Date: 07/29/11 03:16 pm Title: Chapter 5 - A morning to think (II)
Really enjoying this story!
*snuggles her saved kitten*
Author's Response: *grins* Hope you'll like what's to come too :D
Date: 07/29/11 01:35 pm Title: Chapter 5 - A morning to think (II)
love the story so far cant wait for the next chapter and save the kittens!!
Author's Response: Haha! Yeah, let the kittens be saved! Well, I already have next chapter done, and part of the other one, so next update should go smoothly, not like the last ones *looks guilty*. Expect it to happen anytime from Monday till Thursday. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 07/29/11 12:44 pm Title: Chapter 5 - A morning to think (II)
Well, I guess Tomi better tell Bill what's up then. I hate that they both suffered so much and it's still happening. Twins torn apart is hard but Bill and Tom torn apart is even worse.
Author's Response: Tell me about it -_-'' I lost my own twin, so I know exactly how hard is having twins torn apart. You can't imagine how hard it was writing the first chapter, actually. Thanks for reviewing, btw.
Date: 07/29/11 12:25 pm Title: Chapter 5 - A morning to think (II)
awww i love you three tom :D
Author's Response: And I love you four! I didn't get the joke lol XD
Date: 07/28/11 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 5 - A morning to think (II)
They are saying it to each other with the same meaning but the things is they don't know they mean it in the way the other wants them to mean it. *sigh*
That was a mouthful that may have only made sense in my head >.
Author's Response: It did make sense XD. Well, you'll have to wait for next chapter to know if you're right or what. Hope you liked it anyway. I'm trying to portray believable tension, so I hope I'm doing a good job at it.
Date: 07/12/11 10:53 am Title: Chapter 4 - A morning to think (I)
Interesting. Am I right that Tom coming back affects som,ehow on Bill? His accident and all reflect to Bill someway? I hope Tom would tell Bill. I feel tyhat it needs to be told soon.
Author's Response: First things first. The bad way Bill is feeling is due to the lack of alcohol. He's been drinking since Tom died, which has been months, and he's been doing it heavily and daily, so that's just withdrawal effects.rnrnAnd what you said about Tom needing to tell Bill...well, he does need to share it, if only for his peace of mind :D
Date: 07/07/11 07:26 pm Title: Chapter 4 - A morning to think (I)
Hello! *waves* New reader here! Im so glad i found this story. I like the plot, its cute. And i like the way your going about the twincest thing. Most people either dont have enough of it or they overdo it. You dont jump into it too soon. you make it subtle, but its still there. its more realistic. Im rambling. Sorry bout that. i do that alot... cant wait for more!!!
Author's Response: First of all, thanks for the lovely review. It's sometimes hard to find a way to make things realistic, I just tried to imagine how I'd feel in that situation. It wasn't easy, I almost cried a couple of times, mostly writing Tom's death, but I hope it was worth it. I'm glad that you liked it so far. With any luck, you'll like the rest too :D
Date: 07/07/11 06:23 pm Title: Chapter 4 - A morning to think (I)
I'm wondering what is happening to Tom. Will he have to relive the accident? will it catch up with him?
Thank You
Author's Response: No, thanks to you. You'll sooner or later know what's going on with Tom, hopefully in the end it will make sense :D
Date: 07/07/11 05:02 pm Title: Chapter 4 - A morning to think (I)
Aww Tomi ;( He's so torn. Bill feels the same but it is hard to admit feelings when you are unsure how the other feels.
Author's Response: That, we'll have to see. For the moment Bill only sees Tom as a brother, at least that's what he thinks and so that's what matters for now :D Keep reading to know for sure!
Date: 06/30/11 11:45 am Title: Chapter 3 - Meetings
aww Tom is reliving his death :( but its an awesome story and the first 2 chapters made me cry :')
Author's Response: :D Thanks! I'm sorry to make you cry, though I guess that means I did well at writing the drama. More to come soon, hope you read it!!
Date: 06/30/11 09:52 am Title: Chapter 3 - Meetings
Poor Simone. That was probably something she never expected. :D
Even if thios is happy - kind of - I find this also utterly sad. It's like going towards the bitter end somehow, repeating things that happened and how can you say goodbye to someone you've already once lost? I lost my mom this spring, cause of illness, but anyway. It is incredibly painful memopry to have and I can so relate to Bill, when he remembered Tom's body. Those are images that will be scarred forever in memories.
Author's Response: Tell me about it. I know what a huge loss like that is, it was incredibly hard writing the first chapters, but at the same time, it was easy in a way, because I didn't have to imagine the feeling, just feel and explain. rnrnI don't think Bill will ever forget the pain from seeing Tom's body, lifeless. There are scars that stay on our bodies, minds and souls forever, though that's not necesarily a bad thing, either.
Date: 06/28/11 09:09 am Title: Chapter 3 - Meetings
Just what is going on with tom?! Can't wait to find out!
Author's Response: All in due time :D Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 06/27/11 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Meetings
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What is going on with Tom?
This is such a profound story and very well written, also.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Next update will most probably be on thursday, if things go as planned. I'm working on the story at the moment, so it should all go smoothly. About Tom...well, you'll have to wait to find out :P
Date: 06/27/11 09:05 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Meetings
That was so bittersweet. I'm so happy the twins are together again but wat does the pain and the sudden bruise mean. Tom's injuries are like phantome pains I guess they come and go but I think there might be more for poor Tom. I hope that if he tells Bill how he feels he will get to stay but I don't know ;( more soon then?
Author's Response: It will all have an answer in due time. And yes, more to come soon :D Probably next thursday. Thanks for reviewing!!
Date: 06/26/11 04:11 am Title: Chapter 2 - Dream come true
Not sure this is a believable way for Tom to come back, but its pretty hard to find a realistic way. And I'm not complaining that he's back! =) Thanks for the update, i am very much looking forward to more.
Author's Response: I think I stated in the genres that this is fantasy, so yep, no need for Tom to come back in a realistic way. The whole point was for it not to be realistic -_-'' Still, thanks for the review and hope you keep reading this.
Date: 06/22/11 04:38 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Dream come true
Damn... This one is so good :D
Update soon please! :D
Author's Response: Tomorrow is the next update :D Thanks so much.
Date: 06/20/11 05:24 am Title: Prologue
I got the impression that your life has been pretty messed and I'm sorry to hear that. Hopefully it all looks brighter now. I don't use msn, but if you have Twitter, you can find me there - @AmdeeFi :)
Author's Response: Well, they did get pretty fucked up. And I don't have twitter, but I'll create an account, sure :D
Date: 06/18/11 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Dream come true
Hey Dawn! I haven't followed this fic, but when i saw you updatinmg, I just had to go and read it all at once. It's nice to see you back here. :)
Awww, this started so sad. It alwaus breaks my heart to read other twin dying and other one being left here. It feels so wrong, somehow. I wonder what happened to Tom when he... well, died, assumingly. This fic screams for bittersweetness. This can turn out to be happy or sad and I'm not sure, which one I expect more.
Author's Response: I don't actually know, either. It will most probably end up bittersweet, but I still haven't made up my mind about that. A part of me wants happiness. Another, well, says it's not logical for things to end up happy -_-''rnrnI'm glad to be back too, things went awfully wrong this year, but now it seems I'm back on my feet :D Thanks for reviewing, and hope to see you around. Maybe on msn?
Date: 06/17/11 09:19 pm Title: Prologue
It's good so far :)
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. Hope you like the rest :D
Date: 06/09/11 12:29 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Desire
awwwwwwwwww it is so beutiful and amazing is there more? realy you..have write more!
Author's Response: Yeah, about that...I'm so sorry for not having posted more of this, but I have experienced a terribly bad case of writer's block, combined with lack of time and will to write. I'm working now on this story, so soon I should have enough written to start posting again. Thanks for commenting, and hopefully I'll see you soon reviewing new chapters :D