Date: 11/15/15 05:13 pm Title: Castaway
The story's great.I loved the end line. I so enjoyed reading.
Date: 10/04/11 06:54 am Title: Castaway
this was a really good story!
who was the person that tom saw push bill??
Author's Response: I haven't really decided that. It could be the ghost of Gustav, or a figment of Tom's imagination. It's up to the reader to decide. :P rnThanks for your review! ^^ I'm glad you liked it.
Date: 11/22/10 09:26 pm Title: Castaway
You did so well with this! I'm so glad how this remix turned out! Very well done!
I especially liked the little stuff you added that wasn't in the original like Bill stayed on the crate, too thirsty and exhausted to even move to the shelter of the jungle on the edge of the beach. That image made me luagh for some reason (in a good way)
Anyway excellant job and I'm so very glad to have had you as my remixer
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad the original author liked it this much! ^^
Date: 11/16/10 01:46 pm Title: Castaway
Oh wow! That was really good :O I was not expecting Bill to try and end it! I liked the way you wrote, very nicely done ^_^ I think this was a fabulous remix! and I LOVE the idea of Bill and Tom as castaways.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! ^^
Date: 11/15/10 08:56 pm Title: Castaway
I was a little confused by the shadow. Was that supposed to be Tom? I liked the beginning, though, and I could really feel the agony of being separated from someone you love.
Author's Response: No, the shadow was Gustav. I thought that was clear from the story; it was Gustav's voice and laughter he kept hearing, and the shadow had short blond hair. :P Anyway, thanks for the compliments! ^^
Date: 11/14/10 12:08 pm Title: Castaway
That was so heartbreaking! First they are lost on this island when everyone thinks they’re dead and then they are separated... I can’t believe they stayed away from each other for so long!! This fic, especially the laughing thing and the shadow scared me quite a lot... it was so weird and scary, but at the same time perfect for the situation. Who knows how we would react, being alone like that and on top of it, being separate from the person that matters the most. It was beautiful how Tom didn’t know for sure if he was real until Bill told him so. And the ending was really good, especially the last line with the silence that can finally be heard when they are reunited. This story was very well written and interesting, I was really into it! You did an awesome job with this remix, it goes very well with the original story :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much for all your compliments! ^^ You're going to make me blush...
Date: 11/12/10 09:14 pm Title: Castaway
you didn't explain why they've been apart for so long, was Bill insane? and what was that laughter thing? I didn't understand O_o
Author's Response: I did explain why they were apart so long; Tom was worried that Bill didn't want to see him anymore, since he saw that fear and anger in his eyes. And he felt like he wasn't real anymore. I don't know if Bill was insane. The laughter thing was Gustav's ghost, who also pushed Bill off the cliff at the end. :P I hope you understand it now! ^^
Date: 11/12/10 04:54 pm Title: Castaway
That was good. Good luck with the competition
Author's Response: Thanks BIBFTY! ^^
Date: 11/12/10 04:01 pm Title: Castaway
OMG!! I was sooooo scared!! I loved this! The fear, the sorrow, the insanity, I could really feel it! It made my heart squeeze!! I really loved this!! This was an amazing take on a great story! Best of luck in the competition!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! ^^ I'm glad you enjoyed it so much.