Date: 11/10/10 03:41 am Title: Planetarium Sex REMIX
I loved it ^^
I loved the retelling of it from the manager's point of view, i thought it was so fresh and new.
If there was any criticism i would have, it would be that you could have gone your own direction with the storyline, and maybe had the manager more directly involved in the story instead of using the speech and changing the descriptions- but I thought it was absolutely amazing, you should be very proud. :]
Author's Response: Thank you so much ^^
xx Chi ^^
Date: 11/09/10 11:11 pm Title: Planetarium Sex REMIX
Het is so not something I usually read but that's why I love this challenge, it makes me read fic I wouldn't try on my own! This remix was entertaining ! It's interesting to read a fic from the point of view of someone outside of the band... I don't think I've read this kind of fic before, it's original!
Date: 11/09/10 06:49 pm Title: Planetarium Sex REMIX
wow, it's been SO long since i've read het! This was sweet, i liked it when they shared their secrets, who knew Bill changed his name twice? xD
Date: 11/09/10 06:49 pm Title: Planetarium Sex REMIX
wow, it's been SO long since i've read het! This was sweet, i liked it wwhen they shared their secrets, who knew Bill changed his name twice? xD
Date: 11/08/10 11:36 pm Title: Planetarium Sex REMIX
I was a little confused. It took me awhile to catch on to who was telling the story. I liked the idea of telling it from the point of view of someone completely outside of the story, though.
Date: 11/08/10 07:39 pm Title: Planetarium Sex REMIX
This was interesting! I like the take of the manager sneaking up and watching them!! Good luck in the competition!