Date: 08/11/25 03:14 am Title: What's Done in the Dark
I am a Chinese fan who came a bit late. Discovering this website is the happiest thing for me in recent years. I used to use bookmarking as commenting. I must say that I have read and bookmarked this story. Reading this story is undoubtedly a pleasure! Today I plan to leave a comment. Thank you for your story. You are an amazing writer.
Date: 12/09/10 02:30 pm Title: What's Done in the Dark
this was GREAT.
Date: 11/28/10 06:44 am Title: What's Done in the Dark
Ooh, I loved the atmosphere of this. I can just picture the hazy room, and Tom's confident smirk as he talks to Bill. The characterizations were just great here.
Date: 11/13/10 11:25 pm Title: What's Done in the Dark
This story is written like smoke hazy and very amorphous. It's beautiful.
Date: 11/11/10 10:50 pm Title: What's Done in the Dark
I didn't feel like that this one was all that different from the original. It wasn't bad; it just seemed fairly similar to the first story (a lot of the dialogue is the same, it's told from Bill's POV even in the third-person view).
Date: 11/11/10 04:45 pm Title: What's Done in the Dark
This was fabulous! I loved it! It was so nice to read, lovely language :) I like what you did with the fic, this is a really good entry! Smokey, hazy, sexy twins... what more could we want? ;)
Date: 11/11/10 02:31 pm Title: What's Done in the Dark
I really like reading this from Bill's point of view!I love their closeness and the characters in this fic. You did a good job with this remix!
Date: 11/11/10 02:20 pm Title: What's Done in the Dark
I'm pretty sure I read the original of this! I like this remix!! I love Bill's point of view, how he can't sleep. Best of luck in the contest!!