Date: 11/20/10 03:03 pm Title: Boys Gone Wild
I am probably going to sound a bit mean, but wasn't this just almost an exact copy of "girls gone wild"? Same dialogues and everthing.. Sorry, I expected a bit more..
Author's Response: Fair enough. It's your right to voice your thoughts. I was on an unfortunate time crunch so even I admit that this was awfully close to the original. I would hope my other works could live up to your standards. :)
Date: 11/12/10 02:44 pm Title: Boys Gone Wild
This was really really well written :D I'm still not SUCH A fan of first person narrative but wow, you really change my mind on that one xD I loved Bill's character, such a confident, likable character, and soooo sexy! Don't know how Tom lasted as long as he did tbh. But then, Tom's good at working wonders. This was such a good entry to the remix, I loved this, it was great ^_^
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I get having POV preference, I have my own, but I'm glad you were able to enjoy a different view. That is what I strive for in my writing after all. XD Plus, I've been really working on my characterization so your comment pleases my writer's ego greatly. Lolz! Again, thank you very much for reading and reviewing. :3
Date: 11/12/10 02:51 am Title: Boys Gone Wild
damn...
that was good XD
Author's Response: Why thank ya! XD
Date: 11/12/10 02:49 am Title: Boys Gone Wild
"All I could think of were six simple words that could be so dangerous coming from someone like me: This was going to be fun."
perfect. this could be the summary for the whole story. i love this Bill.
Author's Response: :D Maybe I should change the summery to just this line. ;D Anyway, thanks for reading! lolz!
Date: 11/11/10 09:17 am Title: Boys Gone Wild
That was hella hot!!! I didnt want it to end, but oh the things we can come up with using our imagination, thinking of all the delicious things Bill and Tom will do...
Author's Response: I considered continuing it but I was out of time and had to submit it. :/ But I hope your imagination is continuing to satisfy you beyond the story. ;)
Date: 11/11/10 03:31 am Title: Boys Gone Wild
Loved getting to read Bill's side of the story. And talk about sexy! ;D
Author's Response: Thank ya very much! Glad I could provide. ;D
Date: 11/11/10 12:08 am Title: Boys Gone Wild
Okay, I have to say that I don't know if I would have chosen the name Nana. Nana is a common name for a grandmother and, at first, I thought Bill's grandmother was trying to get him to go to the bar with her. It freaked me out until I realized that Nana was his friend, not his relative.
Also, the spitting grossed me out. I'm sorry - it just did. I know it was in the original (I scanned that one) but it just made me gag.
But, the writing was good and the story itself was very easy to follow so kudos for that.
Author's Response: As is now in the notes, it's pronounced Nah-nah. I'd been watching the anime Nana at the time and needed a name. -shrug-rnrnSorry, but like you said, it was in the original.rnrnAnd thank you for compliments otherwise, as well as for reading.
Date: 11/10/10 05:17 pm Title: Boys Gone Wild
o.O Okay the sex was freaking HOT!!! I really enjoyed this! Good luck in the contest!
Author's Response: :D Thanks! I didn't do well but oh well. Glad you.. enjoyed it. XD
Date: 11/10/10 05:01 pm Title: Boys Gone Wild
Hot, hot, HOT! I loved the original version of the fic, and yours is so absolutely phenomenal! You stayed true to Bill's character, and it was really fun hearing the story from his point of view. =)
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad to hear I didn't shame the original. :) Plus, I'm ecstatic to hear that you think I kept Bill's character true! I really worked on that. Thanks a tone! :D
Date: 11/10/10 04:17 pm Title: Boys Gone Wild
I really adore the original and I think you did a good job with this remix. However, I would have like it even more if it was a bit more different from the original fic, I thought it was a bit too similar. I think you could have add more of your own take on the story. But I really enjoyed reading it from Bill's point of view and the parts you added were interesting!
Author's Response: Thank you. And yes, I know, it was too similar. But time crunch left me with little brain storming time. But I'm glad you liked what was there. :)
Date: 11/10/10 02:22 pm Title: Boys Gone Wild
This was so much fun to read and hot to boot! Loved the original and this one definitely made it justice. I loved reading Bill's POV through this steamy encounter and seeing how he reacted to Tom's fumbling, heehee.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! It was fun to write. XD