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Reviewer: tokio_fan_girl39 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/05/10 12:16 am Title: And six months long he stayed

i loved

Author's Response: Good.

Reviewer: Sapphire Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/04/10 09:00 pm Title: And six months long he stayed

Interesting take on the myth. I'd have liked to see more of their growing closer, but they had an interesting dynamic nonetheless. I enjoyed it.

Author's Response: I know, I'm so impatient even when I'm writing. Glad you still enjoyed it.

Reviewer: fyredancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/04/10 07:11 pm Title: Down, down, to the underground.

I think it has more to do with individual interpretations of the myth. I've read several translations, and in one, it's implied that Persephone ate the pomegranate seeds as a pretext to stay with Hades, because she'd grown to care for him. I've been wanting to do an update to this story and make it m/m forever and that is definitely the spin I enjoy the most.

I saw the possibility of future winters, for sure. It was a great place to end the story. As I said, I enjoyed your take on this and it should be interesting to see what Pantheon stories you write in the future!

Author's Response: Hey I've never heard that version but I wish I had because I like that spin on it too. If I'd heard that before I might have considered writing the first winter with an ending like that. And hey, if you want to write a hades/persephone story with a different take on it feel free to do so! =)

Reviewer: prozac Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/04/10 02:56 pm Title: Down, down, to the underground.

can't stop reviewing that .__.

Author's Response: That's fine =)

Reviewer: fyredancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/04/10 01:05 pm Title: And six months long he stayed

This was very different from what I might have expected, but I enjoyed it. It was interesting to find out the real struggle within Bill - not that he liked it but that he enjoyed being forced to submit. Yet neither of them quite wanted to leave it on those terms. I liked the faintly bittersweet end, as well.

This is one of my favorite Greek legends so it was fun to see a TH reinterpretation. "Mistaken for a woman" indeed. :D

Author's Response: I'd like to know how you were expecting it to go? I'm such a freak so of course I ended up making Bill like it. But I didn't want it to be a simply "kinky" story. I wanted that to merely be an excuse or defense mechanism that he and Tom had to get past to acheive a better relationship. I'm glad the ending came across as "bittersweet," but mostly I was trying to make the ending more about the posibilities of future winters, and not so much about Tom being alone in the underworld. Glad you liked, thanks!

Reviewer: Nia Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/04/10 09:19 am Title: And six months long he stayed

This was amazing :) I think it's sad how Tom is so alone, but hey. He has something to (happily) look forward to in the coming months ;)

Author's Response: Yes he does, and next year will probably be even better.

Reviewer: FishPanda Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/04/10 07:49 am Title: And six months long he stayed

I loved this! Great, original idea and excellent writing.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Starlight Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/04/10 07:30 am Title: Down, down, to the underground.

WOW! This is very original and so well written. I love the idea, the way Tom and Bill act "in character" and everything.

I´m such a sucker for everything ancient. Thanx for writing this epic piece. I LOVE it !!!

Author's Response: Nice to know you appreciated it. Thank you!

Reviewer: billxbesitztxmeinxherz Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/03/10 11:21 pm Title: And six months long he stayed

Soo good! We need a sequel with of next winter! God this was amazing!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it. Sorry no sequel, but there will be other stories in the Pantheon series.

Reviewer: prozac Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/03/10 06:49 pm Title: Down, down, to the underground.

i have a book of greek mythology :D i think it would be cool if you did something with the origin of Medusa... she was raped by Poseidon in Athenea´s temple and, as a punishment, became a monster. The legend said that she was beautiful and virgin. Or do something with Apolo and Dafne or with Hefestos and Afrodita.

Does it llok like i love greek stuff? xDD the ancient greeks were awesome

love:D

Author's Response: Thanks for the suggestions, I'll check those out.

Reviewer: bmccray Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/03/10 04:45 pm Title: Down, down, to the underground.

Hi. That what I meant by more. More stories. Lol. I don think I finished my sentence before I clicked submit. :)

Author's Response: =)

Reviewer: Daissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/03/10 04:20 pm Title: And six months long he stayed

Eeee! That was awesome. And the sex scene was orgasm-inducing.

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you thought it was "awesome." I think most people do, whereas I thought it was only... good.

Reviewer: Pandora Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/03/10 03:54 pm Title: And six months long he stayed

I liked it very much!

i was hooked feom the beginning until the end :D well done



Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Sara Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/03/10 02:55 pm Title: And six months long he stayed

awwwww this is awesome
loved every word
u really made a good job with the characterizations ,i like when Tom is rough and cocky and when Bill is a brat diva

i'm looking forward to read more about them as Gods

Author's Response: Glad you liked how I characterized them. I really thought more about the dynamic between them, rather than their individual personalities, while writing. I'll probably do another story for the series over winter break.

Reviewer: myself225 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/03/10 12:49 pm Title: And six months long he stayed

This was a beautiful story! Are you going to write a sequel?? Pretty pleaaaase!! =)

Author's Response: No sequel to this one, sorry. But there will be other Greek god fics.

Reviewer: Shibby Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/03/10 11:32 am Title: And six months long he stayed

That made me 'aww' Tom being such a hopeful god of the underworld.

LOVED this!

XD

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed. Thanks!

Reviewer: bmccray Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/03/10 10:49 am Title: And six months long he stayed

I more than liked it. I loved it. The sex scene was hotness. I'm glad Tom and Bill are getting along more. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Oh. o__o Well... this fic is over. Sorry, but I wanted to leave it like that, with Bill and Tom moving into liking/caring for each other, and with many winters ahaead giving the possibility of love.

Don't worry, there will be other Greek god fics featuring Bill/Tom.

Reviewer: PoorMedea Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/03/10 10:24 am Title: And six months long he stayed

This is gorgeous. I'm a huge Greek mythology geek, and I just love the way you had the relationship progress. I'm so looking forward to the rest of this series!

Author's Response: Gorgeous? Thanks! Glad you liked it. I hope to write another one of these over winter break, which thank God is coming soon.

Reviewer: Synnie Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/03/10 10:22 am Title: And six months long he stayed

Aww yay! I really enjoyed this

Author's Response: *sings* Synnie liked my fiiic, Synnie liked my fiiic! Thanks.

Reviewer: luvcat Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/03/10 08:42 am Title: And six months long he stayed

So sweet, I love it, u did a good job!

Author's Response: Thanks!

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