Date: 12/01/13 05:03 am Title: Your sins into me, oh my beautiful one
PARTS 2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20!!!!
Date: 10/30/13 09:32 am Title: Your sins into me, oh my beautiful one
Book 1: A-FREAKING-MAZING!!!!
Book 2: Write more please.
Date: 10/27/13 09:24 pm Title: And now silver is silent, It is silver and cold
my god...
Date: 08/25/11 01:30 pm Title: Your sins into me, oh my beautiful one
this story reminds me of avatar lol, and dont worry that not everyone reads your stories, there probably is a larger read count then reviews, people are just lazy, but i for one want to tell you that this book 1 part 1 (also reminds me of avatar) was well written and has a well-constructed plot, now im gonna go read part 2 :)
Date: 03/26/11 05:29 pm Title: I came here by day, but I left here in darkness
oh my god!! i could never imagine a fire nation person marrying a water nation person in avatar!! although zuko and katara look kinda cute together XD
i love the show too so i'm sure im gonna love this story!! the first chapter already has me hooked
Date: 12/09/10 03:36 pm Title: Your sins into me, oh my beautiful one
I'm really enjoying this. Can't wait to find out what happens! :D
Date: 12/08/10 04:53 pm Title: Your sins into me, oh my beautiful one
OOO cliffhanger.... good chapter though
Date: 12/07/10 07:00 pm Title: Your sins into me, oh my beautiful one
Awwwww no part 1 has a sad(ish) ending :(
I can't wait for the next part! And grrrr I hope Andreas get's what he deserves!!
Date: 12/07/10 06:16 pm Title: Your sins into me, oh my beautiful one
yay!! gosh, i loved this part of the book!! :D hopefully tom and bill can see each other again.
Date: 12/07/10 04:34 pm Title: Your sins into me, oh my beautiful one
He got pregnant in the Field? But Bill was the one that bottemed?
And there is one thing I didnｴt got. Is Gordon dead or Bill? Because Bill got Wings. And if Bill is not dead why did he got wings?
Author's Response: actually he got pregnant thei first time.rnBill is pregnant with the red angel aka the reason he got wings. Tom is pregnant with the chosen one. Bill in't dead and you'll have to wait to see gordon's condition.
Date: 12/06/10 04:56 pm Title: As a rapturous voice escapes, I tremble a prayer and I値l beg for forgiveness
I am absolutely in love with this!! Please continue the story, een if not alot of ppl read it!! :) because at least you know that ill be a loyal reader/reviewer!! :D
Date: 12/05/10 08:48 pm Title: As a rapturous voice escapes, I tremble a prayer and I値l beg for forgiveness
really liking it. though davey is messing them up. lol
Date: 12/03/10 05:41 pm Title: As a rapturous voice escapes, I tremble a prayer and I値l beg for forgiveness
Rawr Tomi's hot! But gah, they took him away NOW? But they just made up. I wait anxiously for the next part!
Date: 12/03/10 05:36 pm Title: I came here by day, but I left here in darkness
Ok iｴm a little bit afraid bout the major character death. I donｴt want Bill, Tom or the baby to die. I donｴt care about the ohters. Especialy Daevey (?)! But please not the cute couple!
Date: 12/03/10 05:18 pm Title: As a rapturous voice escapes, I tremble a prayer and I値l beg for forgiveness
GRAWR, cliffhangers are going to be the death of me, i swear........ XD
Date: 12/03/10 09:59 am Title: I came here by day, but I left here in darkness
Cool story! I love it!
Date: 12/02/10 11:16 am Title: I came here by day, but I left here in darkness
I love this story
Date: 12/01/10 06:56 pm Title: I came here by day, but I left here in darkness
It can be discouraging, but the point of writing a story is not to get loads of reads or reviews (though those are nice), it is to let your creativity flow.
Date: 12/01/10 12:23 am Title: Your sins into me, Oh my beautiful one
Dividing it into books sounds good. And what do you mean no one is reading this?
Author's Response: i only have a couple of hundred reads and a few reviews. it's discouraging :(
Date: 11/30/10 08:41 pm Title: Your sins into me, Oh my beautiful one
Great story, always look forward to your updates!!!!