Date: 02/18/12 11:09 am Title: He's a bit sharp
I love it when people tell me SOMETHING in their reviews instead of just "love it" because as much as I absolutely adore the lovey-dovey posts I actually learn something from the other type of review snd that makes me a better writter :)
Author's Response: I agree, I love short and sweet reviews but I adore when the ones where details are pinpointed and discussed, it gives me a greater insight as to the reader's interpretation of my work and I enjoy it very much. But love it is always fine haha Thanks for the review, means lots to me.
Date: 02/13/12 05:57 am Title: He's a bit unorthodox
Your cliff hangers kill me. There were some slight spelling/wording issues but for the most part another AMAZING addition to this every twisting journey!
Author's Response: Yes, I was sure there will be some or far more than a few spelling errors as at 5AM my mind is not as attentive. Nevertheless I have corrected my mistakes, thanks for bringing it to my attention and thanks for taking the time to review...it means a lot to me.
Date: 02/04/12 12:28 am Title: He's a bit inconsiderate (of his brother)
Gah! Please don't leave us hanging there too long!! I need to know what happens next or I might die of anticipation.
Author's Response: Well, is available now :-) I dearly hope you enjoy it and find it to be worth the wait. I've chosen to update more consistently and have been doing so a little bit...hopefully I can succeed there. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 01/19/12 04:58 pm Title: He's a bit inconsiderate (of his brother)
X_X jesus this chapt is amazing*_*
Author's Response: Thanks, that means lots to me.
Date: 01/16/12 05:46 pm Title: He's a bit inconsiderate (of his brother)
Is it Tom that still wants Jensen!? Or someone else? I'm so confused! Hope for another update soon. I'm glad you updated again.
Author's Response: Yes, it was Tom. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 01/16/12 04:03 pm Title: He's a bit inconsiderate (of his brother)
Wow! Chapter after chapter, u still wow me. I can't get enough of this =)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your words, I really find it very invigorating to get such nice feedback from my readers.
Date: 01/16/12 01:33 pm Title: He's a bit inconsiderate (of his brother)
CANT WAIT FOR MOOOORE :)
PLEASE UPDATE SOOOON :)
Author's Response: Already did, hope you like it. Thanks for the review.
Date: 01/16/12 10:49 am Title: He's a bit inconsiderate (of his brother)
Ohhh man really wanna know what happens next!
Author's Response: Already posted, of course is probable you've noticed ;) Thanks for the review.
Date: 12/25/11 07:30 pm Title: He's a bit enslaving
Fantastic sex scene! I've been trying for days to get this read & now i've finally done it lol. I seriously can't get enough of this story...I love the ending lines.
Author's Response: Oh thank you, I was so nervous about the scene so I'm extremely glad you find it to be a good one. I think about my closing lines a lot, sometimes before I start in a chapter, sometimes seconds before finishing. I definitely aim for a group of crucial words to close the chapter because many times is that last line that ultimately makes the next chapter worth reading. Of course most often I'm inclined to end with cliffhangers, is a guilty pleasure. Thanks for reviewing, I'm extremely grateful.
Date: 12/18/11 05:46 pm Title: He's a bit enslaving
I think saying that they loathe each other is the closest they'll ever get to saying, "I love you." Which is fine by me because those three words are becoming so over-used and losing their true meaning. Anyways, it was about time for them to get this out of their systems.
Author's Response: Well yes, but they meant it. And I agree, those three words are toss around far too often and far too easily. Thanks for the review.
Date: 12/18/11 03:55 pm Title: He's a bit sharp
Fantastic...One of the best scenes I've ever read...I usually always skipped through "those" parts, but the words, the emotion; all felt...
very good! Lol!
Can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: Glad you liked it, it was an intensive writing process HAHA.rnThanks a million for the review, they always mean so much to me.
Date: 12/18/11 03:19 pm Title: He's a bit enslaving
REALLY REALLY NICE CHAPTER....WELL DONE:)
UPDATE SOOOOOOON :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much, and thanks for the review.
Date: 12/11/11 12:03 am Title: He's a bit insincere
PLEASE UPDAT SOON! YOUR FIC IS ONE OF MY FAVOURITES AND I CANT WAIT TO READ THE PASSION THE ARE HOLDING...
Author's Response: I'm honestly trying my hardest to finish the chapter soon, possibly by the end of this week. It is a rather long chapter and very demanding in means of writting but I'm nearly at its end and hope to have it complete within days. Bear with me please, it is by far the longest and hardest chapter I had to write and I'm trying my best to post it as soon as possible.
Date: 12/03/11 07:55 am Title: He's a bit sharp
THIS IS AWSSOME I hope you finish It :)
Author's Response: Thank you, I plan to do so :-)
Date: 11/07/11 11:34 am Title: He's a bit insincere
So good!! I hope you don't plan on leaving us hanging for too long!
Author's Response: I really didn't plan on it but considering the particular chapter and knew it was a possibility and so I apologize for my delay and I hope you can enjoy the new chapter. I just post it, with luck the site approves it within a few short hours and then you'll be able to ready it, again I hope you find it to be worth the wait. Thanks for the review, and I'm looking forward to your feedback, always I'm.
Date: 11/02/11 11:14 am Title: He's a bit insincere
Ive been waiting so long for this! :0 it may be twisted that they want to be together but at the same time its so right! I am torn between whats wrong And whats right.
Author's Response: I sometimes feel the same way, but I let my characters' design and what defines them inspire me...quite often is very whimsical what their twisted relationship can inspire me to write. Thanks for the review, means lots to me.
Date: 10/31/11 02:03 pm Title: He's a bit insincere
I can't believe he faked being sick, what a prick. Still I loved him in that ending part, so unexpected.
Author's Response: Thanks :-)
Date: 10/28/11 12:53 pm Title: He's a bit insincere
I love it :)
Author's Response: Thanks, that means the world to me.
Date: 10/28/11 12:47 pm Title: He's a bit insincere
:D....
That's all I can say right now.
Author's Response: And I take kindly to it, thanks :-)
Date: 10/28/11 04:37 am Title: He's a bit insincere
First of all, yay! An update! Second of all, holy crap! The ending was a pleasant surprise. I can hardly wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I love when I get to surprise my readers and I never aim to be tedious but just that, unexpected. The new chapter is finished and posted, as soon as the site approves it you'll find out what happens next ;-)