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Reviewer: Yvonne483 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/31/10 07:26 am Title: Treat Me

If this was a book, I'd totally read it!
I'm waiting for the third part, It's unbearable!

Author's Response: Oh wow, thank you! This really means a lot!

Reviewer: Ainee Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/28/10 08:06 pm Title: Treat Me

Gah! Okay, I'm gonna sit here and wait patiently for the next one..after I've told you this: That was freaking HOT! Dammit, woman! XD I think I died a little when Tom came...and I'm oh so jealous! I can't say of whom, though...I want them both! ;)

Author's Response: :D Thank you so much! I'm thrilled you enjoyed it as much as you did - just thank you!

Reviewer: Lelaina Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/28/10 10:43 am Title: Treat Me

Hot and beautiful! I loved how you built up the tension in this! I nearly forgot to breathe... ;-)

And very inspiring also! I am just starting to write fiction and hope its gonna turn just half as good as this. :-D

You´ve got a new fan over here in Germany!

Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed it and best of luck with your own writing ^_^

Reviewer: puddin Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/26/10 02:29 am Title: Treat Me

OMFG! I'm hooked on your fics!whatever happened to installment #3? You promised.

Author's Response: It's in progress! I'm so glad you've been enjoying the fics though!

Reviewer: ragdoll Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/04/10 06:28 pm Title: Treat Me

This part was great too! Loved every piece of it.

Author's Response: Thank you :D

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/29/10 03:36 am Title: Treat Me

Hopefully! It's not that far away but either way I can't wait :D

Reviewer: lilliephoenix Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/29/10 01:54 am Title: Treat Me

i love this. sweet, naive tom. and besotted, older bill. it's written so perfectly, too.

Author's Response: Thank you :D

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/28/10 07:51 pm Title: Treat Me

Sorry I just have to be an annoying reader and ask: how much longer till the new part XD

Author's Response: Aha, somewhere in December I hope, but I can't guarantee >.<

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/28/10 02:43 am Title: Treat Me

So cute in a sexy way XD I'm so excited for the 3rd part :O

Author's Response: Thank you!!

Reviewer: boo Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/17/10 12:20 am Title: Treat Me

Words can not describe how much I love this universe. Needy bottom Tom is golden. Will there be more?

Author's Response: There will be a third installment, but it might take me a little while to get there!

Reviewer: KSena Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/16/10 05:59 pm Title: Treat Me

Must have missed this sequel... So happy I found it today. That was absolute bliss. So damn awesome! :-D I loved how sweet Bill was to Tom, and how utterly new to all this Tom is. So wonderful. :-) Thank you!

Author's Response: Hee, thank you! Very glad you enjoyed it :D

Reviewer: Dark-bill Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/16/10 11:31 am Title: Treat Me

whoa! waiting for final story!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: GiraffeJumper2008 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/14/10 06:50 pm Title: Treat Me

Aw, sweet and hot.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: EmilyExorsist Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/13/10 04:53 pm Title: Treat Me

Aw I was so so so happy to see this fic posted! It was just as perfect as I imagined and more! I loved Tom's shyness, it was adorable, exploring new things with Bill. The way Bill treats him makes me melt *___* I loved the use of 'baby', that always makes me squee but particularly in this fic, aw man it was so perfect!

Both your characterisations were PERFECT! The way you wrote was magic! Man my mind is fuzzy now, after a long day at work and lots of dancing AND this fic, I'm having trouble being coherent xD Basically, this fic was SO incredible to read! I'm such a fan of your writing, you never fail to amaze me ^___^ I'm REALLY looking forward to the third installment to this series :D

Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much ♥ Your reviews never fail to make me smile :D

Reviewer: green_and_blue Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/13/10 04:14 pm Title: Treat Me

Oh, that was SO GOOD.

I loved the whole installment, from the moment when Tom is trying to find Bull's address, still being doubtful if Bill really meant it when he invited him over, to the part when Gus opens the door and shatters Tom's poor self-confidence with his snarky comments about Tom's bumblebee outfit and then the part when Bill starts to behave like a true gentleman.... I adored that part very much, probably the most....when Bill is reassuring Tom of his veto right, acting basically as a responsible adult.

Age difference is such a turn on but even bigger one is all subtlety you portrayed Bill in this fic, his gentle, cautious and respectful way with Tom. I love stories like that. I just find it super sexy when an older character guides the younger, inexperienced one through the threshold of sexual experience so gently, slowly, taking their time.
Tom is such an adorable character too. You make him act his age which makes it pretty realistic. When he wrinkles his nose hearing Bill calling him cute was positively CUTE. So realistic.
Great work!
When should we expect third part?

Author's Response: I'm afraid the third part may be a little time away now as I have some more pressing commitments to get out of the way, but I've really been blown away by the response to these so I don't want to wait too long! Sometime in December hopefully? Thank you so much for the review - I'm squeeful over the points you picked out and how well they worked, so just thank you!

Reviewer: Ema21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/13/10 08:43 am Title: Treat Me

I LOVE the age difference!!! It's so sexy and naughty. My fav part is when Bill tips back into bed and Tom is on top of him and he doesnt know how to not squash Bill or what's correct... it's sweet. Awwww.
Tom is in for the ride of his life that night, he's completely taken with Bill and it's uber cute how Bill keeps complimenting him. Makes it seem like Bill is as turned on by the age difference as I am, probably loves the fact that he gets to corrupt a youngin. lol. Jks. Bill is a sexgod to Tom and you played it well.
Now I can't wait for the sexytimes in part3!! cuz the build-up here was amazing!
Well done. :)

Author's Response: Thank you ♥ I really enjoy writing the age difference so I'm delighted that you enjoy that. Bill is rather intoxicated with that pretty boy he's taken home, you're right; I think it's that he's revelling in teaching Tom when Tom's so receptive. So glad you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: PoorMedea Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/13/10 05:00 am Title: Treat Me

I'm so glad you wrote a sequel! This was just great...I love adorable, insecure little Tom.

Author's Response: Thank you!!

Reviewer: Maria Dane-Edwards Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/13/10 02:32 am Title: Treat Me

2nd pat is just as spectacular as the first. The way Bill showers Tom with sweetness is to die for. He's so gentle and obviously crushing just as bad as Tom. It's a breath of fresh air to be with someone who responds so passionately to him. Where everything is is wondrous and exciting.

Tom is gorgeous in his youthful way of trying to take in all his motions and feelings. Everything is new. He's never been in this position before Bill makes him feel like he's so special.
Bill's tempo is admirable. He has a keen sense of how far he can go observing Tom's reactions very well. He's sweet and Tom is lucky to have found Bill for a first of everything they go through of all these grown up stuff things :)
Look very much forward to part 3. *Maria

Author's Response: ♥ Thank you! This review really made me squee - you got everything I was hoping to convey in the fic. Thank you, thank you, thank you ♥!

Reviewer: ajavfore Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/13/10 01:37 am Title: Treat Me

Haaaa oh my. Neeext, whats next? Is bill gonna be bottom? Oh please! Or.. Nah. Tom should take the iniciative now. Go Tommy!

Author's Response: I'll think about it, lol!

Reviewer: xmoomin Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/13/10 01:18 am Title: Treat Me

Gah you. I logged on even though I wasn't even in the mood to read anything, and then I opened this and was like "ehh I'll just skim it and read it properly tomorrow" but of course ended up reading the entire thing. I know I already mentioned last time that I love the whole younger and/or bottom Tom thing, but you really write him so wonderfully and I just.. *___* This was definitely such a delightful treat to read. This series is wonderful, and you are wonderful, and I am just super happy right now just from reading this. XD;; Thank you! :)

Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much - I'm so happy if this fic was able to make you happy. I was hoping it'd be a real feel-good fic for readers so just thank you for letting me know!!

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