Date: 02/21/08 11:55 am Title: So why so sad?
Wow! I really like this story.
Bill not feeling anything is kinda
scary. I hope another chapter update
soon :)
Author's Response: Lol "smiliedolphin" <-- sweet name. I know, this is a space of mental instability.
Date: 02/20/08 03:35 pm Title: Gentle lies
Wooooh hunny, I really really like it ! It's beautiful !
Author's Response: aww thanks! You're really very sweet.
Date: 02/20/08 01:57 am Title: So why so sad?
I love it! Write more please!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 02/14/08 10:48 pm Title: Gentle lies
hmm interesting take for a story.
continue~~~
Author's Response: I hope it's interesting...Thanks for the review!
Date: 02/14/08 04:28 pm Title: Gentle lies
oh jesus .. i loved every single part!!! *_*
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I feel all warm and fuzzy.
Date: 02/14/08 03:33 pm Title: Gentle lies
I liked it, a lot. The only thing is, could you put spaces between the paragraphs? It makes it way easier to read. But it was great. Write more, please? :D
Author's Response: thanks for pointing that out. Me = non-tech-savvy N0oB.
Date: 02/14/08 03:11 pm Title: Gentle lies
I like it!!
one suggestionn would b to separate it into paragraphs better with spaces between the paragraphs. It makes it easier to read.
Author's Response: Lol will do. Thanks