Date: 01/10/12 08:32 am Title: Chapter 1
Very interesting.
Date: 01/09/12 10:30 am Title: Chapter 6
oF COURSE I LIKED THE CHAPTER :)
AND CANT WAIT TO READ MOOORE :)
PLEASE UPDATE SOOON :)
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK :)
Date: 05/13/11 09:10 pm Title: Chapter 5
DDDD: Why did you stop writing you'll get reviews soon. Just keep posting. pleases? D:
Author's Response: I'm still writing the next chapter, I've just got major writers block.rnI can either give you one shit chapter in hopes of getting back in it, or take my time write an okay chapter...
Date: 02/20/11 07:58 pm Title: Chapter 5
DAUGHTER?! okay i just thought you were tryna make readers think it was her dad, but it is :O MADNESS I TELLS YOU!! i do like madness though...okay, there are a few things that i am a little confused about. firstly, why chara doesn't like tom? and well, i understand that everyone saved each other among the group, but they seem to be acting like they have known chara forever, but its only been a few days if i've got that right. so! the officer checked his file? I WANNA KNOW WHAT HE DID!!! was it that he killed chara's brother?! was there more!? honestly though, what they did to that girl was just...horrible :( and making everyone watch it on tv? even worse. i mean, her parents would have seen her get raped!! Dx PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! the story doesnt suck at all, i love it :( in fact, i NEVER review, but i have on every chapter for this one. proof enough? :3
Author's Response: 1: Chara doesn't like Tom because he's just...basically they're just hating in a playful way. It's hard to explain. rn2: The guys are acting like they've known her forever because they feel like they owe her and they dont want her to feel like shit because she saved them. And she acts like shes known them forever because, for some reason, she feels comfortable around them, which is a new feeling to her so she doesnt want to get too close to all of them because baaad things happen when she does. (Which is why she is getting close to a certain one of them).rn3: Dude...that's obvious??rn4: As soon as I get back to Texas I'll finish the chapter I started before I left.rn5: THANK YOU SO FUCKING MUCH FOR ALL THE REVIEWS!rn
Date: 02/20/11 07:50 pm Title: Chapter 4
so he IS her third uncle twice removed!? :O i think i know her secret...it's...that...she has a tattoo or piercing in an inappropriate place?! and Tom's gunna check it out???!?!?! :O woah, my friends are staring at me funny cause im all excited about this...and it's school time... >.> i still cant get over that epic name!! wickfurrow XD that guy though, is terrible :( if he's related to her, why the fuck would he want to kill her? i am loveing this SO MUCH! but yeah, sorry that youre not getting the critism that you wanted, i just haven't foiund a problem yet :/
Date: 02/20/11 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 3
OMG O.O that was intense!! the whole them getting papers to protect her while charas...brother? father? third unlce twice removed?!?!?! is tryna get killing rights O: but man, that law is fucked up :( another great chapter which i cant find a dislike or room for improvment :)
Date: 02/11/11 11:34 pm Title: Chapter 2
so, just wondering, is wickfurrow a real place? cause it sounds so fuckin awesome and i wanna live in a place called wickfurrow!! xD still nothing i can point out that needs improvement. i like how when the twins go in to get chara, they don't remember her name as if she were the queen or something :P *nexxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxt*
Date: 02/11/11 11:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
well well well. i love the story line! (so far :P) not really that much i can say yet, so um...ONWARDS! sorry for the lame review D: *onto the next*
Date: 02/11/11 06:38 am Title: Chapter 5
ok fuck his father what kind of father is that urgghh if hes my father i will kill him!!!by the way iiiiiiii love ittt great so now can u please post the next chapter??im excited...i love ur story
Date: 02/07/11 06:45 pm Title: Chapter 5
i like, but me wanna know what happens........ DAMN CLIFFHANGERS!!!!!!!! :D
Author's Response: I'm working on the next chapte right now :D
Date: 02/07/11 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 4
well, chara's "dad" is an asshole.... :D
Date: 02/07/11 05:44 pm Title: Chapter 2
umm.... brother, father, uncle??? huh.... i shall find out!!!!! ONWARDS!!!!!!!
Date: 02/07/11 04:04 am Title: Chapter 5
Continue. It's a bit confusing at first but I got the hang of it. :-)
Author's Response: It's confusing?
Date: 11/14/10 11:21 am Title: Chapter 2
Heyyyyy rizzz! It's me Alex :D I didn't know you had an acocunt on here too! :D
Date: 11/13/10 08:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is really original! I can't wait to read the next chapters!
But I'm thinking...if someone did that for me, I would have checked to see if she had protection papers too. If not, I would have bought them for her immediately, then went to go find her.
Author's Response: The boys were in a state of panic, and thats part of the plot :D...rnBut they'll go soon, and you'll understand why she needs their protection :DrnrnAnd thank you!!!!!