Date: 01/15/12 05:38 pm Title: Fear and Love
AMAIZING CHAPTERS..........I DIDNT WANT IT TO FINISH :)
PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOOON :)
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK :)
Author's Response: Working on a new chapter already, I hope when it comes out it will be as good as everyone hopes
Date: 05/01/11 04:09 pm Title: At The Park..
Awe I liked it, its a little weird but in a good way and I liked it. I can't wait for more and find out what will happen next. I think Tom and Clara would make a cute couple. Please keep up your great writing and update real soon I can't wait for more^-^
Author's Response: hopefully this next update wont take too long now that school is almost over for the summer. :3 ~gives a basket of cookies and glitter~ I'm glad you like it though
Date: 11/08/10 07:22 pm Title: The Offer
Well done! I like the summary redone, I ma sorry because of my remarks that u have to rewrite =[ but the first chapter seemed good so I don't want this to go to waste hon. Can't wait to see wat happens when Georg and Tom meet again. Also how will Clara take it. Keep going thanx for the speedy updates ^_^
Author's Response: ^.^ np i try to keep up to speed with my readers its just hard with my schooling at whatnot but *stands up proudly* i shall not let anyone down
Date: 11/08/10 10:20 am Title: Meeting Him
Thanx for the gift, I would just like to say something on a gut feeling...plz don't rush this,draw or plot out and draw us in with a wonderful plot. I dont want this to be like other fics I first read and u find out wat happens after the first 2 chapters and then I get bored. So keep us on our toes and guessing, but no pressure love, if u like us to help but if I am harsh tell me as well. Good luck, I like to review so give me something ha =p
Author's Response: i will have to rewrite chapters but i think i can make it work
Date: 11/08/10 01:46 am Title: Meeting Him
Not bad... Let's see how this goes down.
Author's Response: thanks for your review heres your bottle of bill sparkles and a small tin of cookies *hands you the neatly wrapped box*
Date: 11/07/10 11:42 am Title: Meeting Him
Well, not a bad start but just a few small issues. Keep going.
Author's Response: criticism is welcomed positive and negative so i can improve in future chapters