Date: 08/03/12 07:39 am Title: 3. Somewhere
Oops, I spotted a discontinuity. In the first section, Tom wakes up and the sun is shining "right in his face", but then after their conversation, Bill jumps out the window and it's suddenly night. Unless hours somehow went by...
Although, wait, changing the scene to just day or just night would kind of ruin the effect :/ Eh, I don't know what I'm saying. It's not that big of a deal in the grand storyline, but I thought maybe you'd want to be aware.
Date: 06/02/12 03:55 pm Title: 7: Dangerously Close
I miss this story. Please come back to it soon. :)
Date: 11/08/11 03:09 pm Title: 7: Dangerously Close
Update!!!
OMG you have no idea how much I'm into this. I LOVE vamp fics and this is got me craving more.
Date: 11/05/11 05:07 am Title: 7: Dangerously Close
How horrible it must be to be Bill. I wouldn't be able to carry that guilt around.
Date: 11/03/11 08:29 pm Title: 7: Dangerously Close
Wow that was intense! I like their little moment there, too bad it ended so dramatically! I can't wait for them to meet again, their connection is so strong and I really enjoy it =)
Date: 11/01/11 02:21 pm Title: 7: Dangerously Close
Åhhh elsker *__* Du gjør Bill sexy as fuuuck... Men hele vampyrgjengen hans... ååhh de irriterer meg!!! XD Kan de ikke bare gå og dø lol :'D De er ekle..og slemme ._. Anyway...uhm. Håper han spiser litt mer Tom snart *_* : D
Date: 10/31/11 05:53 pm Title: 7: Dangerously Close
you know, i just sat here and read all of these chapters. i love the way you write. it's beautiful. and this story is especially good because it's about vampire romance, my favorite kind. thanks for the update and i cant wait to read the next installment!
Date: 10/30/11 11:44 pm Title: 7: Dangerously Close
I love Bill in this. he's so tourtured but he has compassion to a point. I'm a bit scared the Bill killing the girl is going to start something horrible for the coven though. I'm curious what will happen with Bill and Tom next as well :)
Date: 10/30/11 04:15 pm Title: Prologue
That hunger that came out from nowhere.... and the girl Bill killed, it´s gonna get hard for them
Looking forward to the next chapter :)
Date: 10/30/11 04:12 pm Title: 7: Dangerously Close
I was actually worried that Gustav had followed Bill & found him with Tom or something. Great chapter =) Can't wait for more!
Date: 10/30/11 02:47 pm Title: 7: Dangerously Close
This was updated quicker than I thought! :)
Excellent chapter as always.
Poor, guilty Bill.
Date: 10/29/11 02:40 pm Title: 6. Bedtime Stories
Yay for a new chapter of this fic! Thanks for this update! =D That was a really good one, and of course they have to see each other again soon! I love how they gravitate toward each other, can'T wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot! :D
Date: 10/28/11 01:15 am Title: 6. Bedtime Stories
omfg please write more to this story cause it is ah-mehh-zing!!! i love it so far you are the best at portarying bill as the enimalictic yet lovably deadly vampire, with tom as the very curious and happless human that is awe strucked.
Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much! New chapter up now :)
Date: 10/26/11 07:47 pm Title: 6. Bedtime Stories
Just like Tom i love the normalness of them sitting and eating dinner in his kitchen. Thanks for the great update!
Author's Response: Thanks yourself! :D
Date: 10/23/11 02:18 am Title: 6. Bedtime Stories
Awww :)
Author's Response: :D thanks for reading!
Date: 10/22/11 05:14 am Title: 6. Bedtime Stories
Yay! Awesome update!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 10/22/11 02:17 am Title: 6. Bedtime Stories
Aw when I read this I just wanna huge all the "vampires" in Bills coven
Author's Response: Aww :) Thanks for reading!
Date: 10/21/11 04:56 pm Title: 6. Bedtime Stories
You tell stories really well. Some people are born storytellers, and I think you're one of them.
I really want Tom and Bill to be friends, but then again--I don't. Their world is too chaotic, they're too prone to hurting each other. But that's what makes a good love story, I guess.
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! That's one of the greatest compliments I've gotten :')
Date: 10/21/11 04:50 pm Title: 6. Bedtime Stories
aaah *___* I know I'm a little late to find out that you're updating it runs deep again but well, I'm so excited about it *_* You know I really loved the first few chapters and I think this will be amazing. I love this shy, forbidden atmosphere between them, even though this might sound a bit cheesy xD Please don't leave us waiting for ages again xD
Author's Response: Thanks a lot :D I hope I won't take too long getting the next one up xD Feel free to kick my ass if I do, though.
Date: 10/21/11 03:52 pm Title: 6. Bedtime Stories
I love how Tom & Bill are slowly getting close to one another =)
Author's Response: Thanks!^^