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Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/18/12 05:29 am Title: Chapter 8 - Made of you but not enough of you

this was a good story!
an so sad!
i cant wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/27/11 12:48 am Title: Chapter 8 - Made of you but not enough of you

ooh, good chapter, thanks for the update!

Author's Response: You welcome

Reviewer: lovestrong4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/17/11 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Made of you but not enough of you

next chapter please!! :) cant wait

Author's Response: Working on it. Sorry. Life is fucked up right now.

Reviewer: asahi Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/08/11 12:00 am Title: Chapter 8 - Made of you but not enough of you

Poor Bill :( He still seems scared that Tom will go away again. I would be confused too though. Feeling so strongly for someone is hard and difficult to come to terms with. When it's someone you aren't supposed to feel that way for it's even harder. I'm nervous about the consiquence to this is.

Author's Response: I would be terrified of losing Tom if I were Bill. It's normal to be still scared, I think we take for granted the things we have, even the most precious to us, and we don't realize just how precious and fragile they are until we lose them. It's easy to forget that we will all die one time or another. rnrnAnd I also guess that the realization that things are not as they were supposed to be, and the feeling that what you want is so so wrong, must be deeply disturbing. I'm evil I guess XD

Reviewer: Amdee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/02/11 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Made of you but not enough of you

So, everything is now out and open and it's all up to the relationship they are going to have. Oh Bill, think about it! Really! I have my hopes. :)

Author's Response: It's ok, you're allowed to hope. I'm a bit bitter at the moment with relationships, but I'm allowed to hope, so you're too.

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/01/11 04:47 am Title: Chapter 8 - Made of you but not enough of you

Thanks for the update!

Author's Response: You're welcome =)

Reviewer: LifeLoveMusic Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/30/11 08:00 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Made of you but not enough of you

Thank You

Author's Response: You welcome! I'll be working on it now that I have some free time. Hopefully next week I'll be able to post another update.

Reviewer: lalaabanana Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/30/11 03:17 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Made of you but not enough of you

it finally makes some sense to me lol :P

Author's Response: I know! It was hard to get what I had in my mind outside of it XD. I'm glad it makes sense now.

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/15/11 12:50 am Title: Chapter 7 - Half a promise

Well, I'm glad tom didn't die in this chapter! I can't wait for more, keep up the good work.

Author's Response: I updated now!

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/15/11 12:44 am Title: Chapter 5 - A morning to think (II)

the plot thickens...=)

Author's Response: It does...

Reviewer: Amdee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/16/11 04:42 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Half a promise

Don't feel weird about this. What this was, explained perfectly of what I was suspecting after all. I saw this coming, but I was just wondering if there is a catch I didn't see earlier. Some sort of twisted thing itr would turn this even more upside down.

It is always so bittersweet when their love is unrequited. Maybe...Just maybe in a future? After all of this there is not fulfillment for that? In a way it's really sad.

Author's Response: There is a catch, actually. It can turn this even more upside down, and it will. I guess your mind is as twisted as mine, since you seem to be the first person who gets what I meant.rnrnMaybe... Maybe is exactly what Tom's hanging onto. The fact that Bill did not hate him, that he was able to 'accept' it, somehow, albeit awkwardly. But there is more to come, and things just started to get twisted.

Reviewer: LifeLoveMusic Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/11/11 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Half a promise

Great! More Please

Author's Response: More to come next week for sure :D

Reviewer: rachel1stevens Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/10/11 05:35 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Half a promise

im glad tom asked bill out =] its cute and sweet :D

Author's Response: Well, it was either asking Bill what he really wanted to ask, and therefore confessing, or dying (again).

Reviewer: heleng Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/10/11 01:16 pm Title: Prologue

Can't wait to find out all about the promise and also whether Bill will change his mind about how he feels for his twin.

Author's Response: Oh well, that may take a week for the promise thing to be fully explained, but I think there may be one or two chapters after this, and then an epilogue of sorts, so not long until everything clicks into place.

Reviewer: LifeLoveMusic Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/07/11 10:47 am Title: Chapter 6 - Trying

Awesome. You totally need to explain the promise!
Will Bill die?

Author's Response: I will, when the time comes :D And no, God, Bill is in no way dying. His body is just reacting to the lack of alcohol after such a long time (5 months) drinking daily, and a fair amount at that.

Reviewer: Amdee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/07/11 10:04 am Title: Chapter 6 - Trying

I'm overall a fan of twins taking care of each other, so everything works for me. Yes, I'm innocent like tha

Author's Response: You, innocent? You're the farthest from innocent I can ever fathom. But yeah, I'm a sucker for hurt/comfort twins too.

Reviewer: Amdee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/07/11 09:55 am Title: Chapter 5 - A morning to think (II)

Hmm... Interesting. I'm sure we'll get some answers soon? And about the promise? I wish they could stay together forever...

Author's Response: Answers are coming already, if you really look closely. Actually, I thought people would see where this was going as soon as I posted the two latest chapters. The key was the 'promise' that Tom was failing to fulfill. Good luck breaking your brain with this :D

Reviewer: asahi Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/04/11 08:12 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Trying

I want Tom to tell Bill but yet... I'm afread of what will happen if he does.

I'm so sorry that you lost your twin. i couldn't imagine loosing someone so close to me. It was hard enough to loose my parents, I can't imagine if I had a twin.

Author's Response: It is hard, though it was long time ago. Birthdays are the worst, but meh, I find comfort in knowing we're still one. I live for both. Also, I'm sorry for the loss of your parents, I truly am. rnrnAs to the story, I want Tom to tell Bill too, so badly. I just love teasing them XD. But it will happen in the end, I'm sure. Just...can't tell you what the consequences will be -_-''

Reviewer: heleng Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/30/11 05:59 pm Title: Chapter 5 - A morning to think (II)

You have to write more. This is such a sweetly sad story.

Author's Response: Aw thanks! I am writing more, and I have an ending planned, so don't worry. There will be more next week sometime between Monday and Thursday.

Reviewer: LifeLoveMusic Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/29/11 07:45 pm Title: Chapter 5 - A morning to think (II)

Getting more interesting with each chapter!

Author's Response: I'm glad you think so! I'm trying my best to make this interesting, so reading this made my day!

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