Date: 08/23/11 12:10 am Title: Chapter 2
This is amazing, I love the concept of this story, please continue, I know it would be amazing :)
Date: 06/05/11 07:56 am Title: Chapter 2
Hey, it really wants next chapters!! Itīs great!
Date: 03/31/11 07:39 am Title: Chapter 2
Are you going to continue this or is it kinda just...... done?
Date: 11/14/10 12:28 am Title: Chapter 2
He quickly became confused, however, when he noticed the two doors - which would usually say 'ladies' and 'gentlemen' - said instead 'human shells' and 'souls.' - Lmao, sounds like he ran into storage rooms, not bathrooms.
"We have a code red in the atrium, a code red in the atrium." - Eepies! At first I could've sworn that was because he went into the wrong door XD
Kuran is actually spelled Qu'ran. That's the proper arabic spelling.
The whole "copy of the body" thing is... interesting... XD
@description of Bill's human body: Okay now I'm feeling nauseous. What the fuck happened to poor Bill?! :(
Death's personality is... also interesting... XD
Before he had much time to ponder such a thought, though, he landed with a splat on the cold, hard pavement. - Oh shit, there goes the level 10 damage again :P
Author's Response: now here's the kind of review i like to see :) you quoted me directly, included a bit of constructive critcism, and overall had some quite interesting comments...thanks a bunch!! XD
Date: 11/13/10 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 2
This was… weird. Update soon. XD
Author's Response: ...i hope you meant weird in a good way...
Date: 11/13/10 10:32 pm Title: Prologue
"You're dead"
This story is going to be wonderful. I can already tell. >:D
Date: 11/13/10 06:59 pm Title: Prologue
That sounds really interesting! But ist Bill a she yet? Or did Gustav just meant the copy?
Author's Response: bahaha, gustav was just being facetious and referring to the copy to piss bill off XD
Date: 11/13/10 03:01 pm Title: Chapter 2
Haha this chapter amused me with Death trying to act all cool XD Can't wait to read more.
Date: 11/13/10 06:19 am Title: Chapter 2
this is GOOD!! :D... lol i can't stop laughing at bill...
Date: 11/13/10 01:45 am Title: Chapter 2
OMg it's really interesting can't wait :D
Date: 11/13/10 01:10 am Title: Chapter 2
Oh my! this goes better and better every minute.
I just loved Gusti, he's so nerdy. oh and Death? he/she/whateva seemed so nice, you know what? I kind of imagine a very handsome teenage boy underneath that hood (i know i'm silly) anyway, i'm sooooo intrigued 'bout why Bill's body was in such a deplorable state, what on earth could possibly happened?
Oh and btw i loved the super long chapter, i just love to never reach the end lol. so, super cool, i can't wait for more!!!
Date: 11/13/10 12:03 am Title: Chapter 2
I've never read anything else... quite like this...(sorry had to do that ^_^)This is so very different and again, looking forward to more!
Date: 11/12/10 03:11 pm Title: Prologue
Omg wryte faster it's really good :D can't wait :D
Date: 11/12/10 10:15 am Title: Prologue
Oh! I wanna read the rest! : )
Date: 11/11/10 11:54 pm Title: Prologue
OMG!!!! this is so damn good!!! the plot is so interesting, i hope just the actual chapters to be longer than the prologue.
I just have a question, does everybody in that room were supposed to hit hell? i mean, no heaven? maybe im asking something that's supposed to be cleared later, but still... sorry if it is =P
Anyway you both got me stucked to this fic, so 'till next update!
Author's Response: yes, the following chapters will definitely be longer, dont you worry! and no, not everyone in the Waiting Room is going to Hell, you'll see :)
Date: 11/11/10 11:25 pm Title: Prologue
Wow! This is so interesting! I like the idea a lot and I can't wait to read more!
Date: 11/11/10 10:54 pm Title: Prologue
O__O SOOO ready for more!
Date: 11/11/10 09:02 pm Title: Prologue
Was?!?! How many points does he need for Heaven?
Author's Response: exactly 777 :) since he has only 666, that's where we got the title one eleven from :)
Date: 11/11/10 08:38 pm Title: Prologue
Well this is one way to reel a reader in! I'm hooked and its only the prologue! Can't wait to read more.