted to have a bunch more short scenes to better illutrate the progression, but whenever I try to do that I fail, bcause I get caught up in a scene, make it way long and in detail, and then don't feel the need for anymore. Glad you liked the sex. I always try to make it good.
Date: 12/03/10 07:14 am Title: And six months long he stayed
lol I'm sure he would say no as well :)
Author's Response: "No" being "No I would not take it back." That was clear right?
Date: 12/03/10 02:52 am Title: And six months long he stayed
Oh classic. Stubborn and vain gods who can't help but fall in love with each other. This was great. Very hot, the stuff that my imagination would create whenever I read the myths. Thanks for posting!
Author's Response: It's nice to hear that it was similar to what you'd imagine in your mind. I had so many ideas for this fic in my head, and was kind of disappointed with the reality of what I wrote. I was writing more from the angle of "I gotta finish this", rather than "I've got to make this great." Thanks for th review.
Date: 11/22/10 07:16 am Title: Down, down, to the underground.
I love mithology, can't wait to see what you have to show :)
Tom seems so mean ]:)
Author's Response: He hasn't been mean. Yet.
Date: 11/21/10 05:32 am Title: Down, down, to the underground.
Mm, the banner was 600x300, I don't think you saved the file directly. o_O I never make banners so small, and I know it was bigger. :p
Just making sure.
/sorry for this review I will make it up with reading and reviewing chapter one of this ._.
Author's Response: =)
Date: 11/21/10 05:30 am Title: Down, down, to the underground.
Mm, the banner was 600x300, I don't think you saved the file directly. o_O I never make banners so small, and I know it was bigger. :p
Just making sure.
/sorry for this review I will make it up with reading and reviewing chapter one of this ._.
Author's Response: Really? Let me look at it again, decide if I like the size as is, and if not I'll try resaving/uploading it.
Date: 11/19/10 08:47 pm Title: Down, down, to the underground.
Ohhhh I love this myth. So excited to see more in this story. I'll admit to sadfacing over there only being two or three chapters, though... Any chance we could convince you to expand it? ;)
Also, I love your writing. Very nice imagery at the beginning. And I think I'm going to like your Tom very much. lol
Great chapter!! Can't wait to see more. :)
Author's Response: Nope, no expanding, cause there are others I want to write. Thanks, glad you like my writing style. I really wanted to send out a clear picture of the pretty meadow Bill was in, so it's nice to know that caught your attention.
Date: 11/19/10 06:23 pm Title: Down, down, to the underground.
oooh, very nice. i had forgotten the story :) this sounds just tantalizing~can't wait for more! gorgeous writing
Author's Response: *preens over "gorgeous" writing* Thank you!
Date: 11/17/10 03:20 pm Title: Down, down, to the underground.
I love this so far. The story of those two is one of my faves.
Author's Response: Glad to hear it.
Date: 11/16/10 06:58 pm Title: Down, down, to the underground.
I love mythology and I'm happy to see a story that talks about it. =)
Tom is very fascinating, as is also the story of Hades and Persephone.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 11/16/10 05:39 pm Title: Down, down, to the underground.
WHOA. I'm not a big fan of Greek Mythology, but you made it so enthralling. I can't fucking wait for more man!
Author's Response: Everyone else has been saying how they're big fans of Greek mythoglogy. Glad to see it apealed the even a non-Greek enthusiast.
Date: 11/16/10 04:24 pm Title: Down, down, to the underground.
aaah, I can't believe the amount of ancient-dated fics that suddenly show up on our beloved site. It's really great!
I am a gymnasium student myself and I love the myths! I can tell you know your stuff, the story was very accurate and Bill is just perfect for the role of persephone..
believe me, i've tried..
lovely story! can't wait for the next chapter
~Dawn
Author's Response: Thanks. So many, you think? I can only think of one other: Actis Pronobis whatever it's called. I like that one.
Date: 11/16/10 01:59 pm Title: Down, down, to the underground.
I really like it! You merged mythologhy and these two lovely boys in an intriguing story. I've always wanted to read stories based on Greek myths and this is my occasion.
Can't wait for more! :D
Author's Response: Glad to hear there's a demand for this sort of thing. I wasn't sure about putting Bill and Tom in roles and then not using the names that are so heavily attached to the myths.
Date: 11/16/10 01:18 pm Title: Down, down, to the underground.
Very very interesting =D I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks.
Date: 11/16/10 12:12 pm Title: Down, down, to the underground.
You have combined two of my favorite genres, greek mythology and twincest. I love you. Hades and Persephone has been and always will be my favorite story. After that it's Eros and Psyche.
Author's Response: Great! Glad to hear you like the Greek stuff. Hades and Persephone has always been my favorite too.
Date: 11/16/10 11:14 am Title: Down, down, to the underground.
Oooh, I'm loving this so far! I'm a fanatic for Greek mythology!
Can't wait for more!
XD
Author's Response: I'm happy to see so many people interested in greek mythology. Thanks.
Date: 11/16/10 11:12 am Title: Down, down, to the underground.
Wow. I love Greek Mythology and this captured my attention. What an original idea! Thank you for something new and fresh in the TH genre. Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: New and fresh? Thanks! Glad it caught your eye.