Date: 01/25/11 09:15 am Title: Chapter 10
Loved it! Priscilla is a scary person! What is sh going to do to them?
Date: 01/25/11 09:04 am Title: Chapter 9
Loved it! That was scary!
Date: 01/18/11 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 17
aww the chapter was cute well half of it, Bill and Arianna they so need each other; being together is like healing themselves from all the chaos they are into :)
every passing chapter Priscilla is crazier than the last one, I hope she donīt do anything too bad.....hahaha sheīs so sadistic I couldnīt help it but laughed when I was reading and I dont even know why =)
Author's Response: sorry, i've not been updating, it had been so chaotic as i just had my graduation vacation and back at home with a fever. ha-ha. anyway, i actually dedicated this particular chapter to you!!! ^_^..well, it was awkward to write the lovey-dovey chapter when Bill and Arianna was together, maybe that's what makes you laugh..anyway, thanks for reading!
Date: 01/17/11 03:25 pm Title: Chapter 16
Damn everything is so complicated but all is Priscillaīs fault, obviously she was the one who uploaded the photos to the web and wonīt let poor Arianna calm her nerves about Alan safety.
Good I love when they are together too :) waiting for your next update =)
Author's Response: thanks! here's an update!
Date: 01/13/11 08:25 pm Title: Chapter 14
haha I knew Arianna will give in to Bill..eventually.
but am a little confused, is she doing all of this because she feel it or wanted it or just because Tom told her to do it and to make Bill feel better?
however I understand her fear about Bill safety with her crazy jealous bitch of a girlfriend I even dont remember what her name is but Iīll check it up later :)
XDD Georg is funny
keep the good work coming =)your story is so osm
Date: 01/11/11 06:47 pm Title: Chapter 13
Great chapter :)
I think Arianna is so mean with Bill, hes only trying to be nice with her and the only thing he wants is to be close and support her while her father is in the hospital but I guess is just all part of the plot of the story so its ok =) update soon
Date: 01/07/11 03:07 pm Title: Chapter 12
oh shit! finally.
So Tom is Alanīs father, wow but.....nevermind Im just shocked, well is kind of sad knowing that not sad I mean I finally realize why she ran away, its kind of understandable you know, knowing that you betrayed the one you "loved" and adding pregnancy to the situation is not something that a lot of people can deal with.
So I dont want to jump to conclutions right now so im going to wait till your next update to figure out what going to happen.
Great chapter btw this revealed a lot please update soon :)
Author's Response: awwww..thank you for reading the chapter..i was actually having a difficulty to choose which one would be Alan's father. but eventually, i made it. haha. silly me. Tom just need to know that is his son she was taking care of!
Date: 01/01/11 11:34 pm Title: Chapter 11
aww the flashback....Bill was so sweet :)
I wonder who the car driver is
hope that you update soon, nice chapter =)
Date: 12/28/10 02:34 pm Title: Chapter 10
none chapter is weak, I mean is an update after all and we liked it or not every bit of it its an important part of the story so dont worry and keep them coming no one will complain :)
I knew Priscilla was crazy but now that I think I know what she is planning well lets see what happen next :)
Date: 12/27/10 08:43 pm Title: Chapter 9
I think Priscilla is a jealous, crazy and possessive bitch and she doesnīt deserve Arianna.......... well, what can I say Im a total Bill girl :P
Every passing chapter make me more curious and I really want to know whatīs gonna happen; so please update soon :)
Author's Response: you can say about that to Priscilla. i meant she to be that way. haha. anyway, a new update's coming up!
Date: 12/26/10 03:30 pm Title: Chapter 8
Loved it!
Author's Response: thank you ^__^