Date: 11/16/10 06:00 pm Title: Invading In On Your Secrets
I really like this one ^^ It's beautifully sad... And the last line just thrilled me XD
Best of luck for the contest ^^
Date: 11/16/10 04:59 pm Title: Invading In On Your Secrets
I really liked this! It was sweet and cute, I liked thr style of your writing, the way you set it out :) Beautiful entry!
Date: 11/16/10 03:48 pm Title: Invading In On Your Secrets
Oh wow....This was...different. I liked it though...I feel bad for Tom :( Best of luck in the contest!
Date: 11/16/10 05:42 am Title: Invading In On Your Secrets
I think it was nice how you made this into letters to each other and explained away some of the vagueness of the original (I had to go read that one before I fully got this one). Great idea. =)
Date: 11/15/10 09:03 pm Title: Invading In On Your Secrets
I'm not sure that I even know what to say. That was absolutely breathless. I got a little confused on the POVs (like @Jumbie22, I thought May was a month) but, once I caught on, I really loved it. Great job! :)
Date: 11/15/10 04:44 pm Title: Invading In On Your Secrets
It took me a while to understand the change of pov cause I though May was used as the month and not the name of the girl... Go me ! Anyway, I think it's a good remix! I don't usually read Het, at all. And cheat fics make me sad but this was good. I think you did a good job :)
Date: 11/15/10 03:11 pm Title: Invading In On Your Secrets
That was beautiful. :/