Date: 11/13/10 12:23 am Title: Treat Me
I'd like to leave a nice review, full of praise and such, but you've effectively killed all brain function I had. Once I remember how to breathe and figure out how to get an active brainwave going (it may take a while; the grey matter is seared), maybe I could give a better review. *_*
Author's Response: As wonderful reviews go, this ranks pretty high anyway. Thank you so much, Mel!
Date: 11/12/10 11:28 pm Title: Treat Me
Well-let me just say-anything that I could write, could not possibly convey what I think or how I love this!!! I will say-I adore stories where Bill worships Tom like this and talk's this way...love love love!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so so much. I love writing Bill and Tom like this, and I'm just overjoyed you enjoy reading it :D
Date: 11/12/10 10:55 pm Title: Treat Me
god its just so deliciously naughty!! I can't get enough!!! Its like, I keep wanting it to squick me, but its just so...guuh...very nice work. I'm definately looking forward to the next one.
Author's Response: Hee, thank you!! I'm so happy you enjoyed it :D
Date: 11/12/10 10:47 pm Title: Treat Me
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PURE LOVE!!! thank u so much for writing a sequel. looooove it
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading it!!
Date: 11/12/10 10:31 pm Title: Treat Me
Despite being a bit squicky because Tom is 14 and Bill is 20, this is beyond hot. Being that this is fantasy, I can overlook it, besides, it is part of the kink meme. And Tom is utterly delicious as an innocent 14 year old. I believe you said something about a third part?
Author's Response: Hee, I tend to pretend they're 15/21 >.> I just leave it open for people to draw their own conclusions. I'm so glad you enjoyed it anyway!
Date: 11/12/10 10:01 pm Title: Treat Me
I love this series. I love a domanant Bill and a nervous sweet Tom. It's so sweet and hot and sexy. I'm so in love!
Author's Response: Squee, so glad you like it!
Date: 11/12/10 08:19 pm Title: Treat Me
Most of everything Bill says are adjectives.
Author's Response: Well Tom's not exactly a great conversationalist; Bill's not got much to work with! ^_~
Date: 11/12/10 07:17 pm Title: Treat Me
*nosebleed*
I think I just died *_* omg!
This was beyond words! So hot and amazing!
I love the way you've characterized Tom, so adorable and all :3
I seriously can't wait for part three *fans self*
And this will ofc go straight to my faves! :3
Author's Response: Hee, thank you!! I enjoy writing Tom like this so much and I'm thrilled you like it, too :D
Date: 11/12/10 07:02 pm Title: Treat Me
OMG I was SOOOOOO excited when I got an e-mail for this! I wanted to read it in the car on my way home from work but unfortunately that's dangerous! Needless to say, I loved this one just as much as the first and I cannot WAIT for the third. OMG! I love you.
Author's Response: Aww, thrilled you enjoyed it! Thank you so much!
Date: 11/12/10 06:57 pm Title: Treat Me
"Tom thinks he might be about to get a nosebleed." - I loved that line. I can so imagine a kid saying that. :)
I really hope that is the pizza guy at the door and not Tom's parents. I loved this chapter and it was so sweet. It would be nice if everybody's first time, no matter what sexuality they are, could be like this. Awesome story sweetie and I look so forward to part 3.
Author's Response: So glad you enjoyed this one just as much! I thought that line was extra appropriate and I'm glad you liked it. Thank you!
Date: 11/12/10 06:34 pm Title: Treat Me
My brain is mush. Tom is the most adorable little thing ever and Bill is...intense, holy shit. *fans self*
I'm so in love with this series, I don't want it to ever end. ♥
Author's Response: Hee, thank you so much! ♥
Date: 11/12/10 05:25 pm Title: Treat Me
aww, this was so sweet. And hot! Bumblebee Tom is adorable. So shy and smitten by older Bill. Love it!
Author's Response: Hee, thank you! And I promise that final step in the final act!
Date: 11/12/10 05:06 pm Title: Treat Me
Omg ! I was so excited to see a sequel! I love these characters so much and I was very happy to read more about them. Tom is adorable... this fic was very sexy and I can't wait for the next part!
Author's Response: So glad you enjoyed this ♥ Thank you!!
Date: 11/12/10 04:56 pm Title: Treat Me
Oh, so warm and sexy. ♥ Very much lives up to the first.
Author's Response: Thank you, Tay ♥
Date: 11/12/10 04:38 pm Title: Treat Me
more please?
that was good
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 11/12/10 04:22 pm Title: Treat Me
*flail* O my jesus, this just keeps getting better ;)
God, Tom`s so cute! Majorly adorable, just like Bill said :)
Jeez, lol, I`m just giddy as Tom, this is too precious.
Author's Response: Yay!! I was hoping that it'd have that effect - thank you for reading!
Date: 11/12/10 04:12 pm Title: Treat Me
I'm so in love with this universe it hurts. *__* Tom's character is beyond adorable, and Bill is just.., holy shit.
And your writing is mesmerizing. Amazing.
Author's Response: Squee!! Thrilled you're still into it! Thank you so much ♥
Date: 11/12/10 04:10 pm Title: Treat Me
This Tom is so adorable, I can even. My brain's melted but I can't not giggle at him.
Author's Response: He needs to be giggled at, don't worry - he's meant to be infectious so you feel all haaaappy reading about his haaaaapppy!
Date: 11/12/10 04:09 pm Title: Treat Me
Well, judging by the way Tom reacted to a blow job it seems like he might die after he has sex with Bill. Yes, actually, I'm pretty sure that would e a death sentence to poor Tomi. I can't wait for part three! I think you definitely matched if not surpassed part one. Tom's really no good with words is he? I think that's extremely accurate for his age, though. Also,"Being gay could be perfect." If Bill's involved, I'd say so!
Author's Response: I think you might be right about it killing poor Tom, lol, and he's rubbish with words. I'm glad you enjoyed it though! Thank you for the review!
Date: 11/12/10 03:54 pm Title: Treat Me
I think my brain exploded. And you're promising a part three?
Author's Response: Yes, third part in due course! Thank you for reading!