Date: 04/30/23 07:37 pm Title: My Sign is Vital REMIX
I have left a review on other stories of yours, but wanted to say that I enjoyed this one too!
Date: 09/19/14 11:38 pm Title: My Sign is Vital REMIX
Tom must say it back!!
Date: 01/29/13 11:07 am Title: My Sign is Vital REMIX
I've read the otiginal, was very good, but I honestly prefer this version, good job darlin!
Date: 09/28/11 08:08 am Title: My Sign is Vital REMIX
This is like a really cool mirror image of the original My Sign Is Vital fic, perfect choice for the Remix Challenge. :) This is well written, and I really enjoyed reading this fic. Bill is a seductive little minx, how could Tom resist? Lol. You wrote Bill's POV amazingly and the two fics really belong together. Well done. :)
Date: 11/11/10 11:39 pm Title: My Sign is Vital REMIX
That was really good! I particularly like the way you described the dancing, it seems so real and I was able to picture it perfectly! The fic works with the song so well, it’s really well done. It was really sexy and intense, I really enjoyed this remix, good job!
Date: 11/11/10 07:26 pm Title: My Sign is Vital REMIX
Aw twins *__* I hope Tom does say it back to Bill the next day! This was really nice to read, I love first time twins and this was an awesome one :) Well done!
Date: 11/11/10 08:33 am Title: My Sign is Vital REMIX
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee *pauses for breath* eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee etc. etc.
This is perfect! I kind of like that you didn't change up too much from the original, because then I could put aside learning a new setting and just focus on the interactions between the characters. My favourite part in particular would have been the dancing in the club, it was sensual and gorgeous, and all of Bill's little plans happening as he wanted them to made me smile. C=
Thank you so much for writing such an awesome remix! *__* I can't wait to find out who you are.
Date: 11/11/10 12:27 am Title: My Sign is Vital REMIX
I liked how you told the story more from Bill's point of view. From what I could see, the original was more from Tom's. I'm not sure that this version was all that different from the original but it was well-written.
Date: 11/10/10 08:54 pm Title: My Sign is Vital REMIX
It was a delight.
Date: 11/10/10 05:35 pm Title: My Sign is Vital REMIX
Awww! This was very cute and sexy at the same time! I like the little show he puts on for Tom! Good luck in the contest!
Date: 11/10/10 02:00 pm Title: My Sign is Vital REMIX
Oh that Bill...what a sexy de-lish tease he is!! Who could resisit?
Date: 11/10/10 01:47 pm Title: My Sign is Vital REMIX
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