Date: 03/01/11 07:07 pm Title: Speaking in silence
Psh, I'm so not commenting on this story 3 years after it's been updated..
Anyway, this story (is? was? we'll go with is.) is very well written. I really like it.
That is all :).
Date: 11/26/08 05:27 pm Title: Speaking in silence
i find this story really interesting. i hope you haven't abandoned it and start updating again. =)
Date: 09/21/08 03:41 pm Title: Gentle lies
LOVE IT! It's so realistic. Poor Bill =p
Date: 09/10/08 12:19 pm Title: Speaking in silence
God, I love this. So much. Update real soon, yeah?
Date: 06/18/08 10:17 pm Title: Speaking in silence
yay awsome and please wright more ^-^
Date: 06/18/08 10:12 pm Title: Down we go together
really nice you rock at wrighting^-^
Date: 06/18/08 09:12 pm Title: Would you tell me?
^-^ ^-^ ^-^ ^-^ ^-^ wwwooowwww that was great you are great at wrighting.
Date: 06/18/08 08:58 pm Title: So why so sad?
perfect ^-^
Date: 06/18/08 09:33 am Title: Speaking in silence
Well since you'd agreed to help me I couldn't help and read your story :D
and I really like it:]
To my surprise I liked the way you described that self harm part too though I usually can't even hear about those things.. update soon:)
Date: 06/13/08 08:33 pm Title: Speaking in silence
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Date: 06/13/08 01:52 pm Title: Speaking in silence
Tom's falling apart. It's sad to watch. update soon.
Date: 06/13/08 03:52 am Title: Speaking in silence
i just started reading this, and i think this story is gorgeous. i'm definitely faving this :). the way you write about the twins' pain and the way they deal with it is so real it's almost like a biography . keep updating!
Date: 06/11/08 11:43 pm Title: Down we go together
Um... So Tom's making progress? I don't understand why boys need to turn to alcohol for all of their solutions for their problems.
Date: 06/11/08 11:38 pm Title: Kindling
Boys are such jerks. I feel like taking them by the shoulders and shaking them and yelling at them to just TALK!
Date: 06/11/08 11:33 pm Title: We're nowhere and it's now
OMG. who is "him"!!! WHAT??
Date: 06/11/08 11:24 pm Title: Between Breaths
Aw! I really like this so far!
DEPRESSION KILLS, PEOPLE!
Date: 06/04/08 09:19 pm Title: Down we go together
It'd be interesting to see what was going through Tom's head when he picked up a dude... Oh, poor boys... this fic evokes a sad, gentle, and poignant ennui. I am so happy you are continuing it ^^
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! And well, the story is generally written in a third-person limited POV from Bill's perspective (or something like that :]) which is why I never wrote about Tom's thoughts in the last chappy, but occasionally I get bored with that and write in a third-person POV with Tom as the main character (or both twins). So next chapter, I think that I'm going to write it in third-person-limited with Tom as the main character. (Phew) Okay, I'm sure you didn't want that long explanation but there ya go.
Date: 06/03/08 04:03 am Title: Down we go together
What??? I don't feel bad that you posted it!! it was awesome!!! and I'm suprised that Tom's surprised he's gay. I mean there wouldn't be much of a story if he wasn't, right? ~.' Doesn't he know that!?
Author's Response: I know! He's so dense sometimes, isn't he? ;)
Date: 06/02/08 07:01 am Title: Down we go together
you may not be sure but I really like it! the story is so heartwrecking!
Author's Response: Aww thanks!
Date: 06/02/08 01:23 am Title: Down we go together
Why would you feel bad? This was really really good! So awesome to see that Tom's not as straight as he pretends to be! ~.'
Author's Response: None of us are, though, huh? ;) Thanks for the review!